(Invincible literature + cultivating immortals + disciple training + magic weapon flow + calf guardian + no female protagonist + apprentices have their own stories)
Wei Ming, a graduate of Normal College, accidentally traveled to a world of immortal cultivation and became the master of a sect without any cultivation. Fortunately, he awakened to the disciple training system.
Let me first take a look at my precious apprentices.
The Great Disciple: He was born with a useless body, his meridians were blocked, and he was unable to practice normally;
The second apprentice: a human-male hybrid with a perverse personality who is not tolerated by the world;
The third disciple: accompanied by visions, unknown burdens, and rumors of causing trouble to the world;
The corner of Wei Ming's mouth twitched, calling out this high-end game!
"Master, it's not good, the senior brother has been captured!"
"Master, it's not good, the second senior sister was captured by the demon!"
"Master, it's not good, my junior brother was captured by a ghost!"
Wei Ming stood up and stretched his waist: "It's okay, my disciple is free to wander around, my master is truly invincible."
Reader comments
After reading Chapter 118 and reading the response written by the author, I thought it would be better to comment. I mostly like to read novels that are fun and interesting. I don't understand the writing style and can't comment on it, but I want to affirm the author's creation of characters. I think it is especially aimed at Xiao Anli. Xiao Anli met the protagonist when she was ten years old. She was a beggar who ate her last meal but never finished her next meal. Even so, she still raised her younger brother. From this, we can see that she is not bad. Why is everyone surrounding her? It's just because she didn't accept everything the protagonist gave me obediently and gratefully, which made some people feel violated. She has her own personality, which is more vivid and cannot satisfy your desire for control. The environment is crucial to a child's growth. A silly child who is grateful for help from others cannot survive in a slum with his younger brother. The author's writing is very good, just like I would hate the selfless Jing Qian and think he is stupid, but he is such a person. From the moment I hate his behavior, the author has succeeded in shaping him. He has become a person and I cannot impose my thoughts on him. Because he had to have a clear conscience, otherwise it would be easy for his Taoist heart to collapse due to his practice, so he did it. There are reasons and consequences, and it is not a thin character. I think some people may be too violent, or may not have enough experience to be able to think from others' perspective.
Very well written. It's not a hodgepodge of some authors using other people's novels, nor is it the kind of thing that would make people vomit if they return it a thousand times. This fantasy is not just about the empress appearing in the plot. I hope the author can stick to his own path and not go astray. It's best to have three or four chapters a day. I still feel that the separation between the younger generations is confusing. Also cousins and cousins are not the same thing.
Newbies and new books, please support me!
The plot is deeper and the characters' characteristics and strengths are clearer and more prominent.
But every character is different. Really good characters should be flesh and blood. They should be kind and selfish, and have love and hate. A truly good book is one that can make people cry or feel soft inside.
In fact, I'm quite optimistic about you, the author. It's your first time writing a book, you're neither poisonous nor stupid, and you can establish your characters well. Work hard in the future.
Super nice, recommended, recommended
It looks good, the characters are well described, and the character is very attractive.
It looks good and the writing is very good [like][like][like]
It's almost the same. It's better if it's the same.
Big boost for the author. It's ok. I don't want to be as brainless as Wuweiwen. You can update it more.
A very good article. The beginning is a little bit venomous, but becomes more and more interesting later on.
It's very interesting. It's really interesting. The master is not invincible at the beginning, and the disciples don't particularly admire the master from the beginning. The master-disciple relationship is well written.
It's good. Come on, I think this book is very good. Why doesn't anyone comment on it?
It's so beautiful, I caught up with it in one go
Very good book
Good, good, good Good, good but not good enough
The main character's operations are basically okay, and the eldest apprentice is not too poisonous. An Li may have some minor issues, but they are acceptable, but the plot could be advanced faster.
There are so few people, so I tasted this delicious food first!
It's very beautiful. The master is very attentive to every apprentice he takes.
The work is well written, and the master is very attentive to every apprentice.
After reading Chapter 118 and reading the response written by the author, I thought it would be better to comment. I mostly like to read novels that are fun and interesting. I don't understand the writing style and can't comment on it, but I want to affirm the author's creation of characters. I think it is especially aimed at Xiao Anli. Xiao Anli met the protagonist when she was ten years old. She was a beggar who ate her last meal but never finished her next meal. Even so, she still raised her younger brother. From this, we can see that she is not bad. Why is everyone surrounding her? It's just because she didn't accept everything the protagonist gave me obediently and gratefully, which made some people feel violated. She has her own personality, which is more vivid and cannot satisfy your desire for control. The environment is crucial to a child's growth. A silly child who is grateful for help from others cannot survive in a slum with his younger brother. The author's writing is very good, just like I would hate the selfless Jing Qian and think he is stupid, but he is such a person. From the moment I hate his behavior, the author has succeeded in shaping him. He has become a person and I cannot impose my thoughts on him. Because he had to have a clear conscience, otherwise it would be easy for his Taoist heart to collapse due to his practice, so he did it. There are reasons and consequences, and it is not a thin character. I think some people may be too violent, or may not have enough experience to be able to think from others' perspective.
Very well written. It's not a hodgepodge of some authors using other people's novels, nor is it the kind of thing that would make people vomit if they return it a thousand times. This fantasy is not just about the empress appearing in the plot. I hope the author can stick to his own path and not go astray. It's best to have three or four chapters a day. I still feel that the separation between the younger generations is confusing. Also cousins and cousins are not the same thing.
Newbies and new books, please support me!
The plot is deeper and the characters' characteristics and strengths are clearer and more prominent. But every character is different. Really good characters should be flesh and blood. They should be kind and selfish, and have love and hate. A truly good book is one that can make people cry or feel soft inside. In fact, I'm quite optimistic about you, the author. It's your first time writing a book, you're neither poisonous nor stupid, and you can establish your characters well. Work hard in the future.
Super nice, recommended, recommended
It looks good, the characters are well described, and the character is very attractive.
It looks good and the writing is very good [like][like][like]
It's almost the same. It's better if it's the same.
Big boost for the author. It's ok. I don't want to be as brainless as Wuweiwen. You can update it more.
A very good article. The beginning is a little bit venomous, but becomes more and more interesting later on.
It's very interesting. It's really interesting. The master is not invincible at the beginning, and the disciples don't particularly admire the master from the beginning. The master-disciple relationship is well written.
It's good. Come on, I think this book is very good. Why doesn't anyone comment on it?
It's so beautiful, I caught up with it in one go
Very good book
Good, good, good Good, good but not good enough
The main character's operations are basically okay, and the eldest apprentice is not too poisonous. An Li may have some minor issues, but they are acceptable, but the plot could be advanced faster.
There are so few people, so I tasted this delicious food first!
It's very beautiful. The master is very attentive to every apprentice he takes. The work is well written, and the master is very attentive to every apprentice.