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In my opinion, he is considered a top Bengtie fan. In various settings, you can see the author's repeated deliberation, and there is no OOC. Jing Yuan's resourcefulness and Otto's temperament are vividly written by the author. I particularly like one sentence in the article, which completely expresses the author's own understanding of Bengtie. "This universe is probably sick." "Abundance creates disaster, harmony eliminates noise, and preservation accumulates bloodshed. " "... And death is redeeming life. ""

After reading over a hundred chapters, I feel that it is one of the better Star Iron fics. The writing is good, the characters are fleshed out, and the work is well done. As long as it doesn't fall apart later, it's a rare good thing. It started to fall apart later on, and it felt like it wasn't written by the same person. The protagonist had a clone with his own consciousness to pick up girls, and then he waited for the clone to finish picking up the girl and then take it back. He also licked Alicia too much, and the plan was ruined and he licked her back again. He could compete with Aha for being the least popular. There was too much narration at the end, so I just highlighted one point.

To be honest, this book is very well written at the beginning. I really had a hard time with the Otto section. I highly recommend it to everyone who plays Bengtie and knows some Sanbengzi. The writing by Yun Yan is also okay (it's like a dream, I am still very moved when I wake up). But when it comes to Warhammer, it is really I can't stand it anymore. For someone who hasn't read it carefully and isn't very interested in understanding the complicated world view of Warhammer, it's really hard to watch it (I gave up on this copy after reading two chapters). It feels like it's a bit out of touch with the main body of Beng Tie. To be honest, the previous book was really good, and I really enjoyed reading it, but when it came to Warhammer, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I had no choice but to reluctantly give it up. After deleting it from the bookshelf, I really wanted to find a replacement for this book, because the previous book was so to my liking, but I couldn't find a book of that taste, and I felt a little empty in my heart. Then I ran back and wrote this review, and I could only sigh that it was a pity. All in all, this is a good book. I wish you a prosperous future.

It's a very interesting comedy. There are knives in the middle, a lot of knives, but it makes people very happy. At present, I am very optimistic about the author's handling method. Once you pick up this bowl, you can't smash it and scold your mother. However, I still have some doubts about the new plot. I have watched too many human swordsmanship, and I can no longer watch swordsmanship. I prefer a happy ending. Also, I'm looking forward to the follow-up of Walter's chapter.

As of Chapter 81: Overall, it's pretty good. What I'm more satisfied with is the part about Yanqing's copy and the persecution of Walter. How to say it? The previous writing was not very good, including the protagonist's first contact with Huangquan and Kiana's peers (forgot their names), which made me feel very embarrassed. Maybe I didn't take it in. This kind of thing would look cool if I put it in, but if I didn't, it would just feel awkward. Then there is the latest copy of Warhammer (is it called this, I forgot). For someone like me who has never had any contact with it, I will only feel confused after reading it. I only briefly went through it, and I can only say that it is okay. It is recommended that the author write more about knives. For example, the plot between Gui Naifen and Li Sushang was very good, and the plot between Yanqing and Yunli was also very good. Generally speaking, it's okay. Some are acceptable, and some can't stand it.

Great, my dear, I rarely read a novel in such a immersive way. This book basically conforms to all my fantasies about Star God. From my personal point of view, only [Game] and [Life] can be compared with the protagonist of this book, and even [Game] is a bit worse. Well, the characterization and plot are also very smooth, especially Especially the way this book portrays the Bishop, I like it so much. For me, as long as the quality is maintained in the future, it is not false that this book can score at least 8.9 Or even 9 or more. It is really fun, my friend, in general, I have great expectations for this book... [Sending Hearts] [Eating Melon]

The plot of the novel is fascinating and full of unexpected twists and wonderful developments. The author has a very rich imagination and has conceived many novel and unique settings and plots, which made me constantly feel surprised and novel during the reading process. At the same time, the characters in the book are also very vivid and vivid, and each character has its own personality characteristics, which can be seen from the interesting and distinctive reactions of the characters. Although the pacing is a bit draggy or too tight in some places, this is unavoidable in itself, and otherwise it is almost flawless. Whether from the perspective of plot, characters or imagination, this book is a rare masterpiece and worth reading.

I have read the most well-written humanities. The description of nothingness is very understanding, and the understanding of death is also very deep. The protagonist's IQ is also online, and there are no OOC characters. This book has one good thing. Modern literary works are too impetuous. This book is very calm, and the writing is really good. In short, there is no need to say more about how great it is. Five stars are enough. I usually don't post book reviews. This book is really good, but I haven't played Honkai Impact III and I don't like the characters in Honkai Impact III. Other than that, there's nothing wrong with this book.

After seeing the latest chapter, how should I put it, the early stage was pretty good, but in the later stage I felt like I let myself go and started messing around. I was actually looking forward to the separation between Sylva and the protagonist's previous life, but now it seems that the author is still planning to make dumplings. Love is the fall of free will, but the so-called utopia constructed, and even the script, are ultimately false. Using so-called falsehood to make those female characters fall in love with the protagonist and finally saying something like "ladies, you have harmed me" is too hypocritical. Although the protagonist in the novel has always emphasized that he is possessive of various female characters but not in love, the final result is not what the protagonist said. Now that the script is constructed, let it develop freely. The author keeps adding things to the script and changing it. In fact, what he wants to see is just the most perfect result that he wants to see. Although I understand that such tortuous writing can give the novel the number of words to write, it is really psychologically uncomfortable. However, among similar books, it is still good, very original and very subversive, so I will take the first step. Come on, author!

The writing is quite good, but when it comes to Yanqing in the back, I feel that it doesn't look good (from my point of view, if I don't mark the CP when writing it, I can't drink Yanqing Yunli). Overall, it's pretty good, and I'm looking forward to the rest.

A hundred chapters ago, it was a very good quasi-comprehensive Bengtie article. Whether it is the Aotuo chapter or the Yanqing chapter, it is a delicacy that must be tasted. It is a bit like spicy delicacies. It is still safe even though it is known to be (painful). This can be said to be the reason why delicacies are delicious. But what I feel is more regrettable is the Abyss chapter. It seems that the author wants the entire subspace faction to come out, and maybe like the author in the article, he also wants to see a demon train set. But in the (game main line), it seems a little early, and it is the same as what was said in the article before the Xing Sheng Demon was corrupted. They are all acquaintances, so why go to all the trouble to help? In a sense, the selflessness of Xing can indeed be seen, but as a purpose, I still feel that it is a bit out of line. Maybe I didn't read too deeply, after all, I just saw the end of the Abyss Chapter. There may be some flaws, but it is still a very good Star Iron delicacy.

A very good book. The author has his own understanding of Honkai Impact and Star Iron. He does not copy them mechanically and stick to the form. Instead, he is compatible with the original system and gives a new understanding in this new subversive definition.

It's interesting. I laughed from beginning to end. The writing is really brilliant. I laughed all the way through it. I hope that next time I can pull Funina and Robin out of the Honkai story and let the visitor and Brother Zhou Tian watch them experience the former civilization and Yingjie fighting against the Honkai. The previous civilization died spiritually once, then the consciousness of Paradise died once, the current civilization died once physically, and then when helping Kiana, Funina's soul died again. Funina smiled and danced like Fukalos. Dance, the robin opened its throat gently and offered its last song, and then Kiana died once while beating the Herrscher, destroying both of their hard work, and destroying the hope of mankind once. Let the visitor "laugh once" because he couldn't protect Funina, and let Brother Zhou Tian "laugh once" because he couldn't do anything. Let the visitor and Brother Zhou Tian know that not only they can't protect them, but also what they expect can't be protected, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Although some of the settings are a bit cliched and similar to cool novels, they are definitely not brainless, and the plot and writing are both great. Big cheers for the author! ! (ง •̀_•́)ง(Already following, some people will kick me)

Well, in general, the author's writing is quite good, such as from Huang Quan's little wish (family) when the protagonist was recruited in the early stage, to Lao Yang's "You have lost your father, you still have me,...", To the noble friendship between Xiao Guizi and Su Shang, to the beginning of the Yunyan group, witnessing the end of Eden's incarnation in the world, and so on. You can see the growth of the protagonist during the recruitment stage. All in all, the author's writing style is very good, with stories between characters and funny jokes between characters. But now that I see it, I really can't understand what's being said in the section about the Four Evil Gods. It makes me feel so uncomfortable (I understand the content, but I don't know what I want to express), and I'm crying jpg. Another thing is that the author likes haircuts very much, but I think regrets are called tragedies. Tragedies are regrets that are borne in mind, and people will remember them only if they are borne in mind. But the author writes regrets, and the story is indeed like this, but a perfect ending makes the story flawed (of course I am not saying that the writing is not good, but it is just painful to watch). From the perspective of Honkai Impact, we remember Himeko because she burned herself, and did everything she could as a teacher for the students. We remember Otto because he is neither good nor evil, very pure and very complex. Using himself as a sword, he opened up a parallel line of Kallen's existence. We remember Ellie because, as a flawless person, she used her own life to "weave my arrows, my flowers, and my love into new seeds, and bring them to the withered earth. Then, let it blossom into the eternal and flawless... Flower of humanity." So Himeko died, Otto died, Ellie died..., But because of this, Kiana grew up, Kallen lived, and Mei carried her.

If I just talk about my own thoughts, this book really fits the title of the book. Except for "Nothingness", which may not match the impression given by the game when I read it for the first time, it almost fully matches the impression given by the characters in the game. The plot is well detailed and will make you feel numb after reading it. One of the parts is the plot of persecuting Lao Yang. If you read it in one breath, you will feel that the author is Otto himself.

The article is like a carefully drawn picture, with every stroke and stroke revealing your wisdom and talent. The theme of the article is clear and the point of view is clear. You are able to translate complex ideas into easy-to-understand language so that readers can easily understand and resonate with you. The writing skills are profound, the words and sentences are precise and powerful, and every word is just right, not only the elegance of literature, but also the rigor of logic. In terms of structural layout, the article is clear and well-organized, making the reading experience rich. The grasp of details is even more amazing. Every example appropriately supports the point of view and enhances the persuasiveness of the article. Articles are not only the transmission of information, but also the exchange of emotions. Being able to touch the hearts of readers and arouse resonance is a state that many authors find difficult to achieve. His profound understanding of human nature and keen insight into social phenomena give his articles a deeper value and significance. In short, the author's article is a feast of thoughts, a spark of wisdom, and an emotional resonance.

It looks good. If you like it, buy more. It's been a long time since I've seen such an admirable work, and the last time was the Genshin Impact one. Share more with friends around you. (You can't let yourself suffer alone)

I thought this book was very strange. Although I didn't read too much, when I felt strange, I read the book reviews and found that many people had similar thoughts to me. First, the author's writing style is very good, and the writing power can fully satisfy readers who are not pursuing perfection. Secondly, some of the plots in the article (I don't know what happens later, because I haven't read it, so I'll be careful if I'm wrong) will be very heavy, and it's not all fun. Some readers (like me [smile]) who come here with a light heart may need to resist a little, or they can just transfer it. Thirdly, the character arrangement in the article made me feel a little uncomfortable. Although the author stated it in the introduction, I still want to mention it again. I personally feel that some of the character arrangements have transcended the boundaries of "pleasure", just like the madmen in the pub today. Fourth, I gave it four stars because of the power of writing, the author's imagination, the novel setting, and the characterization of the characters. But that doesn't mean I like the plot of the book, because I really can't accept it. I type so many words not for people who already like this book, nor for the author. It is for those who have not read this book, but you are destined not to like this book, to prevent you from wasting your emotions because you do not understand some of the shortcomings of this book like me. Of course, if you like this book, I also congratulate you on finding your favorite novel [laugh][laugh][laugh] (The above are all my subjective opinions. If there are any mistakes, you can leave a comment below to avoid misleading people who will like this book)

It was so happy, especially Lao Yang, who made me laugh out loud. It is a space comedy that is particularly in line with the theme of Star Iron's relaxed, happy and sunny space [laughter][laughter]

This is the best Bengtie fanfic I've seen on Tomato so far. I have read Chapter 37 so far. Every time I finish reading the plot of Beng Tie, I want to find some Ben Tie fanfics on Tomato, but every time I read some inexplicable novels. Like flying zodiac animals, war slaves, reincarnation stars, creation goddesses, and even movie-viewing bodies. Either the writing is so riddle that people can't understand anything, or it's not refreshing enough at all, and some things are just for the sake of copying the plot, and have nothing of their own. All in all, it either has no connotation and is not philosophical enough, or the plot is illogical and exaggerated and false. The author writes about death. I think the concept of death is very interesting, and at least I can understand it. The word count is not as watery as other tomato novels. It should be connotative and meaningful, and it should be cool and cool. Although the writing is blunt in some places, I don't think there are so many requirements when considering Tomato. I was really sick. When I saw the author mistreating the characters in the game, such as Lao Yang, I felt an uncontrollable joy in my heart. Don't stop [admiring] the author! (Power generation for love × 3 has been presented) Another thing is that the author can write slower. I have seen a lot of fan fiction written too fast, and then got stabbed in the back by Lao Mi. Either the plot is incoherent or the setting is inconsistent. I hope this fanfic can continue to be written.

It looks so good. I love watching it. I watch it every day. How can I put it, behind the scenes, fandom is my favorite, except for having a few female protagonists, (actually if your story is well written, I won't care if the protagonist has CP) The general feeling is that it is okay. Although the author updates once a day when I am out, at least 5,000 words a day is enough to read.

It's a very interesting and attractive novel, but it requires a lot of knowledge. To be honest, I felt disgusted when I read this novel. Yes, that's right, it's not the novel that I hate but myself. I haven't played Honkai Impact, but I have played Honkai Impact, so that I can't understand the rest except the first few chapters. Yes, I can't understand them all. I can't see anything about lust and why the copy is like this one second. I hate myself. It's such a good article, but I haven't played the original Ben Tie. So I want to read it, but I can't understand it and feel disgusted. I basically turn four pages in one second, and even skip three chapters. My desire to read more and understand this article is extremely high, but to be honest, I am not interested in games. It is difficult for me to play any game for half a month, but I like 2D animation, novels and comics, and Ciallo~ But I can't understand! I can't understand Thomas! I can't understand it. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.

It's so beautiful. The knife is a knife that you can't get. Use the following expressions to describe my feelings: "[Get it] [smile] [smirk] [laugh] [smile] [laugh and cry] [stunned] [shocked] [cry]."

The writing is of course quite good, especially in the beginning, where Yun Qi commits suicide, Da Hao thinks of the meme virus, it seems to be quite natural, and the conversation between Yan Qing and Jing Yuan is more in line with the game background. The section about the dragon master that followed made me feel a bit cliche at first, but then after a twist, I suddenly felt a sense of wonder. But I personally prefer to read Abstract Fun Man, and I came in based on your title, but then you wrote more than 10 chapters, the woman of redemption, the woman who purely loves brains, and the man who mines on the company planet. I admit that I was slightly touched by it, but after all, it was very different from what I originally wanted to read.

It's good-looking, excellent, and seems to have a lot of knives, but it's actually a space comedy. After all, the ending is happy, but the process is twists and turns. There are also many words that resonate and make people think deeply. All in all, it's very beautiful, but... There are too few! ! ! Not enough! ! ! More, faster and more! ! !

Although it is written about the path of death, the protagonist actually walks in the realm of happiness. The core of joy is the emotion of taste. The protagonist hopes to attach concepts such as sacrifice and sacrifice to death, which is actually the category of the emotion of joy.

It's great. Although there was a period in the early stage where I felt that the writing was awkward, it was very good. The characters were so vividly drawn that I only remember the former little May. Especially when she was delivering the knife, she was really ruthless. The main character was not popular.

The writing style is very strong, really, but it will test your knowledge reserve. The writing style is still very good, the plot logic and suspense are also very strong, and it is very coherent. From the bottom of my heart, I think this is the best book among the fresh blood of Bengtie fan fiction.

Although I was a little confused when I watched it, there were some plots that I found interesting, especially the Otto scene, hehehe. Lao Yang's persecution was so cruel and so interesting, especially the finishing touch of An He!