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Chapter 72 was quite amazing before. It may have some flaws, but overall it is very, very beautiful. I almost read 100 chapters overnight. Chapter 72 and onwards include, but are not limited to, forcing the Riddler (for example, not asking questions when there is time), the protagonist making abstract remarks, forcibly not thinking too much, etc. (Don't use God's perspective to argue, according to the author's way of writing, the reader does not know much more information than the protagonist, and from the perspective of the protagonist, the known information should be used) It should be an aspect that needs to be taken into consideration, but it is forced to be ignored (haha, or not considered at all). It just gives me the feeling that the things that should be considered at the moment have been prevaricated, and it feels like a forcible foreshadowing. I am afraid that a plot will suddenly come up when the time comes. If the things that should be considered are not taken into account, then the plot will be a bit too boring. The overall plot is still very good, the writing style is like a silly skirt friend, it's great and I love watching it 😆

The writing is very good, and I was a little surprised that it was so good. So far (the author said it is a single female protagonist), whether it is the world view, plot and emotional line, I can feel that the author has a relatively clear outline. The more I read it carefully, the more obvious it becomes. However, I feel that the author's writing style has a clear outline. A bit green or unfamiliar, the logic is obviously quite smooth, but the expression is a bit strange, but the writing ideas are very clear, and there is a feeling of a professional player's rehabilitation training. Although I can feel it, it does not affect the reading, so it is not a big problem. I will start to make up for this shortcoming later. As of about Chapter 50, there are no obvious problems. The only problem is that because the world view is not too small, the amount of information in the early stage is not too small. You need to be more patient when reading, and you will feel suddenly enlightened later on. Personally, I have a very high evaluation of this book. The author must grasp it. It is rare to find a nugget of gold in the sea of sand. I hope to see the day when this book can be smoothly launched and completed smoothly.

It's been a long time since I've come across such a delightful novel. The male protagonist has already hit the mark with more than 80 pieces. It's really delightful. It's delicious and sweet. It's sweet [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]. The only drawback is that there are too few daily routines (author, you know what I mean). After the first copy, the heroine even wears a ring on her ring finger. It feels a bit abrupt at a time when there is a huge amount of information and little daily interaction (but it doesn't matter, we just love reading this kind of [love]) Of course, there are also shortcomings. For example, the description of the plot of some items is a bit rough, which makes some people unable to understand and keep worrying about it. Of course, this is just a small number of authors who like to write how they like, and it is good [you take a closer look]

Sweet? Sweet. Does it look good? Nice. The writing is good and the emotions are delicate, but I don't know why I felt a burst of sadness in my heart when I saw the male and female protagonists being intimate. There is no reason, but overall it is not bad and worth watching. The body feels warm

It's good to read. When I read the title, I thought it was just a simple read. I didn't expect the book to be so logically logical, with so many foreshadowings, the plot being so tight, and so brain-burning... After reading 70 chapters, I thought I was watching the finale. The last time I felt this way, I was reading the first few dozen chapters of Jian Lai [face covering] All in all, it is a rare good book, and the daily life of the male and female protagonists is also very sweet (the emotional line develops really fast, it is the first time I have seen someone get on base so quickly). I hope there will still be more scenes for the female protagonist in the future [Blow kiss]

The writing of this book is good. It's not the kind of book that makes you feel uncomfortable for a while but makes you feel uncomfortable all day long. The plot is currently very sweet, but there is a hidden murderous intention, but I believe that the protagonist can handle it well. After all, the author, you don't want to receive a razor blade every day, do you @ Return to the Abyss [Punch Out] You can eat it with confidence [Blow Kiss]

Good job, reward! This book contains a lot of material, but unlike other books, the author's writing style is online. Although the world view is a little unclear at the moment, it can be seen that it is a huge world view (great joy) Then the author issued mysterious coordinates in the book many times. Please don't let down the author's efforts () Finally, even if a certain manager in the group (perhaps the author) sent me the word "Go away", I still have to ask this sentence: "What's the problem with this?"

It's a very interesting book, with a grand world view, and the author is constantly digging holes and filling holes. If I could, I would even like to read 180 of them in one go, but unfortunately I can't bear to part with it. In addition, the author has been seriously procrastinating recently, making it even more difficult to realize this wish. Let's talk about it in more detail. The daily interactions are very sweet and delicate, and sweets are often given out. I think the protagonist can still change the existing knife in the future. I have actually driven the car. After all, that chapter seems to be still under review xD. In terms of growth and development, because the main character needs to slowly advance through multiple endings to acquire abilities, it is not very wheelchair-friendly. However, the definition and application of counter-magic are quite eye-catching, and the introduction also said that this may be the core ability of the protagonist, so I still look forward to it slowly. (In fact, what I want to see the most is Suenratina, their daughter and mother-in-law, a family of four happily making dumplings!) If you come to read it, there is only one big problem besides delaying the update. It is that some chapters overuse AI. Things like Klein bottle Mobius are not mentioned at all in the original text. They are all words that the r1 model loves to use. It is not clear whether the author did not review the manuscript or simply posted it without processing. Sometimes this kind of AI-generated content is really disgusting. I hope the author can listen to it orz

I have finished reading the first volume. Overall, it is a solid work. You can read it when you are short of books. Now let me talk about my personal views on the advantages and disadvantages of this book. Advantages: The world view is grand, the outline and main plot are very good, the overall plot is grasped well, and the male and female protagonists are pretty good. Disadvantages: The reading is not very smooth, but the scene switching and plot connection are a bit stiff. This is reflected in the lack of detailed description of the character's personality and environment, the weak sense of character interaction, the lack of grasp of daily life and the main line, and the foreshadowing is rather blunt. It would be better if the foreshadowing is buried in daily life. Personal suggestion: You can study Mystery carefully. Let's not talk about the comments from netizens, but its success can prove its excellence in these aspects. If the author can learn a lot and apply it in this book, it can definitely be upgraded to fairy grass. This is a point that tests the author's writing skills. If you learn it well, the author can not only greatly improve the word count and quality of the work, but also master the essential skill of a master, "Water Word Count"! ! ! , And can better present a more realistic "World of Twelve Gods" to readers. Ha, this is just as an old bookworm, I saw this good book on Tomato, I hope it will become better, and I would like to express my personal opinion. (Don't spray if you don't like it).

The protagonist is a bit of a beast, but very good-looking. A brand-new magic system, a somewhat abstract protagonist, a naive heroine, and supporting characters with distinctive personalities. Overall, it's very good. It's a book you can wait for.

It's very interesting to watch. First of all, the plot has no ink. The male and female protagonists are mainly inked by the old couple. The early stage was completed very quickly, and there was also education and training. Secondly, the world view is grand, and it can be seen that the sections are connected very smoothly, which makes people want to keep reading. In the end, there is no depressing plot at present, and I hope there will be no more in the future. Are there any books of the same type that you can recommend?

Overall, it's okay. It can be seen that the author has a good idea of ​​the novel's world view, setting, and funny atmosphere. But I personally think there are still some flaws, that is, the ending of the Fourth God's Apocalypse in the first dungeon is a bit too long, but after all, it is the first one with a little bit of setting, which is understandable. The main reason is that the transition before the dungeon is not good, that is, I entered the dungeon not long after conquering the light angel. It is too compact and the pace is too fast, so that it is easy to persuade people to quit, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses too fast. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better.

To be honest, I came here after seeing the author like and reply in the comment area [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] Let's talk about my senses. I didn't react at first when I saw the newborn Dong Xi. Then I looked at fifty or sixty pictures and flipped through the comment area before I realized it was a homophonic pronunciation of [face covering] [face covering] [OK]. Then you will find that the comment area is more abstract than the book. This type of book is not very friendly to me, because I have basically never come into contact with related types of games or books. The first copy I read in the past was like a spoon bigger than your mouth. I don't know why. I feel that the combat power system is a bit inaccurate. It is strong and weak, and there is no specific standard. After having a general understanding of the worldview, the author throws out an unclear theory of the relationship between God and the sun. What exactly does the double star play in it? Which side does Si Chen represent? I'm confused again. And regarding the protagonist's door ability, any door can be closed. What will happen if the door is destroyed when it is closed? Without talking about these things, this book is still okay. The writing is humorous and witty, and there are a lot of abstract jokes that I don't know [face covering]. There are no flaws. It is worth continuing to follow. Finally, I emphasize that the world can be destroyed, but it cannot live without it. The protagonist must have a living mouth and teeth!

There are many flaws in the emotional expression, but it is barely watchable. The world view is quite interesting. Finally, the most anticipated thing is the 12 world lines and 12 different Bad Ends! How many wonderful ways the little angel can die... It's exciting to think about it!

The world view is grand and interesting. There are many places worth studying carefully. It is a book that needs to be read with your mind. Also, author, who can read these few pictures in one day? Hurry up, one hundred thousand words a day [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Don't look at the lack of time for reading. But I really like it. Because the male and female protagonists occupy equal positions. Nowadays, many novels with single female protagonists do not make people feel the feeling of running in both directions. Either the male protagonist is unilaterally powerful. Although the female protagonist is also very powerful, when these two equal positions are put together, the female protagonist becomes like an NPC that can only deduct 6 points. The feelings are mutual and redeem each other. Pulling against each other. It feels great.

The writing is still a bit weak, but the story is very interesting. The single heroine is eternal, and the two lines of love and battle are intertwined and parallel. It is very good. I hope the author can put the knife into the copy, but the main line must be sweet. I beg you.

It is a very strong book. The world view is very large and the author can probably handle it (probably). The story is very attractive. Each character is created with flesh and blood and can support the development of the plot. The shortcomings... The relationship between the male and female protagonists develops too fast at the beginning, which is a bit uncomfortable to watch, but it can also be understood that the bond between the two reincarnations has led to the same relationship between the two (dense fog) Then the rhythm of the plot is a bit strange (maybe it's because the latest chapter hasn't been finished yet?) All in all, it's a book worth reading. Finally, let me join the group as soon as possible

Nice looking, structurally sound, though. . Um. The plot is really fast. My mind is still accepting the setting of [End Page], and then the setting of [Si Chen] suddenly pops up. But good books are for sure [admiration] The relationship between the male and female protagonists is very good, but there is always a feeling that the male protagonist treats the female protagonist as a tool [face covering] Maybe it's my problem

The author's thoughts and ideas are not bad. We can also see the shadow of many famous works in it. However, the writing skills need to be strengthened. It is a good story but it is not clearly written. It is just a simple setting without proper foreshadowing. I would like to give you four stars to encourage you. The author has great potential. I hope you will make progress. The middle period is a bit boring. The subject matter is obviously good but not attractive. We still need to work hard.

Sweet, Latina little angel cute meow [blowing kiss] At the moment, I don't feel that there are too many negative points. Except for the fact that the male protagonist seems to have had sex with other women, which I can't accept, there are also some small flaws. I originally wanted to give it 4 stars, but the author is quite prolific and thought about it and gave it 5 stars...[Punch] The current perception is that of a female warrior + gods. I personally feel that this is a pretty good Western fantasy novel among single female protagonists. I hope the author will continue to work hard, meow [Sending Hearts] Don't be like the female warrior next door who just keeps updating and then stops updating [Petrochemical] [Eating Melon]

Let me give you a quick review. The book is a good one, but it's not to my liking. I can hit the radio directly. The rhythm of the sound is definitely very comfortable. When reading this kind of book, the author should work hard. There are many readers who want to read more, so I must read more! ! ! You are the best [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The overall setting is very satisfactory. There are no big problems with the main plot, and the emotional line between Sun and Latina is also well shaped. At the same time, there is no common situation in novels with single female protagonists, "the plot is only about the male and female protagonists, and the others have no plot at all." This makes me read it quite satisfactorily. The remaining problem I think is that I rush to the truth too many times and write it too densely, which will cause reading fatigue. For readers who follow updates every day, the impression may not be too abrupt, but for those who are new to the game or book readers, it may be too frequent.

This is really well written. At least the time-travel section in The Glory that I have seen now is a bit amazing to me. It is really not easy to write the time-travel well (🍅The time-travel I saw before was simply betrayed and then went back to stop eating beef, which is basically not very smart)

After reading Golden Chapter 3, I am a little impatient to comment. My first feeling is that the author's composition is a bit complicated, and I can basically see the worldview. The content is okay, and there is also my favorite dubbing, if the author could improve the language a little more. It can compete with Field's book in my heart. Anyway, cheers for the author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] How should I put it? In fact, many book friends have noticed it. The author's first copy was not very good, mainly due to 1. There were too many information settings, which was like eating endless space. 2. The main line was not clear and you couldn't understand it if you didn't read it carefully. 3. The first copy was too early, the male and female protagonists had too little emotion, and the world view was unclear. But the setting is okay, I hope the author will keep up the good work

Reading a pretty good book so far (57 chapters) The background is a magical world that I like (although the protagonist uses weird magic). I also like the description of the little angel (silly, quite perfect). Most of the books on this platform are based on a template, but the current copy (The End of the Fourth God's Apocalypse) is originally written by the author himself. There are 12 God's Apocalypse in the background of the story. If these 12 copies are all original by himself, this book will surpass most books. Judging from the introduction, the protagonist should become a god later and create a copy (possibly a modern copy). Based on the ending of the fourth god Qi Ri, it is speculated after seeing modern firearms. The author makes the protagonist more humorous and makes people interested in reading. If it is written like this, it can be estimated to be 9.4 Points (personal reference) Rating: five stars

It's a good article about another world, but it has a faint Star Iron flavor, maybe because the author is a bit crazy. The protagonist is quite brave and resourceful, otherwise he would have died a long time ago. The buffs are stacked at the beginning, but luckily there is a mechanism! The ability is also mechanically strange, but the pace is relatively fast. Single female protagonist, sweet story

Speaking of how to score, it shouldn't be taken away. Also, the offline time does not count. Kuso. If you read this book, please don't rush to delete it or quit the mouth. I guarantee that this book is a super good-looking book with some brains. I have really finished it several times (actually, it is too much foreshadowing and foreshadowing to try to follow the train of thought?). For example, it is absolutely fun to understand the copy of Order City. It is the most popular Daxi fantasy book at the moment. This score is definitely low. Finally, I have to say, Maomao is awesome! ! ! ! ! Don't slap your low-scoring words randomly! ! ! ! !

It's been a long time since I've had such a pleasant experience chasing a book. This book has moderate jokes, the writing style is more to my taste, the plot is relatively compact, and it's moderately entertaining while advancing. The most important thing is that the teaching and training is colorful but not silvery, and it doesn't feel like a novice author. Now that I have read Chapter 300, I feel that the protagonist Su En has an unclear relationship with several of the seven Gods who appear frequently. As a reader, I don't mind harem (one-to-many) and pure love (one-on-one), but pure love is labeled. I hope the author can control the scale. I personally don't mind seeing Su En and the Seven Gods having an affair, but not everyone accepts it. I hope the author will consider this issue.

It looks good, I like this style, the plot is interesting, the single female protagonist is sweet, and the emotional line is gradual. The plot is not too bad, it's nice to watch [love][love][love]😋😋😋