Miss Angel, Stop Breaking Into My Home!

Chapter 72 was quite amazing before. It may have some flaws, but overall it is very, very beautiful. I almost read 100 chapters overnight. Chapter 72 and onwards include, but are not limited to, forcing the Riddler (for example, not asking questions when there is time), the protagonist making abstract remarks, forcibly not thinking too much, etc. (Don't use God's perspective to argue, according to the author's way of writing, the reader does not know much more information than the protagonist, and from the perspective of the protagonist, the known information should be used) It should be an aspect that needs to be taken into consideration, but it is forced to be ignored (haha, or not considered at all). It just gives me the feeling that the things that should be considered at the moment have been prevaricated, and it feels like a forcible foreshadowing. I am afraid that a plot will suddenly come up when the time comes. If the things that should be considered are not taken into account, then the plot will be a bit too boring. The overall plot is still very good, the writing style is like a silly skirt friend, it's great and I love watching it 😆

The writing is very good, and I was a little surprised that it was so good. So far (the author said it is a single female protagonist), whether it is the world view, plot and emotional line, I can feel that the author has a relatively clear outline. The more I read it carefully, the more obvious it becomes. However, I feel that the author's writing style has a clear outline. A bit green or unfamiliar, the logic is obviously quite smooth, but the expression is a bit strange, but the writing ideas are very clear, and there is a feeling of a professional player's rehabilitation training. Although I can feel it, it does not affect the reading, so it is not a big problem. I will start to make up for this shortcoming later. As of about Chapter 50, there are no obvious problems. The only problem is that because the world view is not too small, the amount of information in the early stage is not too small. You need to be more patient when reading, and you will feel suddenly enlightened later on. Personally, I have a very high evaluation of this book. The author must grasp it. It is rare to find a nugget of gold in the sea of sand. I hope to see the day when this book can be smoothly launched and completed smoothly.

It's been a long time since I've come across such a delightful novel. The male protagonist has already hit the mark with more than 80 pieces. It's really delightful. It's delicious and sweet. It's sweet [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]. The only drawback is that there are too few daily routines (author, you know what I mean). After the first copy, the heroine even wears a ring on her ring finger. It feels a bit abrupt at a time when there is a huge amount of information and little daily interaction (but it doesn't matter, we just love reading this kind of [love]) Of course, there are also shortcomings. For example, the description of the plot of some items is a bit rough, which makes some people unable to understand and keep worrying about it. Of course, this is just a small number of authors who like to write how they like, and it is good [you take a closer look]

Sweet? Sweet. Does it look good? Nice. The writing is good and the emotions are delicate, but I don't know why I felt a burst of sadness in my heart when I saw the male and female protagonists being intimate. There is no reason, but overall it is not bad and worth watching. The body feels warm

It's good to read. When I read the title, I thought it was just a simple read. I didn't expect the book to be so logically logical, with so many foreshadowings, the plot being so tight, and so brain-burning... After reading 70 chapters, I thought I was watching the finale. The last time I felt this way, I was reading the first few dozen chapters of Jian Lai [face covering] All in all, it is a rare good book, and the daily life of the male and female protagonists is also very sweet (the emotional line develops really fast, it is the first time I have seen someone get on base so quickly). I hope there will still be more scenes for the female protagonist in the future [Blow kiss]

Good job, reward! This book contains a lot of material, but unlike other books, the author's writing style is online. Although the world view is a little unclear at the moment, it can be seen that it is a huge world view (great joy) Then the author issued mysterious coordinates in the book many times. Please don't let down the author's efforts () Finally, even if a certain manager in the group (perhaps the author) sent me the word "Go away", I still have to ask this sentence: "What's the problem with this?"

The writing of this book is good. It's not the kind of book that makes you feel uncomfortable for a while but makes you feel uncomfortable all day long. The plot is currently very sweet, but there is a hidden murderous intention, but I believe that the protagonist can handle it well. After all, the author, you don't want to receive a razor blade every day, do you @ Return to the Abyss [Punch Out] You can eat it with confidence [Blow Kiss]

It's a very interesting book, with a grand world view, and the author is constantly digging holes and filling holes. If I could, I would even like to read 180 of them in one go, but unfortunately I can't bear to part with it. In addition, the author has been seriously procrastinating recently, making it even more difficult to realize this wish. Let's talk about it in more detail. The daily interactions are very sweet and delicate, and sweets are often given out. I think the protagonist can still change the existing knife in the future. I have actually driven the car. After all, that chapter seems to be still under review xD. In terms of growth and development, because the main character needs to slowly advance through multiple endings to acquire abilities, it is not very wheelchair-friendly. However, the definition and application of counter-magic are quite eye-catching, and the introduction also said that this may be the core ability of the protagonist, so I still look forward to it slowly. (In fact, what I want to see the most is Suenratina, their daughter and mother-in-law, a family of four happily making dumplings!) If you come to read it, there is only one big problem besides delaying the update. It is that some chapters overuse AI. Things like Klein bottle Mobius are not mentioned at all in the original text. They are all words that the r1 model loves to use. It is not clear whether the author did not review the manuscript or simply posted it without processing. Sometimes this kind of AI-generated content is really disgusting. I hope the author can listen to it orz

I have finished reading the first volume. Overall, it is a solid work. You can read it when you are short of books. Now let me talk about my personal views on the advantages and disadvantages of this book. Advantages: The world view is grand, the outline and main plot are very good, the overall plot is grasped well, and the male and female protagonists are pretty good. Disadvantages: The reading is not very smooth, but the scene switching and plot connection are a bit stiff. This is reflected in the lack of detailed description of the character's personality and environment, the weak sense of character interaction, the lack of grasp of daily life and the main line, and the foreshadowing is rather blunt. It would be better if the foreshadowing is buried in daily life. Personal suggestion: You can study Mystery carefully. Let's not talk about the comments from netizens, but its success can prove its excellence in these aspects. If the author can learn a lot and apply it in this book, it can definitely be upgraded to fairy grass. This is a point that tests the author's writing skills. If you learn it well, the author can not only greatly improve the word count and quality of the work, but also master the essential skill of a master, "Water Word Count"! ! ! , And can better present a more realistic "World of Twelve Gods" to readers. Ha, this is just as an old bookworm, I saw this good book on Tomato, I hope it will become better, and I would like to express my personal opinion. (Don't spray if you don't like it).

It's very interesting to watch. First of all, the plot has no ink. The male and female protagonists are mainly inked by the old couple. The early stage was completed very quickly, and there was also education and training. Secondly, the world view is grand, and it can be seen that the sections are connected very smoothly, which makes people want to keep reading. In the end, there is no depressing plot at present, and I hope there will be no more in the future. Are there any books of the same type that you can recommend?