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Wait and see, it took so long to catch two of the teleporters, leaving the other three alive for so long, and then the clones didn't catch them when they saw them.

The writing is quite good. The people of the motherland are strong and have no scruples. They are not forcibly bound to the government because of their patriotism. They can do whatever they want. They are very free and in line with the three views and ideas of normal human beings after being invincible. The only drawback is that the plot is not easy to write. After all, if you remain invincible, just like what the author is doing now, you can only infinitely update it to a larger world, from the earth to the solar system, to extra-solar civilizations and even the universe, and finally the multiverse, three thousand small worlds and three thousand big worlds. The author can write more about daily life, and can imagine how unscrupulous he will be after becoming invincible, and how he will vent the evil in his heart. It is also very educational to clearly show the dark side of people's hearts. Of course, the above are just some of my personal opinions. There are many inappropriate or incorrect words in it. I am not qualified to blindly guide the author on how to write a novel. I only commented on it because I like to read this book and want to express my feelings and opinions about this novel. Five-star reviews with comments can be considered as promotion within my ability. In addition, everyone has their own preferences, and even the same person will have two completely different perceptions of the same book at different times. People's likes and dislikes are affected by experience, three views, time, and the degree of understanding of events. Therefore, low ratings do not mean that the writing is not good, it is just that the audience groups are different. In my opinion, the novel culture should be a hundred schools of thought contending, like the sun radiating in all directions. Novels should also be like this, with various types and connotations, instead of blindly writing mainstream and popular novel types in the market for the pursuit of political correctness, pursuit of traffic, and pursuit of money. Finally, I sincerely wish the author to carve out his own world in the field of novels and reap his own share of profits.

Let's strengthen the main character's feeling of being unhappy

It feels so good, man. It feels like drinking a frozen drink in the summer. It makes me feel refreshed.

It looks pretty cool so far. What's a little bit poisonous is that you know there is a clone but don't fuck it and give it time to develop.

Is it okay to clean up the mess for the clone every day? It seems that the book is getting cold

It's a super brainless and cool article, I just ask you if you are happy or not. I've watched too many brain-burning suspense movies, so it's good to come back and watch something like this. There's no problem that two eye lasers can't solve haha. I fucked whoever was unhappy with him, without any forbearance at all.

The strength is higher than that of the people of the motherland. They are not restrained by emotions and kill all enemies equally! The descriptions are very detailed, and the characters' movements are coherent and logical. The plot is relatively stable and does not get out of control out of the author's control.

Yes, this one is okay, but it's not as awesome as the other one, The Motherland. That one was all about killing people in their own worlds and sleeping with whoever they want. It's a pity that it's not updated.

Invincible text, one has not been confiscated so far, it is probably a murder text

Why is the rating so low?

It's such an incredible book, I can only say read it while it's not blocked, otherwise I'll definitely block it if it's too late.

The rhythm, logic, writing style, and detail of this piece must be above 8 points. It's just that the subject matter is relatively short, and it doesn't have fancy words or style, but the text is smooth, so it's already pretty good.

It's pretty cool, why is it rated so low? In this type of article, this is considered to be very well written. The characters are very vivid. They are self-centered and do not treat people as human beings. I think it is not too much to give nine points. No more…(╥╥)

Hearty and enjoyable.

Yes, but there isn't much to write about. Are you going to fight alien creatures later? Or you can write about daily life, but daily life is a bit difficult to write about

It can't just be Superman's power, but more other powers. It's best to be as strong as the devil in Marvel's medium dimension. If you say he's a superpower, he's not. If you say he's not, he is.

These are the real people of the motherland, everything else is nothing.

It's been a long time since I've seen such an invincible and crazy protagonist. I'm so excited that I'm about to pull the flag.

It looks good [smile] The author has a lot of praise [admiration] Come on for more

Love it. I love it. Honest people darken the background. COS Azu defeated all high-level executives and superpowers

One of the most beautiful tomatoes in the country

Master Tian's article is quite interesting in the early stage [sending my heart]

Nowadays, society is getting better, and this book can be read. Think about it, the book "The Ultimate Destruction" I read n years ago is not as good as this one.

Will you go to other worlds later?

Genius author, good

Very good invincible article

It's so cool. This is called cool writing.

Good book, very interesting

Since you can update twice a day, why not update three times a day [laughter]