Beng Tie: I Am a Brave Guard in Cangcheng.

Thank you to the author. It turned out that I had the demonic body, origin stone disease, Pamish infection, heavy rain syndrome, vocal cord infection, collapse syndrome, abstraction, money infection, radiation infection, cyberpsychosis, fear gas inhalation, homesickness, urban disease distortion, slow shock, zombie transformation, witch transformation, madness, Honkai disease, extraordinary person losing control, loss of control. Thermopyresis, Karabacteria, Contact Phobia, Harlan Virus Infection, Worm Virus Infection, Dark Aether Corrosion, Star Mark Syndrome, Corpse Cycle, Pneumoconiosis, Shock Bomb Disease, Dragonite Disease, Demon Scale, Worm Infection, Laughing Virus Infection, Flood Infection, Anti-Life Equation Corrosion, and Warp Corruption. They are all better after reading your novel. So can you have more?

It's been a long time since I've read it, so I'd better comment. First, let's talk about the advantages. 1. The author's writing style is very good, and the article looks very comfortable. 2. From the first few chapters, it can be seen that the protagonist is a real man, responsible, responsible, excellent swordsmanship, humorous, not timid in the face of trouble, and not panic when encountering difficulties. He has been watching over Cangcheng Xianzhou for more than 600 years, made outstanding contributions to Xianzhou's national defense, continuously supplied talents to major Xianzhou, and tried his best to change Cangcheng's destiny. Let's talk about the shortcomings... I don't know how the author set it up, but I personally feel that the soul of Yuan Mo, the upright swordsman of Cangcheng, has gone, and he was killed in the battle of Cangcheng. The only one who survived was the Envoy of Fertility who had Yuan Mo's memory... There was a world of difference between these two in terms of their behavior. Yuan Mo acted very measuredly, with a sense of responsibility, and was kind. He didn't even want Xiao Jingliu to remember the people in Cangcheng, for fear that she would fall into the devil's shadow early. Even if he knew that he was not strong enough, he still chose to fulfill his responsibility as the sword leader and live and die with Cangcheng. But I can't see even a trace of integrity from "Yuan Mo". He was timid and afraid of death, so he chose to parasitize other people and left many resurrection points. There is no bottom line in doing things, no spirit of contract, and he breaks the agreement with the marshal when he changes hands. He brings disaster to innocent people in the name of revenge. He does not hesitate to turn his colleagues into evil objects just to strengthen his own power, and blasphemes the people of Cangcheng and the Yunqi Army. Even the medicine man thought he was hypocritical. He used abundant power but was unwilling to admit that he had already deserted the hunting expedition. Having said this, four stars are given to all the people of Cangcheng who died in the battle and the author's great writing style. One star is deducted because the Order of Fertility desecrated Cangcheng and Yuanmo Sword.

The author is a trumpet, this book has a single heroine, there are many knives, but it can be guaranteed to be sweet. It will be updated from time to time before it reaches 100,000 words. If you can, please keep it.

The sword hangs on the head, dancing gracefully, the sinner dances with twirling steps Weeping under the crown, bearing the sin alone, pretending to be a god and hiding it from the sky Dancing with a sword hanging on his head, the sinner dances with twirling steps I shed tears from my crown, I bear the pain alone, and everyone performs the opera With a sword hanging on his head, jade feet fluttering, the sinner dances with twirling steps Shedding tears, regaining power, declaring that no one is guilty Only one person can return to the beginning of the prophecy At the end of the story, only one person did not return "Not only that, but the heart of God, that is my thing..." "When the maple leaves are red, there are always more separations" "I have been betrayed three times..." "As expected, I am not watched by the gods..." "Kanria is not destroyed, right? "Goodbye, Villette, I hope you like the part that has been yours for the past 500 years..." "I sentence the "Water God" to death..." "Listen to me! Listen to me! Stop looking at me with indifferent eyes... Listen to me... I am really a god..." "I lost my heart again..." "Water dragon, water dragon, stop crying..." "Miles and Sylph will never come back..." "We will meet again eventually" "Can you give me the soul of an old friend? "Childhood's dreams are the most easily broken things..." "This time we really see each other again, shadow..."

The plot written by the author is unique. The operation of hunting "Xianzhou" (Xianzhou) against Tiangang is very eye-catching, and contrary to the generally positive image of Xianzhou, the author's Xianzhou focuses on describing the negative image of decadent officialdom. Especially the climax of the plot where the protagonist fakes his own death and escapes makes me feel happy. In the process, the emotional line gradually heats up. It is very interesting to watch. I look forward to the development of the subsequent plot [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

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I read a little bit and it's pretty well written, it feels like it's Jingliu Chu's fantasy [Eating Melon] The biggest flaw is in Chapter 17. The author's thoughts are no longer concealed. He knew that he was going to die, but he still left a token of love for his disciple [face covering]

Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in the world! Ms. Heita is extremely smart! Ms. Black Tower is in trouble!

Because when I played the game, I skipped the plot, so I didn't know much about it. There was no conflict. Then looking at the character settings, I found it quite pleasing. It felt like watching a martial arts movie from the 80s.

Yes, the only shortcoming is the current state of the protagonist [Thinking][Thinking] After all, the form of an evil creature will make you lose sanity just thinking about it. When can you purify the protagonist's abundant power, at least it can turn him into a human form [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I am a reader who prefers the Immortal Boat Alliance and the Imperial Gong. It was really uncomfortable to read, especially the part about Jingliu and Luo Qing. The characters in Jingliu are not Jingliu at all, so I immediately dismissed them. Of course, this is just my subjective feeling. The author has opened up a new path. The writing style is very good, the plot is not delayed, the logic is clear, and the quality is good among the Star Iron articles I have read. I did not read any poisonous points. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The believers of Di Gong bid farewell [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][like][like][like]

Suddenly he thought of something against the heavens. At present, his desire for revenge is already very strong, but he is also a demon, so what will happen if the patrol takes a look at him?

Time flies, the years go by, and the voice of the old friend becomes increasingly blurred. In the end, he is the only one left standing with his sword in hand, guarding the city behind him and guarding the peace he had promised. But the blood will eventually run out, the sword will eventually become dusty, and even the will that lasted until the end will burn to ashes. He finally left, like a candle in the wind, the last light trembling slightly and then completely extinguished. Only a trace of the remaining soul is left, holding the old sword that has long been edgeless, wandering above the empty city, guarding the remaining thoughts. And obsession can never find peace. The sword is there, the city is empty, and the people are gone... Maybe... He will be like this now, holding a cold iron, guarding an empty city, and being alone forever...

It's nice to read. It would be great if you could be the author and write more about it. This author is really bad. The protagonist will not drive Cangcheng behind him, but drive Wushuang to elbow other immortal boats.

It's really good to read, but it's too depressing. The first half of the article is full of pathos, parting, and pain, giving people a feeling of breathlessness [Thinking] Later, the plot is full of resentment and brain-burning, and the various arrangements are dazzling, making you unclear about what you are reading. I can only rely on the author's subsequent summary to tell what the author was writing before. Fortunately, I finally understood it [laughing awkwardly]. After reading more than 90 chapters, I didn't see any sweet love, only the resentful protagonist and the dumbfounded white-haired dumpling. It's not like reading a novel, it's like reading a personal biography [face covering]

The protagonist and Kyoryu are really a couple who are in love with each other.

It's so shameful, I got the devil's body at a young age, this is what Kyoryu is like

The writing is indeed very good, but is the heroine really a mirror? Then isn't the birth the protagonist mentioned in the beginning not his own? ? ?

This one is also good looking and makes my brain spin

Everyone, tap your little hands to give the author a little motivation. One update a day is too little. I didn't discover such a beautiful book until now. From today on, I will send you three updates a day for love. I just ask the author to update more. So far, five-star praise! Come on, author!

It's okay, keep writing, single female protagonist.

The author "sold his dignity" to get five-star praise, put it away [laughing evilly] [like]

Wonderful, quite wonderful, the writing style and content are very good Bengtie fanfic. But it's better not to bring it into the game perspective. After all, Bengtie is only a 12-plus game, and the content in the novel is still a bit ahead of its time. Come on, author, write well.

The characterization is vivid and interesting, but what I like more is the chapters related to Jingliu

Chief, lead the evil Cang City to build the Jade Tower into the sky! I feel that the biggest feature of this book is that Cangcheng, the evil creature of the monster boat, can be deeply cultivated by revitalizing Cangcheng. I think it can be thoroughly studied and cultivated hard. If Cangcheng is just mentioned in passing, this book will have no special features.

The writing style is okay, I prefer self-psychological description, and the plot progresses slowly. From other reviews, it is said that it is a sweet story, so it is understandable that the plot is slow. I have not read much, and I am not sure whether there is a female protagonist, or is it just a daily routine? Starting from the appearance of Kagami-ryu, there has been Kagami-ryu in every chapter. The protagonist's presence is much lower than that of Kagura-ryu, but the character design is obviously not bad. It is very interesting to write about it.

No matter what, I have to make up ten words.

Author, don't stop updating. With your update speed, I'm afraid that if you stop updating, you will never update again.

Come on! When does the protagonist meet Jingliu?

Very nice, can you make the battle scenes more realistic? The commanders all have galaxy-level combat power. In addition, the memory commander has no memory. The combat power in that book is very accurate. Ten Nice 6