Transformed into a White-Haired Villain, Feng Aotian Panicked

It's so good, author, please don't stop updating it, oh oh oh~ please❤️ I'm too lazy to spray. Where can I pull the thread?

(These are some of my opinions on this book. Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book is worth reading. There are spoilers later!) It took me nearly a day to read this book. The writing of this book is really good. The development of the two heroines in the early stage is very stable and it is very comfortable to read. However, in the middle stage, the pull between the two heroines of Xifengtai is really worrying, but if you think about it, both sides do have their reasons. From Mu Ruxue's perspective, she did suffer betrayal in her previous life, and after Luo Li learned that he could make up for the missing pieces at the Phoenix Washing Platform, he was apparently friendly to Mu Ruxue in his previous life, but actually harbored evil intentions. Mu Ruxue could indeed be very suspicious of the heroine. From Luo Li's point of view, she didn't know that Mu Ruxue was reborn, and she told a white lie at first, but it was a bit self-defeating in the end (although I feel that Mu Ruxue and Luo Li would have gone the same way whether or not she told this lie. After all, Mu Ruxue was too suspicious, and she looked at the problem with the answer, so she suspected that Luo Li was fake. This is what made me particularly worried). My complaint: The heroine is too kind-hearted. If I meet someone like Mu Ruxue, who has a dark heart and is immature, then run away. Who can have the system to resurrect like the heroine (although not being resurrected does not constitute a crematorium for chasing a wife), so that it reaches the point where The little senior sister at the back is like the gentle big sister next door (wu🌫️), and she can play straight to seduce Luo Li. She said "I will be lonely when you are not here", which makes people's hearts itch. Moreover, the heroine is so good to the little senior sister, how can she let the little senior sister go. Recommendation: The logic is rounded out, and the writing is really good. I personally like to watch pull-ups, and the writing is good (but a little anxious). The little senior sister is also great. I really like this character. I have written a lot. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more, and he can write his own inner works.

To be honest, it's quite interesting to watch, the two people's bumpy love journey, and the interesting things during their cultivation. The young couple's mutual abuse is quite interesting! The only regret is that the author is not very confident in his writing and quickly draws an ending afterwards. I can only say that it is a pity. The characters of these two protagonists are really to my liking! Regardless of the ending, this is a highly recommended book.

The language is fluent and unobstructed, the descriptions are accurate and easy to understand, and the reading experience is good, but there are many typos. The characters are three-dimensional, vivid and deeply rooted in people's hearts. Luo Li, who has been fighting his fate and struggling hard, Jiang Cai'e, the blond loser who makes people feel sorry for him, is reborn and lives another life, and Mu Ruxue finally finds the love in his heart after many twists and turns. The determination to save others, the entanglement of the two people's fate in Xifeng Pond, the hearty duel in the sect competition, the pursuit after awakening, the will to fight against the invincible dead things, the confession on the Ferris wheel in the illusion, and the ending that the two have not yet finished waiting for the author to write. The picture painted by the author is simple and clear, without too many descriptions, but it evokes endless associations. This book is indeed good, but the genre may be relatively popular. Readers are advised to determine their preferences before reading. It is really worth recommending.

The story is about a hundred changes, the writing is excellent, the descriptions of women's clothing and bodies are spot on, and there is very little description of female abortion. The heroine and the second heroine traveled through time and again and were reborn. It started out sweetly, and then they started to cut each other without having a mouth. After the separation of life and death, they started to cut again, and then it started to get sweeter, and the author stopped updating. . . All I can say is that the plot is okay, the emotions are well drawn out, and the descriptions are full of details. According to the plot, half of the book is not finished, which is a pity. I will save it in case it is updated.

It's pretty good, but the main character is flirty without realizing it. It feels weird to say some flirty words without realizing it after giving something away, but that's a minor problem.

I read it all night! ! ! Let's talk about the most impressive thing first. It's the first time for Lao Yu to write about the crematorium of Chasing His Wife. To be honest, it's a bit flavorful, but Su's writing style and foreshadowing are still inferior compared to that of The Wife of a Senior Cook. But Su's first time writing like this is really worthy of a 9:00 twilight review. The reason why I didn't get full marks is because I It was frustrating to watch Two Little Bitter Melons. I was ooohing and ahhhhhh watching it before the 150th chapter, but after finishing it, I actually returned to the youth version of Sweet Little Luo in a strange and dazzling way. I like the humble Xiaoxue. I like it but not wow enough, but that's right. Lao Luo is only 16 years old, so what can I expect. Between the two pitiful characters, I actually feel more sorry for Xiaoxue. As I said before, the setting of not having Phoenix Blood appear is sweet to the core and very beautiful. It would actually be okay if both of them are willing to be honest after the appearance (commonly known as long-mouthed). I feel internal injuries for not confessing. The reason why I feel more sorry for Xiaoxue may be because I really can't accept that the "beautiful, strong and miserable" heroine is still tortured like this. I feel so sad.

Can you please stop writing about the knife? Obviously as long as everything is explained clearly, there will be no development like this. I want to see a sweet love, not the foggy feeling you guessed and I guessed. I don't want the protagonist and the heroine to be confused. Onegue, they can do anything [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful, and it's really rare. To be honest, it's a pity that this book doesn't include a harem story, but it's easy to write about Lily's harem. This book is particularly suitable for writing a harem story as a foreshadowing for each female character's social relationship. It's just a pity.

The writing is okay. I saw this book before. I just read a few pictures and found that there were a lot of blocking points, so I stopped reading it. I came back to read it later. The author has changed a lot of small flaws, but there are still quite a few. I hope the author will write well in the future, polish it, and come up with the plot. Otherwise, if there are too many revisions, it will be messy [laughs]

The character design is very good, the plot is also good, funny and sweet, but the Blood Phoenix Sutra in the middle is too uncomfortable to watch. Even if you don't have a third-person perspective, you should be able to spot the problem. The overall look and feel is good, nice to look at

It can be seen that the author pays more attention to logic in plot arrangement and writing. Since the break between the two took a lot of chapters to pave the way, I hope that the subsequent interaction and plot of the two protagonists can continue to be exciting and unconventional.

My little Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how delicious his writing is? After reading it, my depressed Q child no longer has OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to see 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author, and Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and the OS finally lets me see something good. Loading is also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not old-fashioned at all, it's awesome and it ends the game directly. ! It's awesome, ok, ok, I just look at the author's one, one is one, two, two is four, four, forty six, seven, seven, forty-nine, okay, it's really good, so I'll read it.

It's very interesting to watch. I really want to watch the plot after that. Unfortunately, the author wrote too little. It's really not enough. The interaction between the two heroines is also very good, and the emotions are also written very delicately. The descriptions of the surrounding masters, sisters and brothers are also very vivid and three-dimensional.

It's pretty good, but the plot is a bit toxic at times and there are a lot of typos, but it's really good and worth watching.

Very fresh theme, I like it very much, recommend it

I'm running out of books, so I thought I'd just read it. I didn't expect it to be quite popular. It's pretty good. It's the first time I've read this type of book. Chasing Wife Crematorium has a bit of sadism and some sugar. The ending is too hasty, but there really isn't much to write about [Thoughts]

Good-looking is good-looking. The plot is also very coherent. The characters are also very likable. But the shortcoming lies in the system. Gifted items can be given again to obtain higher rewards. And if you treat guests to parties every day, you can gain martial arts experience. Please ask more often. All skill proficiencies can be maxed out. Isn't there a fusion technique later? Brush several times. The highest integration of all. And the pills with infinite superposition of cultivation base. Practicing the exercises can also improve your cultivation level. The source of the elixir was not mentioned. How could my parents, two innately powerful people, get so many top-quality elixirs? Everyone will be surprised. So is Reborn Supreme. Then why didn't they ask the protagonist why there were so many pills? The above is all me. Own point of view. There are too few ambiguous plots. It takes 50 photos to kiss~~ Sticking out his tongue, he failed. Thinking that destiny cannot be violated. So there is a sense of alienation, and we all like each other. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's cool😊, so embarrassing😤, this is ice, author🥵, update soon, if there is no latest chapter😭, Wadasi

I heard that you update once a day, one star will be missing. When will you update the five stars? [Put your lips] The plot is a bit confusing, don't let it end badly! Don't suck! Don't suck!

It looks okay, so I'll give it five stars first, but Mu Ruxue's current appearance still feels a bit awkward. She doesn't want to become a yandere. I'm really tired of seeing this kind of thing. I still prefer her to be cooler but shy because of some small actions.

I have read the latest chapter 100. I feel the writing is good. Some of the plots may be a bit too cliche, but it is still ok. The classic wife-chasing crematorium is actually well controlled by the author's writing. Recommend four🌟, personally add one

It's pretty good, although the middle content is a bit too drawn out and bloody, and there's a lot of unexplained information in the ending, but at least it's not draggy, and the viewing experience is still good. Of course, the plot is a bit cliche, and it's basically predictable even without explanation. In short, this is the first time I've read this type of bianbaiwen. I feel that the author's description of cultivation is quite good. I feel that if the author improves a little more, he can write a good-looking cultivation article.

It's pretty good compared to other similar novels. Awesome [Like] I am dragging my feet and changing the article. The relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is also a relationship of interests. I will make it clear if I am not worthy of the heroine. The heroine is right. The protagonist is just attracted by sex and there is no sweetness of love. The heroine is also a professional, not cute or gentle at all. She is always suspicious of others and makes her look like food. Besides, I can't see her face. Do you want readers to like such a protagonist? The heroine? What's the plot behind it? Give your blood to the heroine and then cry and say you blamed me wrongly, I really like you! Hahaha, it's better to let the protagonist die quickly. The heroine wants to ask where the two missing pages are. The protagonist Jiligulu, who was very sincere from the beginning, said that he would not let her know. To put it bluntly, you want the story to be written according to your script, but you can't write characters with flesh and blood like this. Think of them as your children and think about their thoughts, rather than purely as human beings. There must be some logic inaccuracies. Please understand. Words cannot describe it, so just feel my emotions.

It's pretty good to watch, but it's a bit of a pity because the data had to be finished in a hurry, and I feel like there was a lot of foreshadowing that wasn't written out, but it's really good to watch, and the two heroines are also very good, but I still feel like it's a pity that I didn't finish it enough.

To be honest, the plot and story really appealed to me, but it was a pity that there were a few surprises, but I still finished reading it because I liked the two female protagonists. The subsequent plot of Luo Li finding a way to restore Ruxue was not so exciting, but it suited my appetite. The main problem is that the author was too influenced by readers' comments, and there were too many loopholes in the plot that were temporarily changed. If he followed his own outline and followed the steps, it would be a really sweet and interesting novel.

It's good to watch, I like to watch it, but hurry up until the protagonist is stabbed, I want to watch the blood flow like a river

So far it's not bad, the heroine's emotions are very real, and the relationship between the two is just a matter of interest after all. However, Luo was moved, but he still hesitated when he was about to die. He could write more about his inner struggle. Also, I can't think of how to reconcile at the moment. Mu's character is there, and he is reborn. It depends on how the author writes it. It's easy to say when it's over

The author is currently changing the plot. He is very responsible and the previous plot is also good.

I have read the author's first two books. Now this writing has improved a lot. From the original dialogue without quotation marks to now with many fans, it has really improved a lot. I also hope the author can do more. I will read it again! ! ! !