I Was Just an Ordinary Mortal, Until I Set Out on the Path to Immortality

I have carefully read the entire work, and overall I think it has the potential to become a masterpiece. Let me talk about the shortcomings first: Disadvantages 1. The number of words is a bit unsatisfactory 2. The title of the book is not that eye-catching 3. It is the kind of traditional fairy tale that is slow and popular, and its progress is slow. Advantages: Rich content settings: World construction: The novel constructs a world of immortality with clear layers and rigorous logic, from the division of fourth-rate warriors to master-level masters, to the distinction between inner and outer sects of the Spirit Sword Sect. These settings not only increase the realism of the story, but also provide a clear direction for the growth of the characters. Cultivation system: Detailed description of internal skills, mental methods, formation layout, alchemy and medicine and other cultivation elements, allowing readers to have an in-depth understanding of the rules of this fictional world. Clear logical framework: The development of the storyline follows a reasonable cause-and-effect relationship. For example, Xiao Fan was regarded as a mediocre person in his family, but he did not give up because of this. Instead, he chose to travel around the world to find his own path; after finally entering the Lingjian Sect, he faced a strict assessment system, which all reflected the author's careful consideration of the fate of the characters. Three-dimensional character creation: The protagonist has a distinct image: Although Xiao Fan comes from a noble family, he is not outstanding. This ordinaryness makes him more likely to resonate with ordinary readers. His character trait of not being discouraged in the face of setbacks and courageously pursuing his dreams is very attractive. The supporting characters each have their own characteristics: even if the main character is a member of the Shark Gang, the author is carefully shaping it to make it appear that he has his own thinking and brains, rather than just giving away experience without any brain. Beautiful writing style: The author's writing is lively and poetic. Some classical poems or sentences are interspersed in the narrative process, which not only adds cultural heritage but also enhances the artistic value of the work. Tight story rhythm: The beginning of the novel quickly attracts the reader's interest by introducing the background and current situation of the Pig's Foot family; The next step is to write about Pig's Foot's travels in the world. Then the plot gradually reaches its climax as he joins the Lingjian Sect and faces various challenges. Each chapter is closely connected and does not feel lengthy or procrastinating. Even when describing daily practice life, it can maintain a moderate sense of tension, allowing readers to keep reading.

Finished reading this book. How should I put it? How should I, an old bookworm, evaluate this book? It's wonderful, really wonderful. The plot is reasonable, watchable, not exaggerated, touching, and the many details are worth pondering.

I cannot describe in words how much I love this book, but I am also a little afraid of this book. It makes me feel truly immersive and truly magnificent. I am afraid that I will fall deeply into it and be unable to extricate myself.

It's really good to read, the author's writing style is good, and the characters written by the author have very distinct characteristics. I have been short of books recently, but I came across this book. The plot is really exciting, and I really love the author to death.

Refuel yourself!

It's a novel with a rather exciting plot. I think it's pretty good so far. The author is determined not to overwhelm it.

The protagonist has a brain, the author's writing is very good, the characters are three-dimensional, and the plot is not childish and logical.

It's really good to read. I'm a person who has no interest in reading. I haven't read a few of them at all. I really like this book. I've finished the first one.

To be honest, I have read countless books. But there are very few books that can write the content so thoroughly. This book is really good.

This book was recommended by a friend. It's my first time reading this kind of book. I think it's pretty good. It has a brand new setting, a plot that's not cliche, and it's not laggy either.