After Breaking Off the Engagement to the Legitimate Daughter of the Xiao Family, I Became the Destined King

Personal evaluation Let's just read it, it's just a bit minor that the male protagonist is not so merciful. These low-star reviews are mainly about resource issues, but I don't think this problem is too big. I have read that kind of poisonous novel, and this one is already quite good. There's not much of a problem with the male protagonist's character. I am mainly looking forward to more female protagonists in the future, mainly because this book is already better than other mindless novels. Although there are still some problems, but the author works hard [Like]

It's okay. The supporting characters in this novel are not as brainless as other novels. It's not easy to guess the identity of the protagonist. This means that they have no conflicts except for the initial fight with the protagonist. Currently, there is no major villain except the external will of the big boss. The protagonist is not like other novels. He has all the resources to lick the heroine, except to maintain the necessary personality. For his subordinates, it is a win-win situation for both parties. The protagonist improves the strength of his followers, and the followers provide intelligence for the protagonist to complete tasks. There is no Tang ③ behavior. In terms of character design, you can refer to Nie Li or the senior brothers in My Senior Brother Tai Jian. It seems quite comfortable at the moment. The current shortcomings are mainly that there are too few daily updates and the protagonist's strength is not outstanding. He has not shown outstanding achievements and talents. The only physique shown is the protagonist's dual cultivation physique and the contracted family sacred weapon.

I can only say that it is the best one among the harem novels I have read. Although there are more and more female protagonists later on, they all respect the wishes of the male protagonist Zhao Yan (except for Xiao Yanran who wants to kidnap the male protagonist to Zhongzhou), and their personalities are different. I can feel different feelings in each female protagonist. Speaking of male protagonists, what about our male protagonists? Although the Lord's emotional intelligence is sometimes very low and makes people anxious, he always brings surprises (and sometimes shocks) at critical times. He is considerate and powerful, and sometimes he fails. I admire these characteristics of his. He not only fascinates the heroine, but also surprises me as a reader. Speaking of the story, I find it very interesting. When I first encountered this book and saw the introduction, I thought it was just another harem novel, and I was not interested. But after reading it, I discovered that the author is really talented! He actually wrote such a good book. The plot is interlocking and does not leave out the interaction with other characters. If you like harem novels but don't like to give away the heroine, you can come in and read it. I highly recommend it. Furthermore, I would like to thank Tomato Novel for letting me see this book through its push, and also thank the author for his meticulous writing that attracted me to this book. If possible, could the author update four chapters every day? By the way, and also, give me the memory of Xiao Yanran!!! Secondly, I am talking about a fantasy harem novel, so don't criticize it if you don't like it.

In terms of plot design, the protagonist group is not too smart. Come on, the author, support it with 5 stars. Frankly speaking, readers like me don't care much about the writing style, but whether the plot is pleasant or not is the first impression. Just like in reality, when you meet a stranger, he may be handsome or beautiful. In short, this is the first impression.

Although the plot is very cliche, I have to admit that it is well written. So many novels are basically based on a template. It is really powerful to be able to write something unique. I hope the author can stick to it and follow his own style. The low rating is just because no one has rated it very high. I really don't want this book to go down. There are also many people on Tomato who don't read the book and the comments must be scolded. I hope the author will not be affected. I originally wanted to write it but I didn't have the guts to write it for fear of being scolded. Come on, author, you are at least better than me.

I think it's quite interesting. I don't comment on the plot. It varies from person to person. The protagonist has a goal. Unexpected things happen in the process of completing the goal. I think it is quite common in online novels, and the sense of reward is also good. Ming Ai's reward in the first three chapters of the plot is Ming Ai herself, and later she gets a place in the trial. I think the fault is that the protagonist has no goal, does a lot of things, fails to achieve the goal, and has no reward. Many of the previous small plots are passed quickly without procrastination. Personal opinion

Update·…· When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

I have read 200 chapters. This book is good, but there is one biggest drawback, which is the emotional plot. It seems very uncomfortable to me, but other parts are fine. After reading more than 600 chapters, how should I put it, I think the emotional plot of the protagonist is Shi. No matter what you do next, the feeling I have now after reading it is like this, Shi. In other aspects, as I said before, there are no major flaws. There is no problem with the plot. It is okay to read. It is the relationship (important things are said three times) that defeats the book.

How can I put it this way, this harem novel is the most interesting I have ever read. There are many harems, the protagonist does not lick dogs, and the people the protagonist messes with are all very possessive and proud women. They all want to dominate the protagonist. Some take the protagonist to Zhongzhou, self-destruct together, and are locked up in a small dark room. Anyway, it is very interesting. Unlike usual harem novels where the heroines get along harmoniously without any conflicts, this is an extreme Shura field. Good luck to the author and I will look forward to you.

The formal details of the protagonist are well written. But overly detailed fight scenes are not suitable for this type of novel. Readers of this type of book want to see the various entanglements between the protagonist and those destiny journeys, rather than other fighting scenes. I hope my opinions can help the author

Comment on it If you like to show your saintliness in front of others, this is a good book. If you like to show your saintliness and fall in love with a girl, this book is even better. If you like to fall in love, well, you have to be a little patient. To put it nicely, you have to take a rough look at the character development in the front and just go to the back. To sum up, the anchor must be powerful, and it is not too low. I have also read what the author said. It is true that fan fiction is different from original work. As long as there is interaction between fan fiction, people will buy it. If you are original, you must show your strength as soon as possible. This is not to say that the author's previous writing is bad, but that the strength shown by the anchor is wrong based on the book title introduction. Um. . I'm trying to help the author. I've also read the negative reviews. It's quite difficult to comment on. Some people who haven't read a few chapters or listened to the book for more than ten chapters should be ignored. If you write something about girls to get something, no one will say that you are evil. As long as those who think it's okay make up the majority, don't worry about them. Just keep the current style and strength, I won't stack armor.

I see that the content is relatively good, relatively acceptable, but it would be better if the progress is faster, for example, if there are more chapters, it will be faster. Two pages are not enough to read. If I want to express my feelings, I have read a lot of these themes and I have also read them in many books. But your book is really a big improvement. I like the space and the character of the protagonist, not so biased towards the villain, nor biased towards the decent and more neutral feeling, um, more like a helper, but from the observer's point of view, it is a bit biased towards the decent. And those words you said to the heroine, I think this word is quite good, it feels a bit sublime.

Come on, author! Still my favorite type. I think the character setting is okay and the outlook is relatively normal.

I finished reading it. When I read more than 900 chapters, I wanted to save up and read the plot of Zhongzhou. Later I found out that the updated chapter 60 Zhang happily came in, and it ended. It is a bit regretful, but the author did work hard, and it was really for love at the end. I respect you for this. There is a little bit of poison in the middle of the book, but I have forgotten it by the end. Generally speaking, people who read it are quite comfortable. In the end, I can't forget those distinctive characters. , Is a good book. Those who like harems, systems, aristocratic families, and cultivators can read it. Don't miss it because of some small shortcomings in the previous article. I hope to see the author's extras as soon as possible.

This book is really good. It has a grand world view and framework. The male protagonist is nonchalant and principled. The female protagonists also have their own characteristics. My favorite is Zhao Qingyan, because the author really created the character of Qingyan very well (can anyone get it?) Although the appearance rate is low in the early stage, every time I appear, I feel that reading this chapter is worth it, and the previous updates are worth it. In the current environment where cultivating immortals is like running water, it is already a breath of fresh air. The pace may be a little slow, but it is more intriguing. I have watched several famous scenes several times. Because the author of the latest chapter said that he couldn't hold on any longer, so aside from anything else, I would like to give a five-star support to the author, because this book is worth it!

The overall plot progression of this book is straight to the point, not subtle, with many harems. The independent stories of each heroine are well written, and they have different personalities. They belong to a very small type, and there are some subtle keys behind their independence. The most important thing is that the Shura field will not be less, and when the knife is moved, it is really moving. But there are also some logical flaws, and some uncomfortable surprises. You can imagine a type that has no emotional intelligence and is very scumbag. You can't guess what the author will write next, and you may think of the male protagonist as "Brother Cheng." In short, I think this is a good book, and each character is well portrayed. Although there are some flaws, the overall impression is still very good. Well, I also know that it is bitter at first and then sweet. This book is uncomfortable at times and refreshing at times. Although it has flaws, the overall impression is still very good. After reading it, I gradually believe that the author can handle the relationship between the characters. If you can get through the pain, this book will definitely give you pleasure. In addition, the author's potential is really great, this book can be a masterpiece.

The early stage is quite boring, because I personally like to watch romance. The main character in the early stage is getting stronger, but later on there is a love plot which is quite sweet. If you like reading it, cheers for the author.

The final chapter of the story is perfect, leaving no regrets. The author has been updating it step by step. Readers can see every effort and every idea reveals countless efforts. Each heroine's image is very three-dimensional and full. Thanks to the author for updating day after day and delivering this novel that I love. Here I wish the author success in finishing the book and readers all over the world. See you in the next book. 💐💐💐

I followed it from the beginning, and then I felt a little uncomfortable reading it in one day. After reading more than 300 chapters, I finished it in one go. The plot is okay, but one event took a long time to write, such as the martial arts competition to recruit a bride, and the martial arts test. Of course, 10 updates a day can perfectly solve the problem [laughing]

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Mink Cicada and Sun Wukong?. The battle lasted hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai did It's really too strong, if not for the outer ring + Noxus. Guillotine, White Mask will die after this wave of M4 fires six times. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain A sentence of "danking is proud, don't do it in front of the national football team" "It's staged", showing Zhuge Liang striking the monkey with three sticks and knocking him to death. The indignation and sympathy for Brother Wa, fortunately, the moment before his death A helpless Q captured and killed Junior Wa's mother. In general In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good. Bit! Emotion, description? ! Writing

The previous content is okay, please support it. If we can continue to chase stars in the future, in fact, it would be better to have less system involvement and more descriptions of humanistic emotions and development [Chigua]

So far, I still like Xiao Yanran's plot the most. Xuanyuan Aoqing's positive growth and highlights in the fantasy plot are too little. On the contrary, the baby in the fantasy plot is more like the daughter of destiny. Finally, I am looking forward to the plot of Zhao Qingyan and the plot of Ao Qing being robbed of her bride╮(¯▽¯)╭

I've followed more than 700 chapters, and I feel pretty good about it. It's a fantasy with many female protagonists. Among the many female protagonists, they are relatively delicate, but what I dislike the most is the two female protagonists who have a relationship with the male protagonist. They appear out of nowhere. But I caught up with the latest chapter, so I'll give it five stars.

The author handles emotions very delicately, and will not neglect any character. The language is delicate, the description details are very good, and the fighting plot is also described very well. It can be said to be a masterpiece of fantasy language and romance. The author must continue to make more! ! Aye! Give me more love! I want to love Yi and the protagonist HE @ Zhizhibuque

This is the type of book I found after I downloaded Tomato. I have been following up on it. I went on a trip at the end of July and stopped reading it. I wanted to save some money. I didn't expect to finish it immediately. The ending is still a bit rushed, but it's okay to have an ending compared to other interrupted chapters. Some of the "poisonous points" in the comment area may be because I don't really care, so it's still enjoyable to follow. I hope there will be an extra chapter later to give some closure to those who didn't write it completely before.

It's quite interesting, but no one has read it. This book is quite interesting, so don't stop updating it.

The high rating is normal because this book has too many words, unlike other books that cost less than 200,000 [smile]

Mainly because it gave me a boring feeling in the early stages, but the more I read it, the more I liked it. I only read it for three days and it was gone. I hope the author will update it soon. Two chapters a day is still too little. I'll give you some gifts. Please update more. Please, it's so good.

I suggest you write more emotional scenes with Zhao Qingyan, just follow the same writing style as before, it's so enjoyable to watch [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

Tribute to the legendary bull-resistant kings Xiao Leng and Xiao Zhao The best MVP has to eat cold food, and the best friend has to eat it twice, once. Incompetent wife Xiaoqingmei An, Xuanyuan Qingao and her baby Best Passerby Award: Xiao and Lu Online Live Viewing Award White Tiger I've read Chapter 740 in one go so far