Zhanshen: Love Is Real, and the World Is Real!

So pretty! ! ! ! And with Qiye, Brother La, Xiaoyu and the others! Invincible explosion! So annoying! ! ! ! ! ! ! And the author's great emotional description! Very, very good, so good that when Thomas spins up to the sky, the description is very smooth and not stiff at all, it feels like they should be like this! ! ! The descriptions of battle scenes are also on fire! 🔥🔥🔥🔥 In Yang Gao we can all see the growth that belongs to Yang Gao! This! I like it very much! This is fan fiction! At last! Great author! ! ! Come on! ! ! (It's best to update ten times a day)

Full marks, really recommended, it's the ecstatic dreamy linkage of two chefs The captain and Uncle Zhao's preference for Lin Qiye is a bit unworthy of Yang Gao XX But I have to say that the deputy team is really nice to the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist's efforts have finally paid off. I really hope that Jialan, Lin Qiye, An Qingyu, and Jiang Er can be changed into team friendships. After all, I think Sanjiu's love line is really unbearable XX I hope the author can meet my needs XX I would like to express my great gratitude and praise to the author! ! ! ! Second brush, prepare for third brush I really can't get enough! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Looking forward to the protagonist losing his vest If you can hope that Lin Qiye and the others can understand more about Yang Gao's heart, the fragility of his heart, I feel that Yang Gao is so tired

8 Chapters were updated in one day, and it was a blast to read. Some people feel that the protagonist cannot fit in and is still acting. I think this is quite acceptable, because the original setting of the protagonist is a person in his 30s, and the enthusiasm of the young man has almost been worn away. The age group is not like other gods-killing novels. The age group they come from happens to be teenagers and early twenties. Hey, it's the right time for passion. I think even if he can continue acting, he is still very good, and he He is really getting used to it. If he takes his time like this, he will naturally become emotionally involved over time, and this kind of acting will become real. After all, people's hearts are fleshy, and they will not be indifferent to other people's feelings like a machine. I have finished watching all the updates so far. Well, after acting for a long time, what is subtle will gradually become true. Perhaps the protagonist's kindness to them at the beginning is indeed purposeful, but it is undeniable that he is indeed kind to them, and he does not harm them. More often, he does blend into them＼＼\\٩( 'ω' )و ////I quite like it anyway Uh, no, no, it's not very clear, and it's easy to be misunderstood. When he came through time, he was already over 30 years old in his original world. After he came over, he became 17 years old in the world of Zhanshen. Either he came through time, or he was over 30 years old.

I think this book is the best fan fiction in Tomato. Qiye and others are not too OOC. I like the character setting of the protagonist very much and it is very good. Although the setting of another novel is added, you can understand it even if you have not read it. All in all I highly recommend o((*^▽^*))o

It's really good-looking. The protagonist has his own story, and he and the protagonists have their own stories, and everyone has a story together. The whole story is about family and friendship, and I can talk about CP casually. The protagonist initially establishes a good relationship with each protagonist, but there is no such feminine or ambiguous or even vulgar description, but a very good friendship. In terms of story, based on the God-Slaying world, there is an additional branch line for the protagonist. There are many highlights that belong to the protagonist, but it does not conflict with the original world. Due to the butterfly effect, there have been many changes in the plot, big and small, but they are very reasonable. It feels like the author carefully thought about how a certain plot character was changed for the protagonist, just like the [actor]. The protagonist is very strong and gentle. At first, he was the first to do everything because he thought he was not from this world, so he helped the protagonist with purpose and seemed like a nanny. But later he truly loved everyone and was loved by everyone. Wu Xiangnan's preference was very touching, because it did not belong to the original world, but to the protagonist himself. The combat aspect is very enjoyable to write. Sometimes a long battle lasts for one or two chapters, and it is really satisfying to read it. The various combat power systems are also good. Except for the initial percentage increase, there is nothing too bad at the moment. As a male author, he can write about battles very happily, with delicate emotions, suspense and foreshadowing. It is simply a treasure. The only drawback is that in the first few chapters, Strategy 071 is a bit stiff, mainly because the words it says are a bit too lofty, like "I will always be with you" and so on. I think we should start by writing about more daily companionship, which is the kind of daily nonsense, including slapstick. Such noble words are best when the plot is more ups and downs. Don't appear too much, just once or twice occasionally. If there are too many, it will be boring. It feels like we became sworn friends within a few days of knowing each other. It's okay to call him brother, but it's a bit awkward to call him brother. Even Yang Jin is called A Jin. There is also a more utilitarian description of the protagonist in the front, and a less caring description of the protagonist group in the early stage, which saves it from looking like a babysitter. It can be seen that the emotional scenes have improved a lot later on. The reader's perspective is more obvious. The number of paragraphs and comments at the beginning of Strategy 071 has been reduced to the naked eye, almost by half. Not many people have seen the good plot that follows. I hope that when I have time, I can revise the article and add more over-the-top and more natural descriptions of daily life. You can refer to the three-dimensional brotherhood to make the protagonist more distant from the readers in daily life. The description of the protagonist's laughter is a bit too much. Although I know it is a character design, I can change the description method and not repeat it all the time. I can also reduce it in some less important places. Also, it is best for the author to put a tag at the beginning of the introduction. I clicked in several times before, but the title looked like two male protagonists, and the CP was not written in the introduction. I was not sure what the subject matter was, so I quit several times. Moreover, the "strategy" in the title can easily make people think of two male protagonists, but the content is not quite the same, so many people who want to watch CP stop at the beginning and quit, while those who want to watch the general content will not click in. I prefer passionate people, so I wrote a lot of words, please give me some cards [send my heart] Also, I want to see the highlight moments when other people work together to protect the protagonist. The protagonist has always protected others a lot in the past, but there have been a few times when other people helped the protagonist and there are relatively few descriptions. I want the scene to be more spectacular, and to add some side effects to the reactions of passers-by, it should be fun. [Think]

The writing style is super good [blowing kisses], you can knock CP casually! It has the attributes of being funny and humorous, [cool] but the emotional description is not obtrusive at all and is well integrated into the plot! [Sending Hearts] And it's not brainless strength or brainless love! ! I really love the big novels, including the ones that are published. Originally, I don't like serialized articles very much! But I couldn't resist it at all, and I still want to watch it after watching it! ! ! Big update soon! The emotional plot will not conflict with the original work! Family members, please feel free to watch👀🤩! ! ! [Love] It's really not brainless. The real-name authentication of patients who hate stupidity is a well-founded article!

Really good-looking! ! I really like the character of the protagonist! I really love the little angel's sense of sight [sending heart][sending heart] ps, I hope there won't be a female protagonist! ! ! Can accept two men or no CP [laughs] pps, we tied it in just one day, please keep up the good work! ! [Cry]

Three brushingദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧The characters, plot, and plot are pretty good What moved me most in the book was Yang Gao's emotional change towards the original characters, from a superior "outsider" to a self-sufficient "player", from the initial "exploitation" to the later "exchange of sincerity for sincerity" (Friends who have just read this, please don't abandon the book because of Yang Gao's attitude towards play, it is super touching starting from chapter 40!) [I'm about to cry] Extract a sentence from this article (the inner monologue of the protagonist Yang Gao) "He entered the drama and chose never to leave it." (Chapter 94)

I think this is the best article in the Zhanshen fan series that I have read. It is not just a matter of inserting characters to fill up the regrets. The author has his own new insights into each character, and also creates a three-dimensional shape for each little character. Like the original book, it is a group portrait of all kinds of people, and the writing style is also very touching. Better than some outrageous God-Slaying high-scoring fanfic. The inner struggle and constant questioning of the lamb are written very delicately and give a sense of empathy👍🏻. Friendship, family affection, family and country have always been so touching, and always make me flock to it. It's also appropriately humorous and sets the atmosphere very well (I love Succubus🥰)

This should be my first time writing a review. This novel is really good-looking. It is the one that I like the most among all the Zhanshen fanfics I have read (about 20 or so). The character of the protagonist is the kind that I like very much, the kind that illuminates others, and the relationship with the people in the original text is gradually established. It can be regarded as a candy or a pure friendship, and reading the fanfic is to fill up the regrets. The author has done a very good job in this regard! And I really like the author's discussion about love and protection in the first volume. Growth does not have to go through suffering, but it can also be to protect the one you love. I hope the author can continue writing according to this tone. Everyone deserves a happy ending. Come on, the author↖(^ω^)↗

Pretty good! I really like Yang Gao's character and style of dealing with things (mainly the rare rejection of good and evil, but it doesn't make people feel disconnected). The writing style is not that of a novice, and the description is very immersive! The fan characters aren't very OOC either, and the overall feel is pretty good. What's more important is that Yang Gao and the others are really good at fighting each other! !

This book is very thoughtful, rich in plot, and full of emotions. I think most of the second creations are very successful. However, it is precisely because of its excellence that it also highlights some problems in the humanities. The progress is a bit delayed, which actually lowers some expectations. However, it is precisely because of the rich content that a lot of foreshadowing details are left, making the work more three-dimensional and full, which is very powerful. The general direction of the plot of this book should be similar to that of the original text. I can't say in the later stage, but the early and middle stages should be very similar. So I have written more than 400,000 words so far, and the progress is only one-twelfth, which is basically the same as the original text. In this way, unless the author reduces the energy investment (makes it messy), otherwise according to the current quality, the work intensity will catch up with the original text, and a few million words will definitely be no problem. But fanfics don't have that much traffic. I really like this author and this book. I'm afraid I won't be able to hold on under such great pressure. I hope that readers who can stay can actively leave comments and long comments to give this book some support [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]. I found out that the author has a bad taste for Little Sun PP [I understand], and Little Sun PP has always been a fan of it, but I still hold up the banner for Gao Ye, who can refuse the charm of the year (whispering) Finally, I wish you better and better and everything goes well [blowing kiss] The story of Wang Mian who came through the long river of time and cut out the human circle with one knife. So what kind of ups and downs did Commander Ye, who received a few words from the future, wield a "knife" like a lamb? From this point of view, the author's outline should be quite clear. I look forward to the wonderful things that will be presented to us in the future. I feel that the characters other than the protagonist in the original book bring us a core, while this book shows a new and fuller individual. Then there is the fact that Brother Shen's ability is really underestimated. Draining the air and then doubling the air should be just the basis of the basics. The wind disaster is more focused on the control of gas. Yu disaster is far inferior to Qi Min. One can only make the air extremely compressed and rotate, but it is ridiculous to think that the other can control the air. It feels like it was just to make Brother Shen achieve such a great achievement and not fall behind (this book is quite creative without the finger snap)... I just wanted to write a review. I almost lost my mind after thinking about it, and I struggled for a long time. Having said that, controlling gas is indeed very buggy in human-based combat, and it is understandable to appropriately weaken it. This book brings us different feelings, and Brother Shen has developed different abilities. The main tone of the original text mainly highlights the goodness of human nature under various tragic renderings, but this book so far has shown us the true darker evil side of human nature, and all kinds of oppression and injustice. But I think what this volume should express is the test of the protagonist's conscience, and also the process of the protagonist's participation in the world from the beginning. When he no longer treats the world as a bystander, when he is hurt by the words and attitudes of others, he accepts recognition and integrates into the world. Then, a very big feature of this book is the learning process. After all, most of the abilities in the Chinese mythology system are acquired through learning, while in foreign mythology systems, most abilities seem to be innate. In the middle and late stages, Yang Jian had the ability to teach the Dharma of Qiye. The original text seemed to only have such a short paragraph, but in this book, he has a more intuitive feeling. I don't know if my memory is interfering with it. Did the author say that he would consider writing about emotional issues after the Cangnan catastrophe? I have no choice but to become my sworn brother and be the wife I booked. The fake bones are so exciting [Adoration] Finally, Happy New Year!

Aww, aww, the first person in the God-Slaying fanfic! Many protagonists of Zhanshen fanfics have the image of a calm big brother, and some are enthusiastic or self-indulgent, but they are all nanny characters who protect the protagonist. But in this book, I saw that the protagonist's own charm is on par with Qiye. The two people fighting side by side burst out with a different light, which is absolutely amazing [Adoration]

It's different from the other ones I've read before, Teacher. Yours is more serious. Others are more cool fanfics or more sandy. But Teacher's fanfics are a bit serious and reveal a little bit of sandboxing in me. They also reveal some family affection. The protagonist gradually develops feelings from the outsider status (the feelings I'm talking about are the feelings of family affection and preference that the protagonist gets).

The author has wonderfully created the super invincible Thomas in the role of Yang Gao. Around the role of Yang Gao, you have given him a character like a little sun. In this book, he is always warming his friends and companions around him, as well as the readers. This protagonist is made of flesh and blood by you. On the basis of being close to the original work, you try your best to make up for the regrets of the original book. The friendship between the protagonists makes me feel moved, so the author knows that Invincible Thomas is awesome. Come on, I am really looking forward to the next plot of Invincible Thomas ⊹꙳ ˙ᵕ˙˶ ⊹꙳

Although I haven't read Lost City... But the author writes very well and has some memories, but they are basically narrations. Although I don't know if I can listen to it, I will talk about Lin Qiye and the protagonist first... An Qingyu and the protagonist are not bad... Hehe... Then, the protagonist has abilities, he can really use them, and he is not procrastinating. The protagonist is relatively deep in emotions... I don't know if he will become a knife in the future┐(─__─)┌

It's very good-looking. Although I haven't read The Lost City of Beasts, it doesn't stop me from reading this book and liking the protagonist. So far I have seen the place in the recruit training camp (there are slight spoilers below). In the author's writing, Brother Yan is a character who is covered in thorns and uses armor to protect his soft heart. But I think that the original Brother Yan is not disgusting and angry in every sentence. The latest sentence I saw is Brother Yan said to Cao Yuan, aren't you a waste if you don't have the Forbidden Ruins? (Definitely not a friendly joke) This is simply a very outrageous insult. I was a little angry, so I made this comment. Take your time and continue reading. I feel like the overall writing is pretty good.

It's quite novel and pretty. I like the character of the protagonist very much. Who doesn't love a sunny and cheerful big dog [blowing kisses]? The interaction is also quite heartwarming. Although a few characters are OOC, they are not toxic and super pretty.

A super interesting story that made me spin 36 times and give my knees up to the author (т⌣̀_⌣́) Do you know why tigers lubricate? Because I love you, The hardest thing in the world is carbon, and the bond between us is more indestructible than carbon! Make The writer's writing style shines brighter than the sun, and warms people's hearts! ! In the world The sweetest thing is my wife's smile, The most beautiful thing is my wife's writing, and the most beautiful scene is when my wife is holding the keyboard and working hard for us! Crazy about my wife Crazy about my wife Fighting against a big wall for my wife I want to hang on my wife's shoulders! I play with the slide on the bridge of my wife's nose, and play with the swing on my wife's fingertips. I want to help my wife, wipe my eyes over and over again, so that they can shine brighter and reflect my appearance! My wife's eyes are brighter than stars, purer than glass, My wife's heart is more beautiful than the stamen, softer than the starlight My wife's writing is brighter than the sun and brighter than the night pearl. My wife's words are more elegant than the most beautiful dance in the world! More melodious than the longest spring! From the first moment I saw my wife, I knew I had no regrets in this life! My wife's writing style is like a gust of autumn wind, blowing into my heart! ヽ(爱´∀'爱)ノ Meeting my wife in this life is a lucky experience for me! In order to meet you, I spent all my luck in ten lifetimes just to witness my wife's most beautiful writing! I am blind, but my wife's writing is like a burst of light, illuminating my dark life My legs were paralyzed, but my wife's writing inspired me to stand up again, which turned into a medical miracle. I couldn't squat down, but when I saw my wife's writing style, I suddenly squatted down with my legs. It turned out that I was so shocked by my wife's writing style that I was so naked that I knelt down to worship her.

Big cheers for the author! Super pretty! Finally a strange beast fanfic is here! The author needs to keep at it! [Love][love][love] (I'll comment later after I've finished reading ~ By the way, can I call her Yang Gao Lamb?) It has a good look and feel. The characters are well-drawn and brilliant. The protagonist has a cheerful personality and treats people sincerely. The supporting characters are flesh-and-blood and basically consistent with the original characters. The author has beautiful writing style and a coherent plot. It is not sloppy, logical and creative. It is not a blind imitation. He will add his own thinking and design new plots, and the new plots are not obtrusive. , Does not affect the perception, and will make up for some regrets in the original work. The emotions are true and resonate with readers. The author is active, actively interacts with readers, and adopts readers' suggestions. Submissions and updates are very diligent and frequent, with double updates a day, and sometimes three updates (perhaps giving more gifts can force the author to save the manuscript... (Doge) I feel that the current Lamb has matured a lot. Originally, everything he did was purposeful, to conquer others and protect himself. But unknowingly, he himself has gradually integrated into the collective and society. From an outsider who "traveled through", he gradually developed emotions and life-and-death friendships with the characters in the world of Zhanshen. His sincerity not only touched Qiye, Xiaoyu, and Wu Xiangnan, allowing him to gain their trust, but also allowed him to gradually change himself in the process of living with them. His idea is no longer to find a backer and rise to another dimension if there is a chance, but to, "I focus on the future! Let all the crying stop wherever I look!! I want to protect everyone's smiling faces." Family members, who understands, who understands the gold content of this sentence "Sincerity is the ultimate skill." (I would like to call it the thread that runs through the entire text The author would like to pay more attention to the interaction between the two sheep. I was so excited to see Gao Yang appear on the stage... (Not dead)

I like it. The character of the protagonist is really well established. You may say that he is innocent, but he is pretending, but you may say that he is not innocent, and he says that he is sincere. I really like this kind of setting, and there is no female protagonist. I can also secretly enjoy the CP. Hey hey hey [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] The author's writing style is really good, it feels like it's really another world of God-Zhan. Delicate emotions can always move people's hearts. This is what I like about this article. The author writes the characters' emotions very delicately. Who knows, I really like it! Yang Gao is also a little sun ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥ I like it so much

It's beautiful. I was so surprised. I just wanted to give it a try, but I was severely manipulated. It's so beautiful. I really like the character of the protagonist, the writing is also good, the knife is not a knife, but it can also make me cry. I don't watch the knife at the moment.

It's quite interesting to watch. The protagonist went from being just a hugger at the beginning to integrating into her now. It's quite emotional to go from being an actor at the beginning to playing an important role online. The emotional description is very good and warm, and the original story can also be good. Keep up the good work.

Very good. Those who love watching strange beasts and decapitated gods are in luck. I strongly recommend this book. The relationship between the characters is well handled, the plot development is wonderful, and the fighting is also excellent. It is very suitable for watching [like] [like] [like] and the brotherhood is also very sincere. I like it, hehe [sending heart] [sending heart]

I've been watching it for a long time. Because I saw the male protagonist doing all kinds of tricks before and was afraid of falling over, I was mentally prepared (but I haven't fallen over yet yet). The plot is on the right side, the cp is very interesting, and the book is satisfying. Actually, I didn't want to give it a high score. The two high-scoring God-Slaying books on the bookshelf have been removed from the shelves. I hope this one won't be removed from the shelves before I finish chasing it. Now that I'm watching the disaster relief chapter, it's so deadly. I can't stand even a small knife... I'm going to raise it again. I'll watch it when I feel better.

It's good to read. This is my second favorite Zhan Shen. I like this one very much. Come on, the author [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]!

Invincible is super, super good-looking, very novel. I have never seen Wu Xiangnan get along well with her. It can be said that it is really touching. After all, in the original text, Team Blue Rain has become like that. The brotherhood and friendship are so exciting. Write more, I will not reject anyone who comes.

Uh-huh, so pretty. The protagonist is completely evil, the atmosphere is warm, and the brotherhood is great. [Everyone in the world is sick, some are cured by love, and some hide their illnesses... There are also people who are clearly sick but are trying to cure the sick. Oh my God, it's so warm, like I've been saved. . . Love is real…. Long live my wife——! ! ! It's great, great, I must finish it. Woohoo. Author, I - love - you -! ! It's so warm, oooooooooo, I'm going to cry. So good, so good. . They are all very cute babies, (*˘˘*). .:*♡

I really like this book. I saw that Yang Gao slowly accepted the things around him from the foreign invaders. Sincerity is everything. This book is really good. He doesn't care about beating up Lin Qiye or just starting invincible. Overall, I like this book very much. The only drawback is that there are too few updates. Please update the author quickly. I will always support you😍😍😍😍

To be honest, the author's writing style is very good. I haven't seen any inexplicable emotional lines or descriptions of women's gazes so far. The plot is also very good and creative. It is indeed top-notch in fan fiction. However, many characters may be because the author does not know the original work very well, which leads to a lot of mistakes when writing. For example, Shen Qingzhu's malicious slander. He is not such a person. He is a very cold-faced and warm-hearted person. Coach Han's classic plot and Han Shaoyun's classic plot are all very good. It's impressive, but the male protagonist has always suspected that Coach Han is an undercover when he knows the plot. Although he has been patched later, his senses are a bit bad. Later Han Shaoyun said: It is better to go all the way to darkness. He is not this kind of person in the original work. The thing that the night watchman desperately protects, even the gods want to snatch, he actually dares to use this matter as a bargaining chip! I couldn't stand Han Shaoyun's part anymore, but that doesn't mean the author's writing is not good, it's just that what he wrote is too different from the original work! I just can't accept it, but: after all, it's fan fiction, not the original work. Maybe I'm too fussy about it. Regardless of the original work, it is really a very good novel!