Start into the Night, Then Merge with the Heavens

It's a good book to read, and the foreshadowing is pretty good. The problem now is that the world after the protagonist's time travel seems a bit abrupt. There is too much content, which loses the taste and is not so exciting. If there is too little content, the time travel will appear too abrupt. Then I feel that it can be relaxed and humorous to make the protagonist more vivid, instead of To become stronger for the sake of becoming stronger, it would be meaningless to just complete tasks and practice crazily in a world. You can add a little bit of daily life behind the book to make the protagonist more vivid, otherwise it will be boring to read. Add some relaxation and humor. It should have a wider audience at present and it is easier to write. Otherwise, it is true that few people will read this book.

Come on, author! Never be a eunuch. Will the author Ye Hongyu accept it? Ask for reply. . .

The author made the book too big. The front part is very novel. When I came out later, I knew that the book had to be written with millions of words. The book was too big. Please keep writing. There are only a few people at the beginning, but more and more people will read later. Come on.

It's okay, keep up the good work

Really pretty

Good luck to the author!

Unexpectedly, unexpectedly beautiful.

A group of great people have created their own stories in many worlds. The world view is very grand, and the layout is quite long-term. It is the most in-depth book I have read this year. This type of book should be carefully studied [Cool][Cool][Cool]

New content and clear organization

Not bad, keep up the good work

It's really unexpectedly beautiful

Not enough, not enough

The world view is too strong

The world view is too big. It looks pretty good so far. I hope you don't stretch your hips later and keep it up first.

So little, so small, a lot of foreshadowing, fill it in slowly, don't be in a hurry

Is there such a thing as perfection? [Laughs evilly]

The author works hard to update, I hope the author can stabilize it, there are a lot of holes dug, I am afraid that it will not be smoothed out later [eating melon]

Two words are beautiful, three words are very beautiful, and four words are very, very beautiful.

What I've written so far is okay. Tomato is pretty good.

Very very very very great👍👍

A very good book, keep up the good work and look forward to seeing you