Being Imprisoned by the Yandere Young Lady, I Am Crying

Comment on "Yesterday I was a love rival, but today I am my wife?" : 1. The unique charm of story setting Integration of elements of transformation and time travel The story setting of this novel is very novel, cleverly combining the elements of Bianbai (transforming into a lily) and time-travel elements. The plot of Jiang Xiaoyue transforming into a loli and traveling through a romance novel immediately caught the reader's attention. This setting adds infinite possibilities to the story, making readers eager to know what kind of story the protagonist will encounter in this special situation. For example, Jiang Xiaoyue kissed her love rival after time travel and then ran away. Such a strange opening laid interesting foreshadowing for the subsequent plot development. Initial construction of character relationships The character relationship between Jiang Xiaoyue and Xia Murou, "a cute little loli x a sinister big sister", is full of highlights. From the initial relationship of love rivals, to the unexpected intimate contact, to the sudden change of identity, the rapid transformation of this relationship creates a strong dramatic conflict. On the first day of reporting on campus, Jiang Xiaoyue discovered that her love rival was a classmate and was taken home. From worrying about being beaten to becoming a "wife", this reversal made the story full of interest and suspense. 2. Delicate portrayal of character emotions Jiang Xiaoyue's emotional journey Jiang Xiaoyue's emotional changes are described very delicately. She went from being ignorant and confused after time travel to developing feelings for Xia Murou. The process was gradual. Her feelings for Xia Muruo went from careful testing to wholehearted devotion, and readers can truly feel her inner joy and expectation. However, after being hurt by Xia Murou as a tool, her frustration became very real. Her departure was not an impulsive move, but a helpless move after being stabbed in the heart many times. This emotional change makes readers full of sympathy for her. Xia Muruo's emotional changes The emotional transformation of Xia Muruo's character is also very layered. She initially regarded Jiang Xiaoyue as a tool for entertainment, and her intimate behavior was just out of a playful mentality. This cold, arrogant and sinister character was clearly shaped. But when Jiang Xiaoyue left, she began to panic. This change showed that she actually had different feelings for Jiang Xiaoyue deep in her heart, but she had not noticed it before. This kind of belated emotional change makes the character more three-dimensional. 3. Grasp the rhythm of plot development Easy and fun in the early stage The early plot of the novel is full of relaxed and interesting atmosphere. Jiang Xiaoyue's series of funny encounters after time travel, such as the unexpected intimacy with her love rival, various interesting things on campus, and the confused state after her identity change, all make readers laugh while reading. This relaxed atmosphere paved the way for subsequent emotional entanglements. Emotional ups and downs in the mid-term The middle plot begins to enter the stage of emotional ups and downs. The emotional asymmetry between Jiang Xiaoyue and Xia Muruo began to appear. Jiang Xiaoyue's affectionateness was in sharp contrast to Xia Muruo's teasing. Every time Jiang Xiaoyue is hurt, it feels like a prick in the reader's heart, and the tension and emotional depression of the plot gradually increase. Later reversals and expectations Later, Jiang Xiaoyue's departure and Xia Murou's panic formed a huge reversal. This reversal makes readers full of expectations for the subsequent story, and they want to know whether Xia Murou will pursue Jiang Xiaoyue, and whether the relationship between them can be reunited. 4. Theme and Reader Attraction Themes about love and cherishment Behind the seemingly relaxed love story style, this novel actually contains profound themes about love and cherishment. Xia Murou only realized her importance after losing Jiang Xiaoyue. This is a warning to people not to hurt each other easily in love, but to cherish the person in front of them. Appeal to a specific group of readers For readers who like hundreds of twists and turns, 1v1 love, stick-to-stick plots, and the plot of chasing his wife in the crematorium, this novel contains almost all their favorite elements. The sweet love scenes can satisfy readers' fantasies about beautiful love, and the plot of chasing his wife in the crematorium adds to the twists and turns of the story, allowing readers to continuously resonate emotionally during the reading process. In summary, "Yesterday I was a love rival, but today I am my wife?" "" Is a very distinctive novel. It attracts readers with its unique story setting, delicate character emotions, reasonable plot rhythm and profound themes. It is a love-themed novel worth reading.

Delicate emotions are enough to become a god! I laughed while watching it from the front, and cried when I took it in later. It was very sad. Moreover, the heroine breaks away from the established story line and goes far away! It's really easy to leave as soon as possible, the author is beyond 99.999! Like it very much! Those who were nagging and nagging, and were caught and continued to pull before they left, were really disappointed. And this novel gives me the feeling that I no longer travel through time and follow the story line in the book, it transcends the concept of fan fiction. It has become a real world of flesh and blood! You are not stuck in one map or one city, the others are just background boards. This is a real world! It's like the majestic feeling that Western fantasy novels bring me! Just like "So-and-so's Frilian", you can go wherever you want, there are no restrictions, the map is vast, and you are not restricted! The system also loves the protagonist and goes crazy with her! We don't have to do any tasks anymore. As long as we never meet another heroine again, we will all have the best ending... This is the best ending. It's really sad, waiting for my wife to be chased at the crematorium [top post][top post][full]

It's so impressive, 233 is also a veteran of 🍍. I've been reading her books since junior high school. The writing style and scene description are naturally impeccable. The plot of this book is also very good, but more novel plots will be perfect. I also hope that 233 can develop better in 🍅.

Urban transformation favorite. Personal opinion: Different from the others next door, the two heroines are very lovable. Jiang Xiaoyue is spoiled but spoiled, while Xia Muruou is sickly and has a bottom line, and is willing to change her ways and pay for her past. Although it is a short story, it has to be said to be concise and concise. To be honest, the audience for male-to-female transformation should be boys, right? If you come here to see the yandere, if you really can't stand it anymore, Chengtao is at your limit. Summary: I feel like this is a work that can compete with Chengtao. It's hard to judge which one is better, as the tracks are different. Chengtao's love is unforgettable, and the will of the world is shattered. Jiang Xia's love is like a small flame that won't go out, hot and warm.

It's a very good article, with a compact plot and very vivid descriptions. You can imagine the scene just by reading the words. Let me summarize my personal feelings after reading it: In the early stage, the powerful daughter Xia Muruo bullies the weak and cute Jiang Xiaoyue (this part is really fun to watch, and I often laugh evilly while watching it) ), in a small part of the middle period, our eldest lady finally noticed Xiaoyue's heart, but Xiaoyue left and chased her (this part was like a cold war, it was a bit uncomfortable to watch, and they gritted their teeth when they couldn't be braver), and in the later period, the sweet text was super sweet, and I liked it (laughing even more pervertedly). All in all, I highly recommend everyone to read it. It's also finished with Spreading Flowers. Thank you to the author for your hard work!

It is a masterpiece. I have read almost 10 Mary Sue books. Except for the works of Teacher Meng, this one is the best one I have ever read. The sweetness and knife are very well controlled, the emotions are very delicate, and the characters are very vivid. The cute and eccentric Xiaoyue and the cold-faced and warm-hearted Xia, who has a closed heart, and other characters with distinctive personalities are everywhere. Anyway, it is good-looking! ! ! Rush it to me! Enjoy the ending with confidence!

I can only say that the materials produced by the old workshop are authentic, very good, and very impressive. … But I am a little disappointed (can I say that), after all, I seem to have seen another almost identical template article in 233 in Hedgehog before, and I have really seen this template many times recently... Personally, I would like to read a grand story like the vampire girl and Sigrid... But there is really no way to make a living by writing, so just think of it as my thoughts on the first fully ordered version of "Bianbai (Vampire)" qwq

An excellent lily work with excellent plot and smooth rhythm At present, it seems to be non-toxic, the setting is relatively novel, the main characters have three views and business online, cutting through the mess quickly, without watering down, the plot is compact, the slightly faster pace has its own advantages, there are endless things to watch, there are refreshing points, sweet interactions are just around the corner, there is a crematorium for chasing the wife (good to watch, love to watch [Adoration]), the veteran author is guaranteed to complete the book, so I don't even know what else to comment. The overall worldview is full of idealism, and it is not appropriate to criticize it in the name of "not conforming to reality." After all, it is an ideal and romantic novel world. Therefore, in my opinion, there are no obvious and influential loopholes in the overall plot of the novel.

It's a nice little Lily book, a little bit like a novel I read. The protagonists are Ye Fuli and Ye Zhen. In short, the author's writing style and description and processing of details are excellent! It's a good lily! Here I wish the author to get high traffic soon, the novel will become more and more famous, and inspiration will never be lacking! [Send heart][Send heart]

Some of the small details about Xia and the arrogant but not coquettish scenes in the middle are a bit uncomfortable, and then some of the waste of food are a bit unacceptable to me, and the overall shortcomings of short and medium stories are not rich enough. It can be said that the physical description of the characters is okay, but both the system and the emotional description of events are a little worse. The system is more of a cake. The icing was not cake-like or creamy, and the same goes for the relationship. At first, the heroine liked Xia Ling, but then she was misunderstood for being arrogant but not coquettish. After chasing his wife at the crematorium, and later together, they became truly tsundere. It can be said that the pace is very fast. It is not as detailed and full of emotions as described in the other two yandere lily novels. But after all, this is also a word limit, and overall it is very good. The short and medium stories are fast-paced and are a small piece of cake in my reading career.

Not bad, she is a real and fake daughter, and she is also the type who bullies idiots (protagonist). Her own characteristics are still very distinct, the character setting is quite attractive, the subject matter is very novel, the plot is okay, it is not a mess, it has potential, and there is a high probability that you will not lose money if you invest. In terms of shortcomings, maybe the author's grasp of the emotions of the characters is not very good. The characters feel a bit "fake" and do not have particularly three-dimensional emotions (the reason can be said to be that there is too little emotional foreshadowing, and some plots feel very confusing) I feel like I actually have a little bit of inexperience, but if I keep working hard, the book will still be pretty good. The above comments were made before the 100,000-word refinement. They are already quite different from the current text, so the reference value for follow-up comments will be greater. The creation of the character has become quite natural after the revision. The protagonist's soft, cute and easy-to-push-over image of a little white flower loli and the heroine who seems to bully the protagonist but actually "cares" about the protagonist in her heart and in some other places (mostly possessive at the moment) really poked me. Moreover, after refinement, the character has been integrated into the character's daily life and behavioral performance. It is not limited to the author's repeated emphasis on character. I personally like this kind of book. The subject matter is somewhat similar to "After Feng Aotian was reborn, he set his sights on the useless and cute me" (Ye Fuli Ye Zhen's book). They are both systems, real and fake daughters, chasing his wife and "bullying" the protagonist in the crematorium. However, the characteristics of this book are still very distinct, not only the difference in the characters, but also the direction of the plot and the psychology. The description of the details is quite different. There are shadows of old friends but it also has its own characteristics. I personally highly recommend this novel. Personally, I feel that the quality is not much different compared to the two books by Xiao Cheng and Ye Zhen. Although the number of words is a little less, it's worth it.

It's nice to read, but it has a familiar feeling, like the book "Please Bully Me!" That I read before. "The Villainous Daughter", good, good, highly recommended. Also, I want to watch Jiaobaikouya! Teach and train hard! ! ♡

I truly saw a person who dared to love, pursue a grand, dazzling love, and leave no regrets for his youth, even just once, Jiang Xiaoyue, and bravely did it. Although I will feel a little regretful when I see this, this is what makes me feel the most real, and I will also be moved at the same time. Come on!

An excellent Lily novel. Emotional mobilization is the biggest highlight of this book. A lot of grounding is laid in a very short chapter. The writing technique is very simple but very effective. I burst into tears when I left. A small part of the plot is not reasonable. Most of them have reasonable explanations. Overall, it is very thoughtful. There are very few interesting points. In the last words, you can see that the author has almost strict requirements for himself. It is this kind of requirement that creates this excellent novel. I look forward to the next work. Really good

The author's writing is good, it's a bit funny at the beginning [laughing], and a little sadistic in the middle [almost crying], but in the end it's still he [laughing]. But isn't there "imprisonment" in the name? I came here for this and was a little disappointed not to see it. Summary: Worth recommending.

The whole article is pretty good. Judging from the specific plot, most of Jiang's liking for Xia comes from lust and Xia's kindness to her. However, this is a normal phenomenon and I don't think there is anything wrong with it. On the contrary, it feels very natural. The most impressive thing is the speeches made by Xia Zhui's wife who was still a domineering boss after she found Jiang. The taste of the urban domineering boss was so strong, and the people who watched it were really angry. I wanted to write about Jiang Xiaoyue's personal daily life after she escaped. However, Xia's image after reflection in the end is still okay, after all, no one has made any mistakes (although her behavior is too outrageous, the author said not to substitute reality). The later sugar content is also very good, and overall it's a good book. It would be great if it could be given 4.5 Stars.

So pretty😍! ! ! From tit-for-tat to clinging to each other, this gentle confinement makes people willing to indulge. From imprisonment to pursuit, from possession to fulfillment, this crematorium is the most painful growth of love. From love rival to lover, this feeling of pulling is too exciting. The useless cute loli is gently imprisoned by the sinister sister. It is sweet and heart-wrenching. After watching it, I recommend watching it with a warm heart! ! !

Overall, it's very readable, and it's short. I recommend reading it in your free time. The first book I read by 233 was 🍍's "Blood Love", and I am also an experienced writer. Therefore, there are not many typos and problematic sentences, and the emotional description and narrative are also very good. (Maybe there are some problems in some places.) This book is not dark and crooked, nor is it yandere. In general, the journey of chasing a wife is not too drawn out and long. It may also be due to the length of the word count that I feel that the emotions in some places are weird or fast. It is said to be a hundred, but in fact, you can just ignore the title and just think of it as a hundred, because the heroine's performance feels like a girl through and through from the beginning. (Sure enough, 233 is still suitable for writing sweet posts or clips, meow!!) I feel like there are some parts in the article that are not connected, and there is a serious sense of inconsistency. I read the comment section and heard that the current version is a major revision. I don't know how the earliest version was. Maybe it's because of the major revision that some places don't match up. For example, the beginning and introduction say that both Yue and Xia are soul-traveling characters, but the further you look at them, the more they feel like they are rebirths, not soul-traveling cats. And although the system exists, there are not many overall scenes (after all, just watch the posts). There are only a few key descriptions in key periods, and then at the end, something big suddenly explodes, which makes it feel very sudden. So compared to soul travel, it feels more appropriate to be reborn and then recall the memories after a certain period of time and have a system that helps a little bit. Moreover, although it is said to be a chase for a wife in the crematorium, it is actually not too twists and turns, which is fun, but not completely fun. (If you want to read a book that is particularly twists and turns, dark, deep, sad, and exciting, you can read Feng Aotian's book.) After all, this book's wounds are not deep, and it will be fine after a while. (However, some behaviors in the article are not recommended, such as wasting food) After the main plot ended, I also added a few sweet daily chapters~ It can also be regarded as a daily supplement~ There's no problem with this part at all, it's very sweet and pretty! So good, meow~ (I just want to see that kind of process. Is there a special chapter like that? (｡￫V￩｡))

Very good ~ I like this kind of article that does not have a strong sense of system presence. I feel good after reading the whole article. Overall, there are no surprises. It looks good [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] The shortcoming is that it is a bit too short (just over 100 chapters, which is really short). I think the emotional interaction between our little Loli and Yu Jie is a bit lacking in the early stage. The little Loli's feelings for Yu Jie are also a bit sudden. As a result, there is not much empathy when the little Loli is about to leave and the little Loli's rejection when Yu Jie comes back (but it's not very important). Another point is that this is originally a transformation, but it feels like there is no process of female degeneration ([thinking]) before degeneration. Although it's nice to write like this, one of the main points of the transformation story is to watch the female fall. Overall, it feels like I'm watching Pure Lily (although I also like to read Lily). Not very sharp (the crematorium is not in place yet) but very sweet. Overall, it looks great, and it's considered top-notch on Tomato. It gets a score of 9.2 Out of 10.

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The emotional descriptions are vivid and vivid, touching the heart directly. It not only pulls the plot back and forth, but also the readers' hearts. Is it really going to end? With this mood in mind, read on, and the twists and turns will make you endlessly memorable. The characters are distinctive, the plot is compact, and its unique narrative method is even more eye-catching. If you want to read a little sweet article, then I really recommend it to you. Unconsciously at night, this book is like a greedy little pet, eating up your time. It is still hard to calm down and makes you want to read it again.

It's very good, this feeling of identity gap, but I read this book a long time ago, and I can only remember the plot roughly. However, the character creation of Xiaoyue is still very good. I can even leave the city for the sake of my eldest sister, but when I saw Xiaoyue running away, I I can't stand it anymore, maybe because of my perfectionism, but to put it another way, Xiaoyue left her eldest sister to pursue her own life, so that both parties can grow up, and for her eldest sister to realize her own feelings. It's really good, a little bit cruel but it doesn't have much impact.

There are two places in the book that moved me the most: 1. After Xiaoyue's heart was hurt, she didn't want to be entangled anymore, and she didn't want to let herself pay alone, so she chose to leave. Before leaving, please let me enjoy Sister Xia's tenderness again. Xia Muruo originally thought that she and Xiaoyue were eternal enemies, but unknowingly, during the days of getting along, she gradually accepted and enjoyed the feeling of Xiaoyue by her side. In that minute-long kiss, Sister Xia finally understood her feelings. But at this time, this feeling came a little late, and our Xiaoyue had already left on the train. So Sister Xia also started a two-month search and reflection. 2. Sister Xia finally found Xiaoyue and confessed her love. However, at this time, Xiaoyue had already gained her own happiness in a new life. The campus did not admit that she still had feelings for Sister Xia, so they always had to separate. After bidding farewell to Sister Xia at the station, Xiaoyue re-examined her heart. In fact, her feelings for her sister had been awakened that night, and she could not accept that two people who clearly loved each other would never see each other again, so our Xiaoyue made a brave decision and turned around to save her. In the end, it also ushered in a happy ending These two places once saw me cry and bring my own feelings into it. I will find that this kind of love is the most empathetic, so I highly recommend it.

I feel that overall it is a very good novel. One of the shortcomings is that the emotional changes of the characters feel a bit abrupt, which is not to say that it is really inexplicable, but it just feels that something is really missing. Also, the system is too transparent, and it feels like it has no effect [face covering] The full text does not reflect the necessity of the system at all, and may even make people forget that there is a system [face covering] After all, the author also stated that it is the first time he has written a system article, which is not harmful in the full text. The title of the book says that the protagonist is a yandere, but after reading it, I feel that the protagonist is more like a tsundere, and he is not imprisoned, maybe because he has been in a small dark room. The final ending is still very beautiful. There are many plots in the daily posts, which are still very sweet and worth experiencing [shy]

Emmmm, I can't say it's completely free of poison, but it won't affect the reading experience very much. I read free novels, and I can't ask the author to be comprehensive and not [cover face] [cover face] Personally, it's a very good novel.

It's good, the writing is okay, the plot has twists and turns, but there's still something missing. I thought it was for yandere at first, but it was changed, which is a pity.

It's very good-looking. The protagonist has been strengthened a little. It's okay to be bullied by the heroine. You can't be bullied by others. There should be a crematorium for chasing wives later. I'm a little excited thinking about it [I learned it] [I learned it]

It is a book that I like very much. I accidentally saw the book "The Blood Girl" on BLB and then remembered the name. I clicked on this book and saw that I was really surprised, so I read it to the end.

The cold and arrogant big sister and the innocent and cute little loli are really cute [admiration] and love each other. The author's character creation is very successful, and the plot is also very interesting. The characters' emotions are described delicately. I like it very much [like][like][like]

The emotions are delicate, the psychological descriptions are colorful, the emotions are tortuous but reasonable, and it is not uncomfortable at all. Moreover, there is a well-matched opponent who is matching you [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile], which is wonderful.