Have a Crush on a School Girl? Wouldn't It Be Nice to Change Your Gender?

It's so sweet, I'll blanch it. The writing is also pretty good, and there are no major flaws in the progression of the plot, and it's so sweet that it really moved me. I couldn't sleep. This subject matter is actually quite unique. I really thought about it. My imagination, the left side of my chest was throbbing, my eyes couldn't stop blinking, and when I closed my eyes, I saw a 1.7 Meter girl wearing black clothes with gold patterns lying on my chest and turning her head towards me. The black eyes lined with fair skin are deep and affectionate. The pupils reflect light, darkness and me. The eyes do not shine, but they are my stars. A head of black hair hung over my left shoulder, strands poking at my clothes. A few strands of hair passed through the clothes and scratched my skin, as if it was scratched to the heart, causing strands of emotion to follow the blood and flow through my chest and press against my lips. What comes after, what passes, I have never felt so much that we have each other and are within reach of each other. I only wish that time will freeze at this moment forever. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]md There will be eight in the morning tomorrow

Ever since I played Mingchao, I wanted to read Narcissus [laughter] The writing is very good, and many of the ideas are consistent with those of Dada (the part about Hui Liyi is an example🥰). I have listened to about ten chapters so far. The characters of the male and female protagonists are quite likable and very real. The portrayal of the supporting characters is also good, especially Ma Honghong's high emotional intelligence. The only thing is that the character of the school girl is probably the kind of person who chases her husband in the crematorium, which is a bit disgusting (of course this is the current situation, I hope her portrayal will be better in the future) Overall the article is very good, thank you to the author [Send heartfelt thanks]

First of all, emmm... It's good-looking. It's really good so far. From the title of the work, it can be seen that it is told from the perspective of the male protagonist; but the subject matter is a bit old-fashioned, but it doesn't matter, it just looks good; then there is the relationship between the heroine, Gu Qingci's relationship with everyone is the same , in this case, it is meaningless who has traveled through time, so it is recommended that the author add some interpersonal relationships to Gu Qingci, otherwise it will appear out of place, like a girlfriend sent from the sky, then this "sex-changed me" has only one effect on Gu Xuan: I am you, and you are me.

It's delicious. Although it's fake narcissus, it's not mindless and pure. The whole atmosphere and text make people feel very natural and comfortable (that's what I've seen so far in the first ten chapters anyway)

This book gave me a lot of emotional value, the male and female protagonists are so sweet! ! ! Every time I look at it, I feel like the corpse spots are getting lighter... Objectively speaking, the logic of this book is online and the emotions are natural. The male and female protagonists, Xiao Liang, etc. Also have very positive views. At the same time, the author's writing style is also of a relatively good type. Because of this, I gave the first gift of more than 50 yuan in my life (the author comes to thank me [cool]) and look forward to the next work (The extra chapter will come soon!!!!!!! And I'll open more book club groups next time!) Maybe it's because of the number of accounts I'm watching on. It's only two hours long, but I've already watched it for at least ten hours [crying]

The story concept is very novel, the structure is compact, the logic is rigorous, the characters are rich in three-dimensionality, the imagination is unrestrained, the language is humorous and witty, it is very decompressing and makes people feel immersive. It's worth reading. I hope the hero and heroine can be together forever in the ending and never be separated! ! ! [Like] I didn't want to continue reading, and netizens scolded me for skipping over reading because I couldn't understand. That's right, I just read it very quickly and didn't read it carefully. I can't accept it. The heroine knows that the hero likes Liang and goes out of her way to seduce him. What's more, if the male protagonist likes Liang for three years, he will break it off right away? (This completely broke Obito's fans) When I first started reading it, I gave it five stars. It was my first time reading a novel about pure love in a parallel universe. Later, the defense was broken directly. The male protagonist abandoned Liang too suddenly. The three-year secret love was not worth mentioning, and he still had low self-esteem at every turn [face covering] lack of love [face covering] lack of confidence [face covering] If you love someone, you have to identify with them, instead of changing them again and again. It made me feel very uncomfortable. To be honest, I read it well before. The male protagonist likes Liang. It is a normal youthful and ignorant secret love in a high school prison. Later, he directly fell in love with the female protagonist and was seduced away by the female protagonist. And if you want to break the bridge, just break it, but do it so simply, more thoroughly, and more ruthlessly. So for three years, what is the secret love like a shadow chasing the light? A joke? I was really confused. The female protagonist likes the male protagonist, and the male protagonist likes Liang. Can you say that? Then the female protagonist seduced the male protagonist and ran away, and I went to 666. ("Oh, it's so silky!!!")

This is the first Narcissus I have read. It is essentially a sweet love story, the kind that contains too much sugar. The author's writing style is very good, or it may be the author's personal experience. The scenes in it are very realistic, including some of the views on life and society put forward by the author. I also agree with it, and I have learned something. Back to the characters, the daily sweet-making routine between Gu Xuan and Gu Qingci is really good to watch. I always remember the promise of "Let's talk about it!" They are each other's salvation and they also healed me. In addition to the two sides, Liang Huanyan's growth is also a highlight. From my initial disgust to my subsequent love, this is the attitude change brought about by the character's growth. The ending can be considered a happy one. I can't let go of Gu Xuan and Gu Qingci. They are together in disguise. In the end, living your life as a family is more important than anything else! ! ! (Looking forward to the extra)

Yes, I think it's ok. For now, the line is stable, and I'm pretty good at falling in love. At the same time, the if line (school girl) is still gaining momentum. I hope to give a reasonable and happy ending in the future (please refer to the relationship between my sister and the black cat after the ending of the marriage line [for reference only]) And it is recommended to severely torture version T0, no Lily, thank you meow (^ω^)

It's really good-looking, it's funny, it's sweet, the villains are shipped quickly, the characters have flaws but they're not bad, and they're very real. I don't read much of this kind of writing, but there are some narcissistic people out there who haven't imagined that there's another version of themselves in the world. It's so cool to understand each other's thoughts through every move. 6. It's only been half a month since you commented? When I commented, I thought the plot was long enough. Is this the end? The ending of Brother Jiang Zi, the penultimate chapter, I don't know what I'm writing, the penultimate chapter is too hasty as the finale, and where can I fill in the missing child plot? Write another twenty or thirty chapters quickly, and make the arrangements for the descendants of the protagonist and supporting characters clearer.

It's okay. It's a good-looking novel. The writing style is quite fresh and the subject matter is quite novel. However, the ending is a bit sloppy and there is still a feeling of unfinished business. I give five stars to support the author and hope that the author will continue to work hard.

Sweet article, no double quotes. There are poisonous points, but the flaws cannot be concealed. The writing is delicate, with intriguing classic plots, and also the embarrassing "three rooms and one living room". I didn't finish it, but after reading Chapter 52, I felt that the plot was easy to guess. I skipped back to read the chapters after Chapter 151, which eliminated the biggest poisonous point. Because I am a female patron, I would like to support the author with a five-star review. Chapter 141, wrongly posted. If Nv Gu gets stabbed, it can only be treated as if she has not read the book.

This is a subjective review. The plot is a bit outrageous when it comes to the class reunion. The author has been emphasizing that the two protagonists are incredibly good-looking, but to be honest, it is a bit too deliberate and frequent, and it is not obvious from the front that the heroine and the hero were very influential figures in high school. At the class reunion, the appearance of the two protagonists did not seem to cause much excitement at the party. What's more, when the heroine criticizes Xing Yin, it's not difficult to see that Xing Yin dares to bare his teeth and shows that the heroine's status is not very high in Xing Yin's heart. As a result, the revelation of a relationship directly caused Xing's repressed jealousy and caused a sensation among everyone at the party. The most outrageous thing is the Bai Yueguang whom I have a crush on. The stove in front of me warmed you for four years and you remained motionless. Now that the stove is out, you know you have melted [laughing awkwardly] It gave me a myocardial infarction. He was still shouting that he wanted to take back what belonged to him. The main reason for giving it four stars is that the plot is too clichéd and a bit unreliable. The two actors' expressions of relationship were a bit too exaggerated to shock the audience, and there was not enough preparation before the climax. However, this is indeed the first time I have seen this subject of myself falling in love with my sexually changed self. Come on, author

It's very well written, I can't describe it, but it's pretty good.

The author's writing style is different from other articles. There is no passion or overflowing sadness. All the feelings have a feeling hidden in the words. They are not written but brewed. The emotions, intimacy, and contact scenes are very suitable for people like me. Especially in terms of character creation, the author's method is very bold and difficult to control. Even if there are some minor flaws, it is a level higher than other novels. The behavior of the characters may seem unreasonable, but in fact it is more realistic. The author's description of reality is very realistic, and for a novel, the author has a good control over the proportion of reality and ideals.

Although the relationship between the male and female protagonists is somewhat awkward, both of them have their own thoughts, but there will be no gap between them. It's not just a matter of reliance, just like a cat at home. This relationship is really comforting.

Great book! With down-to-earth Northeastern-style vocabulary, appropriate jokes, compact plot and emotional description, I couldn't hold my mouth shut from the first chapter! Urban romance, the description of emotions and relationships is as delicate as the reasoning, countless little episodes that make people laugh, and the bold concept of love all make me want to stop!

It's a really good book, the writing is very delicate and the emotional line is very complete. The characterization is also the theme of self-marriage, which is particularly good in this... I really can't praise it enough. If I use the analogy of writing style, I would like to call the author Xiao Jiangnan. How come it's over after half a month of raising it? Update extra chapters, such as marriage and post-marital life, Feng's new relationship, etc. I can also write two chapters for Jian Xia's love line...

It can be said that it is the most natural and perfect among so many similar articles. There is a harmonious and harmonious atmosphere from the beginning to the end. I even suspect that the author is writing a diary. It can only be beautiful and satisfy your fantasies about yourself. I hope you can work hard.

The writing is really good. I occasionally fantasize about what will happen if another me appears in the world. I know myself best and don't have to hide anything from myself. I also want to thank the author for fulfilling one of my fantasies. I hope the ending will be smooth. I have read so many types of endings. Even if the happy ending is cliché, this is what most people are willing to watch and they still like to watch a perfect happy ending.

I have read Chapter 121 so far, and the author's writing style is really good. Cozy and warm. So far, there are no poisonous points, and there are no particularly big turning points. It's that kind of ordinary and warm life. I originally watched it because of the beginning. A fresh picture. As a result, I slowly fell into it. It's really well written, very good. Even putting aside the title of sexual intercourse, there is a warm and natural emotional change between the two. The writing is also very comfortable.

I give it a 6 out of 10. Although the ending is not good, it still has an ending. The writing is pretty good, and I really think some of the things written are awesome. The little sparrow and the fireworks really left me stunned. The setting is very interesting, and I can watch it at my leisure. Look, it's a daily-oriented book. It's very bland and doesn't have any exciting points. It didn't make me feel bright and keep reading, but the author's writing style makes up for this. This book has a bit of a show-off flavor. In short, it can be read. It's not a high-scoring masterpiece, but it's perfect for casual reading.

This is the pure love book I have dreamed of! It feels good to show me. I am the variable that you cannot cover up with lies. You are also a variable that I cannot cover up with lies. I wish I didn't have a knife, I really can't stand knives.

It's a great Narcissus novel, and the endings arranged by each character are quite reasonable. But did the author forget to mention the idea of their souls exchanging at the end of a certain chapter? Will I still see that extra chapter in my lifetime [laughter]

It's my favorite daily style, I love this book Author, please don't endure it knowingly. This is the first time in my life that I have given someone a gift. I gave it to you because I feel sorry for you. Normally I wouldn't give it to you if it suits my taste. I like free sex.

The book is good, Xiaotian, and it is suitable for a female channel. After watching the extras, I felt very sad for the ending of the male protagonist and Liang, especially Liang, a very good girl, but she could not be with the male protagonist in both worlds.

It's very interesting. The theme of falling in love with your post-transition self is very novel and meaningful. The male and female protagonists are so awesome.

It's a sweet story. The setting is quite novel. It mainly depends on how the author writes it. The main focus is on the female supporting character, Liang Huanyan. But it's hard to draw a conclusion now. It just depends on how the author writes it. (Actually, you could use some knives [smile])

(Contains spoilers.) After reading it, the overall feeling is very good [laughs]. The main author's writing is good and he can clarify the characters' personality traits very well, but there are still loopholes. For example, the author should have clarified the blood relationship of "Liang Gu" from the early stage, but when everyone first read that the author said that the extra story would be discussed, he didn't mention it. Although the two did have children in the end, the lack of settings gave us this Some harsh people can't see clearly [think], so the shortcomings are mainly in the setting. Although it took me less time to read it, and the comments may be a bit vague, I still hope the author can make some changes. I really hope that this excellent work will become better [learned], because for those of us who have read it, we hope to have a perfect "Gu Qingci" more than anyone else [laughs].

After reading it, I can really feel that I am talking to myself. The tacit understanding between myself and myself is well written, but some details are slightly different due to gender. Overall, it is very good. It is a rare theme in Tomatoes.

I came here to read the novel after I saw the video on the tweet. It was really attractive at first, and the writing style in some parts of the article was really good. It was bilingual, using objects to describe people, and so on. When the story of the male patron and the female patron officially begins, their daily life is very sweet, just like having a piece of strawberry cake in a tasteless life. Especially the relationship between the male patron and the female patron really makes me envious, and I always fantasize about it when reading. However, Liang appeared too frequently when the male and female protagonists were making out or being together, which made me feel a little uncomfortable while reading. Overall, the book is very interesting and sweet, but the story of the two seemed to end too hastily. The sudden ending made me feel empty inside. It would be great if there could be a story about a man caring about a woman. When the male and female protagonists sprinkled candies, the corners of my mouth really lifted up when I watched them, especially when it came to the vow to "keep telling the truth". When I couldn't read, I often thought of the story of the male and female guardians, and I felt a little uncomfortable after finishing it. The long passage before the final chapter made me a little nervous, but the words at the end made me relax. The story of a man and a woman Gu begins and ends suddenly, just like a dream. Some of the daily writing and the atmosphere of the market are also well described in the article. I still hope to continue to see the story of Gu Xuan and Gu Qingci. There are so many things I want to say that I won't let them out. This is also the first time I care so much about a novel.