Hogwarts: Bringing Smiles with Magic

The writing is good and it's not like the HP fics you can see on Tomato. I like the heroine character very much. She is calm and rational. She is not a brainless type, but the plot progress is too slow. It's fifty chapters and I haven't entered Hogwarts yet.

This book is really the most to my liking I have ever seen in Tomato. I really like the protagonist like Sia who is both rational and calm but can also devote her blood to her ideals. I have read Chapter 71 so far. The author's character creation is very successful. The protagonist's experience is not far-fetched like "abuse for the sake of abuse", and the logic is very smooth. At first Wen Xia thought Alice was like an alchemy puppet, but later it was revealed that Alice was cursed by black magic. It can be seen that the author's writing level is very high, and the recycled foreshadowing is just right. But I have a little personal opinion. One: I want to see some contrasts in Shia, because what Shia has shown so far is strong, rational and calm, but as a person, she is a little flat. Since Shia is going to grow into a god close to humans in the end, she must have some transformation process, and some contrasts or some small shortcomings can become evidence of Shia's characteristics, and it feels more interesting that Shia's shortcomings will gradually disappear as she grows up in the future. My expression skills are not very good. I hope the author can understand clearly. What I mean is that Sia lacks a bit of "humanity". Two: This is a little bit of personal information that I personally want to bring along. Because I like Hermione very much, and Sia's dream in this article and Sia's own tenacity make me think that Sia and Hermione can become very good comrades and partners. From my personal point of view, I really think that Thea will be attracted by Hermione's innocence and sincerity, and Hermione will also be attracted by Thea's intellectual strength. Hermione is also the kind of person who wants to create a better society, which coincides with Thea. I hope the author can add more interaction between the two of them later in the article. If the author can read this comment, I hope he won't make fun of my childish and immature thoughts. I really admire the author for writing such a good article, and I feel a bit wronged by such a low rating. I don't know if Thea's sorting is mentioned in the following article, but I vote for Slytherin!

This is the best HP fan work I have read in recent years. People can't help but watch the follow-up update in one go. The logic of this article is clear, the setting is consistent with the original work, and the details need to be supplemented. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it. If the original work is a calm lake, the novel is like a lake that ripples after a stone is dropped on the original lake surface. Then the lake water described by the author is so natural, as if someone really traveled to the HP world, and the discovery of things should be like this. The growth of the characters is consistent with the rules. In particular, few authors have noticed that the thinking of infants with brain development may not be as clear as that of adults; to the changes in the character's personality after experiencing great changes. All can be justified. Nowadays, in this era where cool writing is popular (you can't see the protagonist suffering even a little bit) and people are upgrading, fighting monsters and changing maps, this book is a rare breath of fresh air and a treasure that Tomato. Com cannot find. Finally, I want to complain about the outrageous tomato naming system. I had never read this book before it was renamed. You had to change the title of such a book that has a strong Internet flavor before recommending it to me. Do you want to say that my taste is good or weird? 😏

It's very beautiful. This is one of the few HP movies I've seen and written about in such a profound way. That's right, I used Profound to write some of the magic in it so that people can believe it. The heroine is also written very well and I like it. Especially the section describing the protagonist's past life perfectly enriches the character. However, there are some small shortcomings, which may be due to my personal reasons. That is the part where the protagonist is fighting the black magic. I think it is a little... Too coincidental. But overall it's really pretty.

The first volume has a story and development that is different from that of most HP fans. It reads very much like a great author, with delicate emotional changes, and you can faintly notice that the author is very powerful. Summary, awesome For the second volume, I can only say that it is amazing, really amazing, and it is not as amazing as a tomato (I typed for half an hour and I can't think of how to evaluate this volume). I summarized a few key words: "almost dazzling skills", "jumping out of the original work", "mysterious but practical" ""Reading as if you are on the spot" "Amazing imagination" (It's indescribable. I was shocked to write a review before I finished the second volume. Author, you won't run away, right? Σ(ŎдŎ|||)ﾉﾉ, I don't want to lose you!

It's a type of fan fiction that I've never seen before, but it's pretty good now that I've seen it. There is no cookie-cutter redemption, but the protagonist's journey towards self-examination by questioning his true heart. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up plot, and hope it won't end unfinished or get stuck.

This book is quite good. It's not like the usual female videos about falling in love. It's not like Nan Nan's videos with various upgrades to fight monsters. It's like telling a story, very delicate. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good. So I decided I decided to pursue you author.

It is a very good novel, with clear text and a clear timeline, but it is too depressing, so depressing that I don't feel like I am reading a Harry Potter fanfic. As the protagonist said at the beginning of the novel, Harry Potter is just a childhood book.

I want to tie the author up and not feed him if he doesn't update. Lai Jia: The following is my personal opinion. If you are offended, please block me. If you refute me in the comments, I will not reply. Personally, I think the heroine's character is three-dimensional. Most of the time, we cannot ask the protagonist to be perfect. She will be able to do all the tricks at the beginning. This is probably a long novel, with more than 600 chapters? It's just a personal guess, but I can personally confirm that this is not a cool fast food article. At present, the heroine is still in the growth stage. At the same time, the heroine is not an old fan of the original works or has watched all HP. She only briefly understands the first two parts. However, the heroine gives full play to her God's perspective and deduces many details. At the same time, as a real ordinary person protagonist, it is interesting to see When you die, you will feel like vomiting, and when you suffer great fear, you will have tiny PTSD. When you encounter things that really affect your emotions, you can't be perfect. Her so-called "cowardice" and weakness are completely justified. The comment section is a little bit unpleasant, it is really condescending, dear. The author is very research-oriented. You can read the original work of this book (understand the world view, read the original book, and have your own thoughts). It is very interesting. It can be seen that the author's understanding of the characters is not one-sided. This novel cannot be easily written after watching a few clips or movies, HP second-generation novels, or CP fan fiction. Although the pace is slow, fortunately, it is not easy to read, and there are traces to follow. Every time I see the author quoting the previous article, I feel happy hh, finally I saw someone who can use research to answer the questions of readers in the comment area. Although the introduction of some knowledge is a bit bloated, I think it does a good job of presenting a magical world in a way that is connected with reality. At least for now, it seems very real and not like a children's book. I hope the author will update more quickly, the more the merrier.

This is probably the most surprising HP fanfic I've seen on Tomato. To be honest, when I first saw this title, I thought it was a cool article, but in fact it is a story about the all-round growth of a protagonist who is a bit special among HP fans. I like the author's understanding of magic very much. The author also perfects many magics in the HP world and the original plots around the point that "magic is the power of the heart". Voldemort is just an obstacle in Sia's growth. Continuously moving forward on the road of magic is Sia's path to becoming a god. What I like very much about Sia is that she is not a perfect person. She has two obvious shortcomings, and the author even writes them straightforwardly in the introduction. Overall, this is a great fanfic that expands the HP world in depth. I hope you won't be dissuaded by the depressing beginning!