Green Mountains in the Palm of Your Hand

It was okay before, a standard story about a couple farming, but recently it feels like the author has changed, and the writing style has changed drastically. The couple has become more and more disloyal. Like Conan, they go wherever they go, and they don't farm much anymore. The plot of the first 150 chapters is harmonious and the characters are well-rounded. Although there are occasional small pitfalls, it can be seen that the meticulous care is taken. After one hundred and fifty chapters, the plot becomes stiff, the style changes suddenly, and the plot advances slightly faster. I give four stars. I hope the author will be calm, thoughtful, write slowly, look back at his book, savor it carefully, resume the previous rhythm in the next few chapters, and write better works!

A novel about cultivating immortality with a slow pace and no poisonous points. The writing is ordinary, and the plot cannot escape the framework of a mortal's journey to immortality. The author seems to be trying to portray a cultivator who is a dull farmer, but the current plot still lingers in the category of traditional cultivators who kill and seize treasures. It's not bad to have a Taoist companion who shares life and death together, but it's a pity that the author's usual writing style did not make good use of this highlight. Let me tell you, cultivating immortals and farming has great potential. One is the ecological construction of immortal plants. Similar to "Maze Rice", the author constructs an ecosystem in the world of immortality. The growth environment of different spiritual plants, unique tastes, special effects, and strange ecology can be written about. The protagonist of the farm is how to build these environments in the hills and build ecological farmland and three-dimensional agriculture where animals and plants coexist harmoniously. There are also the development of new spiritual plants, the hybridization of spiritual plants to cultivate Mendel, and later genetic engineering to achieve ecological improvement. This places great demands on the author, and I dare not expect too much. The second is differentiated competition, where others fight life and death for the treasures of heaven, materials, caves, and relics of their ancestors. The protagonist enters the secret realm for ecological research, writes a secret realm environmental investigation report, and collects seeds of heavenly materials and earthly treasures. It is too unimaginative to limit Qingshan Jue to a fixed acceleration time. It can depend on the environment. The more suitable the ecological environment of the spiritual plant, the faster the acceleration. The spiritual plant will show different characteristics in different ecological environments. That Second Young Master Xu is not a genius. He was recruited to analyze the components of spiritual plants. It would be too unimaginative to use them to make elixirs. The spiritual plants are used to make medicinal diets, salads, and dishes; they extract medicinal properties for molecular analysis, and make potions, rubbings, and injections. So I say, there is great potential for cultivating immortals and farming. Taoist couples can write, I want to see the sweet love, the broad understanding of life and death, the emergence of personality charm, the daily looks at each other, and the natural love blowing in the wind. The author's writing style in this area needs to be strengthened to make it more comfortable to read.

This is the first time I read this kind of novel about cultivating immortals and farming. I have to say that it is very enjoyable. There are the fights and killings of cultivating immortals, and the leisure and comfort of farming, supplemented by daily love and eating sweets. The combination of these is quite interesting... In addition, the book is also well written. Regardless of the storyline or the characterization, it deserves five stars... The only shortcoming is that it is too short! ! !

The early writing was a bit long-winded, but after reading it patiently, I found that it was actually pretty good. The male protagonist likes to live a subsistence life and develop slowly, so he can't rush it. I hope that the follow-up will be more and more exciting. I will write more about the training of cultivating immortals and less about trivial things in the mortal world. After all, this is a novel about cultivating immortals. There is no need to spend too much money on convenience. I will write more about adventures, opportunities, adventures, and fantasy cultivation. I can give it an 8 points at the moment. Come on!

There are many truths, many insights, many worldly feelings, and a very special writing technique that is refreshing. I believe many people are deeply impressed by the rich man and the rooster! She also prefers the young couple to play with each other, and the emotional description is particularly accurate! It's like watching a movie, the picture is very strong!

First of all, this is a slow-burning article. Fans of cool articles should not read it. Boss Qian and Yang Guangzhi in front of me made my eyes shine. They are really good articles. [Adore][Adore] Chapter 230 was well written before and then the plot started to fall apart. I only read it in Shuhuang. I heard they said that the author is a woman. Well, I thought some of the plots were very similar to the illogical plots of women's videos. It was similar to the plot of the Mahayana period where I was spread rumors by a girl practicing Qi and tried to prove my innocence [vomit]. Generally speaking, I can watch it.

Highly recommended! The single female protagonist seems very interesting so far. The author is more rigorous. The male protagonist is not invincible but very cautious. He is still with the female protagonist but has not established a relationship. The female protagonist has gradually developed a crush on the male protagonist but the male protagonist has no idea yet. Let's see how to advance the relationship line later. The female protagonist and male protagonist have distinct personalities, as well as the boss Qian. I feel that the author is good at characterizing!

Needless to say, this book is quite interesting, with a grand view of the world, seasoned life experience, and rich emotional expressions. Half farming, half traveling, the single female protagonist is always by her side and the emotional line is quite good.

I have read several works by this author, and they are definitely top-notch with single female protagonists. I like Pure Love the most and must give it five stars, and the female protagonist has a lot of roles. However, the author is probably a female, and I don't know much about boys' psychological thoughts and physical details, but they are insignificant. Some of the emotional changes are really well written. Okay, and I think the most important thing for a single female protagonist is to write about their respective positions in each other's hearts. The more they like each other, the more possessive they are, the better. Some small thoughts are meticulous about each other. This is true for both male and female protagonists. However, the female protagonist's is well described. Maybe I haven't seen the male protagonist's, but I believe the author will write it.

As a picky old bookworm, I can responsibly say that this is a good book, about farming and leisure, about cultivating immortals, and about a single heroine. Every character in it is very interesting. I just don't know why others gave it a low rating, and I feel sorry for the author.

Read Chapter 234, it's so well written, the protagonist is a human being, not bullied, not a coward, nor has a special number, the heroine is not stupid, and she is protected by King Tiger (Brother Tiger). She does not forget her roots, and every character is not broken. The protagonist will not keep people who really want to kill him, and will not kill people with some conflicts, such as Yang Guangzhi. He is humane, like Qian Laocai, which highlights the shrewdness and wisdom of being a rich man, and the protagonist will not leave his real name in certain situations; The protagonist's appearance is also decent, and he treats the heroine normally and not unfairly. The heroine is not stupid and sweet, she has the process of becoming stronger. The heroine's appearance is also good, the hero is not a scumbag, he is not the kind of woman who can't be seen, and Brother Tiger is really domineering. The comments will change because I will continue to read them. This is my best novel except Kunpeng and the Three Spiritual Stones Opening a Business Meeting. Chapter 415: The battle with Xuan Zun is over, everything is beautiful, the Novice Village is over, the next stop is the Dao Realm, the Five Emperors, the Six Dao Realm plots, the increase in cheats, the Divine Axe, and the Sky Eye, overall it is very good

Everything is good except for the rooster in the scene. Almost every character has a little love. I really want to deduct one star because of the rooster. I really can't bear it. The writing is really good and the protagonist's character currently fits the setting. It's just too little. I'll watch it in half a year.

This is a very nice book. It's a bit light-hearted. The biggest highlight is that the characters are full-bodied and vivid. They are not the same type of characters. Each one has its own characteristics (except for the supporting characters of course). The male and female protagonists can also score more than 8 points (out of 10 points) for their daily routine. It is not embarrassing or artificial. It is quite good-looking. I stayed up late to read it for three days [laughing]

The first two hundred or so chapters are very leisurely, a bit like Patriarch Chen Xun but not too much, and have their own style. The plot is well laid out and the characters are well described with flesh and blood, especially the relationship with the heroine is developed step by step. This book is very in line with my taste. Unlike other novels that are either about practicing elixirs or weapons or about secret realms, there is a sense of boredom that you cannot feel. After reading it for a long time, it will break out, even if the content is very attractive to you. It's just that in the last few dozen chapters, my cultivation level has risen too fast. After practicing Qi, I wrote more than a hundred chapters to build the foundation, and then built the foundation to the Nascent Soul. I can't remember dozens of chapters (it's almost a hundred, I can't remember). After I finished writing, I felt a sense of gap. There is also the pig's foot breaking through the Nascent Soul, which I think is a difficult point to write. After all, there is no spiritual root (I don't know if I have read it, I usually like to read your novels when I am ready to go to bed, and I usually feel sleepy) But author, why haven't you updated in the past few days? ! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] Please fill it in for me! ! ! (No 🥚) I started reading novels in the fifth grade of elementary school and now I am in my third year of high school. This is the first time I have reviewed a long review. If there are any bad things to say, please feel free to comment [send heartfelt] Also, wasn't the protagonist a special soldier in his previous life? I wrote about it before, but now the author seems to have forgotten it. For example, the kung fu of a special soldier can be integrated into the skills to become more powerful, and some gun-type elements can be added to the weapon training to catch the enemy by surprise. But don't be too powerful, otherwise it will be boring, or the power will be too restrictive.

Very sweet! The heroine has a lot of scenes. The author said let's see what a 100% heroine is. The heroine has as many scenes as a female protagonist!

I have been looking for a similar single-female farming story for a long time, but I can hardly find it. I hope the author will persevere [Sending my heart]

The male protagonist can create and cultivate immortality without spiritual roots (although he has golden fingers, but they are not big), and the female protagonist is even more capable of practicing Tai Chi through the soul of the male protagonist. During the low point, there are extraordinary helpers from the Demonic Tiger King and Qian Laocai. Among the supporting characters are Xu Ziming, the genius of alchemy, the rebellious rooster and the rebellious divine axe, both of which are quite exciting, as well as Bai Xiaohe's loyalty and Wang Cifeng's good causes but bad consequences! Anyway, this immortality novel has a different essence and style, and the writing style is outstanding! Worth collecting and subscribing!

It's so beautiful. Every time I think about it, I say in my heart that I'll just live it up and don't wander around. Then I'll cause some trouble for myself. I say in my heart that I just want to farm. As a result, when others come to you, you have no choice but to agree. Others have kidnapped you morally, but you agree again, haha.

A very good light-hearted article, highly recommended for those who want to read it with their brains in mind. Tomato's review section is quite chaotic, especially for a book I read last time, which had so many positive reviews, but ended up being so messed up that I was so angry that I left a negative review. I have been reading books on Tomato for a long time. How should I put it? Although most of the books are routines, there are some very good authors who, although they are not popular, write really good books. It is really difficult to define whether a book is good or bad. For me personally, this book is indeed very good. It is very suitable to my liking. The attitude towards life expressed by the author through words can resonate with me.

I think it's quite interesting. I rarely watch the Mortal Cultivation Series. This one is one of the few that I can watch. The plot of the ordinary Mortal Series is too slow and the emotional line is not obvious or there is no emotional line at all. It has the feeling of a stand-alone game. I personally don't like it very much. But I quite like this one. The plot with the emotional line is also very good.

There are some details that should be added, and there could be more words. For example, when refining weapons, some formations should be added. Generally speaking, the book on alchemy techniques is very good. Keep up the good work.

Rest assured, this pair of CPs is definitely a textbook-level "one and only" in terms of loyalty. Marriage first, love later → Go in both directions: From the confrontation of "You are not my husband" to the dependence and protection of "Brother Che", the sweetness of the relationship continues to heat up. Strong alliance + mutual redemption: Jiang Che protects his wife and Su Qingtan heals. The two are each other's weakness and armor, growing together. Fireworks Daily + Hot-blooded Combat: Taking into account the warmth of farming and the passion of cultivating immortals and fighting monsters, the style is easy to heal. In the later period of this work, the author abandoned the core setting of Qingshan Meridian's water and earth powers: The signature metaphysical scenes at the beginning, such as spiritual planting, palming the ground to draw springs, and the spiritual energy of mountains and rivers, have shrunk. They originally relied on supernatural powers to solve problems, but instead relied on connections, court games, and sect power to win. Spiritual power has been reduced to a background, and the rules of practice are unclear. It has been abruptly transformed from a rural metaphysics farming story to a court power-seeking story, and the subject matter is seriously fragmented. The original ability upgrade line is unfinished, and most of the foreshadowing of the mysterious mountains and rivers and ancient green mountains scriptures that were foreshadowed in the early stage are invalid, and old readers have lost their anchor point for reading. The ending was barely passable: only the emotional line kept its original intention, and the male protagonist and the female protagonist stayed together to have a happy ending. They kept the bottom line from the beginning to the end and did not fail in the relationship.

This path is indeed unique. The single heroine is also very good, but the sweetness is a bit too sweet. [Laughing and crying] I will read some mindless pretense and cool novels first.

I really like the subject matter and the author's writing is very fluent. The first point of complaint is that the author said that the male protagonist is illiterate and can read letters later. The second protagonist feels really weak and timid to me, but relatively realistic. I feel that the single female protagonist more or less limits this article, and the strength of the protagonist is the single female protagonist. I confessed that I didn't teach the male protagonist any skills until now, and I have taught him Dazzling Hundred Blossoms. In my opinion, the male protagonist's farming skills are more or less useless. As a senior reader of male videos, I have three wives in the world and I can do with it.

The writing is smooth and natural. The author uses delicate brushstrokes to depict the beautiful scenes of immortality cultivation, from the mysterious fairy mountain pavilions to the dangerous secret abyss, all seem to be presented before the readers' eyes. The descriptions of the cultivation techniques and battle scenes are even more exciting and exciting, making readers feel as if they are immersed in the world of cultivating immortals and feeling the blood and passion of the world of immortality. The emotional lines are rich and delicate. Not only the protagonist's heroic ambitions on the road of cultivation, but also the deep friendship with relatives and friends, as well as the faint love line. These emotional elements are intertwined, adding a lot of warmth and touch to the story, making the entire novel more three-dimensional and full. In short, it is a rare masterpiece of a novel about cultivating immortals. It is excellent in terms of plot, characters, writing style and emotion. It is highly recommended to all readers who like the theme of cultivating immortals!

After reading it, I have to say that it is a generally good book, and it was very enjoyable to read in Gulanxing. The plot after reaching the advanced world is very ordinary. My suggestion is to change the book after reading Gu Lan's content. The content of Gulanxing is worth reading.

There are definitely some flaws, but they are usually just some details or individual plots, which do not affect the overall reading for me. The overall story is good and smooth. This is the first farming novel I have read on Tomato. I can't comment on whether it is cliche or not. Four stars, please encourage the author.

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To be honest, this kind of slow-paced novel has a lot of fun, and is more interesting than many cool novels. Each character in it has his own thoughts, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very well matched. To be honest, it is really good. It starts low and goes high, and the author's alternative ideas are very good.

There is a fantasy, magnificent, traditional and simple world of monks, and it is also embellished with very down-to-earth details of life, which doubles the sense of immersion and reality in the fictional novel. The ups and downs of the plot also show that the author is a master storyteller and has a big imagination.