Hogwarts: Miss Black's Journey to Godhood

The writing is good and it's not like the HP fics you can see on Tomato. I like the heroine character very much. She is calm and rational. She is not a brainless type, but the plot progress is too slow. It's fifty chapters and I haven't entered Hogwarts yet.

This book is really the most to my liking I have ever seen in Tomato. I really like the protagonist like Sia who is both rational and calm but can also devote her blood to her ideals. I have read Chapter 71 so far. The author's character creation is very successful. The protagonist's experience is not far-fetched like "abuse for the sake of abuse", and the logic is very smooth. At first Wen Xia thought Alice was like an alchemy puppet, but later it was revealed that Alice was cursed by black magic. It can be seen that the author's writing level is very high, and the recycled foreshadowing is just right. But I have a little personal opinion. One: I want to see some contrasts in Shia, because what Shia has shown so far is strong, rational and calm, but as a person, she is a little flat. Since Shia is going to grow into a god close to humans in the end, she must have some transformation process, and some contrasts or some small shortcomings can become evidence of Shia's characteristics, and it feels more interesting that Shia's shortcomings will gradually disappear as she grows up in the future. My expression skills are not very good. I hope the author can understand clearly. What I mean is that Sia lacks a bit of "humanity". Two: This is a little bit of personal information that I personally want to bring along. Because I like Hermione very much, and Sia's dream in this article and Sia's own tenacity make me think that Sia and Hermione can become very good comrades and partners. From my personal point of view, I really think that Thea will be attracted by Hermione's innocence and sincerity, and Hermione will also be attracted by Thea's intellectual strength. Hermione is also the kind of person who wants to create a better society, which coincides with Thea. I hope the author can add more interaction between the two of them later in the article. If the author can read this comment, I hope he won't make fun of my childish and immature thoughts. I really admire the author for writing such a good article, and I feel a bit wronged by such a low rating. I don't know if Thea's sorting is mentioned in the following article, but I vote for Slytherin!

This is the best HP fan work I have read in recent years. People can't help but watch the follow-up update in one go. The logic of this article is clear, the setting is consistent with the original work, and the details need to be supplemented. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it. If the original work is a calm lake, the novel is like a lake that ripples after a stone is dropped on the original lake surface. Then the lake water described by the author is so natural, as if someone really traveled to the HP world, and the discovery of things should be like this. The growth of the characters is consistent with the rules. In particular, few authors have noticed that the thinking of infants with brain development may not be as clear as that of adults; to the changes in the character's personality after experiencing great changes. All can be justified. Nowadays, in this era where cool writing is popular (you can't see the protagonist suffering even a little bit) and people are upgrading, fighting monsters and changing maps, this book is a rare breath of fresh air and a treasure that Tomato. Com cannot find. Finally, I want to complain about the outrageous tomato naming system. I had never read this book before it was renamed. You had to change the title of such a book that has a strong Internet flavor before recommending it to me. Do you want to say that my taste is good or weird? [Sinister smile]

It's very beautiful. This is one of the few HP movies I've seen and written about in such a profound way. That's right, I used Profound to write some of the magic in it so that people can believe it. The heroine is also written very well and I like it. Especially the section describing the protagonist's past life perfectly enriches the character. However, there are some small shortcomings, which may be due to my personal reasons. That is the part where the protagonist is fighting the black magic. I think it is a little... Too coincidental. But overall it's really pretty.

The first volume has a story and development that is different from that of most HP fans. It reads very much like a great author, with delicate emotional changes, and you can faintly notice that the author is very powerful. Summary, awesome For the second volume, I can only say that it is amazing, really amazing, and it is not as amazing as a tomato (I typed for half an hour and I can't think of how to evaluate this volume). I summarized a few key words: "almost dazzling skills", "jumping out of the original work", "mysterious but practical" ""Reading as if you are on the spot" "Amazing imagination" (It's indescribable. I was shocked to write a review before I finished the second volume. Author, you won't run away, right? Σ(ŎдŎ|||)ﾉﾉ, I don't want to lose you!

It's a type of fan fiction that I've never seen before, but it's pretty good now that I've seen it. There is no cookie-cutter redemption, but the protagonist's journey towards self-examination by questioning his true heart. I am very much looking forward to the follow-up plot, and hope it won't end unfinished or get stuck.

This book is quite good. It's not like the usual female videos about falling in love. It's not like Nan Nan's videos with various upgrades to fight monsters. It's like telling a story, very delicate. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good. So I decided I decided to pursue you author.

It is a very good novel, with clear text and a clear timeline, but it is too depressing, so depressing that I don't feel like I am reading a Harry Potter fanfic. As the protagonist said at the beginning of the novel, Harry Potter is just a childhood book.

I want to tie the author up and not feed him if he doesn't update. Lai Jia: The following is my personal opinion. If you are offended, please block me. If you refute me in the comments, I will not reply. Personally, I think the heroine's character is three-dimensional. Most of the time, we cannot ask the protagonist to be perfect. She will be able to do all the tricks at the beginning. This is probably a long novel, with more than 600 chapters? It's just a personal guess, but I can personally confirm that this is not a cool fast food article. At present, the heroine is still in the growth stage. At the same time, the heroine is not an old fan of the original works or has watched all HP. She only briefly understands the first two parts. However, the heroine gives full play to her God's perspective and deduces many details. At the same time, as a real ordinary person protagonist, it is interesting to see When you die, you will feel like vomiting, and when you suffer great fear, you will have tiny PTSD. When you encounter things that really affect your emotions, you can't be perfect. Her so-called "cowardice" and weakness are completely justified. The comment section is a little bit unpleasant, it is really condescending, dear. The author is very research-oriented. You can read the original work of this book (understand the world view, read the original book, and have your own thoughts). It is very interesting. It can be seen that the author's understanding of the characters is not one-sided. This novel cannot be easily written after watching a few clips or movies, HP second-generation novels, or CP fan fiction. Although the pace is slow, fortunately, it is not easy to read, and there are traces to follow. Every time I see the author quoting the previous article, I feel happy hh, finally I saw someone who can use research to answer the questions of readers in the comment area. Although the introduction of some knowledge is a bit bloated, I think it does a good job of presenting a magical world in a way that is connected with reality. At least for now, it seems very real and not like a children's book. I hope the author will update more quickly, the more the merrier.

Personally, it's five stars for me But reviews are for others to read... Well, so I choose four stars In the case of five stars, if this is not an honor recognized by everyone, then it will become the beginning of a hypocritical dispute. Overall, it makes me want to read more. But it is worth mentioning that I feel that this is not an issue that can be summarized by men and women. It can be said that it is a work that strives towards classic literature in the Internet era, rather than a work that simply distinguishes men and women. The author has a wide range of knowledge and a grand picture. If this book is not a fan but original, then I will give full marks even if everyone does not approve it. Well, when it comes to this, it's actually not a fan issue anymore. It's just that from a sentimental or personal perspective, it's understandable that you want to follow the context and feel the joy, anger, sorrow, and joy, and you also want to add new things. But objectively speaking, the carrying capacity of the story is not infinite, and the ambition of the swan cannot be judged by the things of a sparrow, and the development of the story is connected from beginning to end. For example, if you insert the beginning of the second chapter at the beginning, or simply the entire second chapter, and then review the early story of the first chapter The starting point of the story will be different, the setting will be expanded, and the desired fantasy about mysticism can also be expressed. Of course, I haven't written it and I don't know what the actual effect will be. I just treat it as a thought. The writing style is delicate and can be regarded as a classic style. If you can look into it and study a few strokes carefully, you can find the careful thinking. I don't have much discerning ability in AI refinement, but if this article was written purely by hand, then I really have to praise the author's literary skills. In a positive sense, you should go to Qidian. Com to post If I have any shortcomings, although the logic of the preceding and following chapters can stand up to scrutiny, there is quite a sense of opacity and outsideness when reading the preceding text. I'm not stressing that the story line must be developed in accordance with Chekhov's theory. I'm thinking about this myself. But my advice is that if you are trying to move the story in a certain direction, leave a well-crafted hidden possibility for that place from the beginning. In other words, the starting point of the story must be carefully considered While reading, although I did read a hint of unusual meaning in the portrayal of Alice, the content of the fanfic still attracted most of my attention, preventing me from feeling that the weirdness here was the original work of Jingxin Design. So at the beginning of the second chapter, I was quite confused, falling out of the fixed context of the fanfic and running into the desert of originality. In the end, I roughly understood what was going on, and the scene description was quite good. Maybe, it's because of my limited knowledge (laughs), and I felt something was not right before, but after all, I didn't think about destiny and training. In the end, I suddenly realized that the round version was okay, but it did seem a bit jerky to read. Generally speaking, there may be some problems with the plot design. I can't point out the specific points. Maybe the sequence arrangement is a point, but if I want to point out other things, I really can't think of them. Maybe the rigidity of the fatalistic description is also a problem, and there is quite a sense of arrangement in some places, but I really can't say, I'm just a book reader. Finally, let's not say that it is a work that rivals everyone else's, but at least it does have its own style. I'm still looking forward to my first try. Don't take my advice too seriously. Sticking to yourself is also a good choice. Come on [laughing evilly]

It can be seen that this is a very thoughtful novel. To be honest, I was almost persuaded to give up at the beginning. The reason is that the author used a reasoning and thinking method throughout the article. Other authors skipped this process or shortened it to a few words, but the author expressed it all in the article. In fact, I have come across similar articles, but those articles can clearly see that the people who created them may have some deficiencies in literary talent, but the author's article is very interesting to read. Although there may be some parts that are not well written, I feel that the author really made the plot have waves, slowdowns, ups and downs, and make people feel deeply. Maybe this way of writing is not suitable for online novels, but there is no doubt that this is indeed a good article

This book is really well written, both in terms of writing ideas and the author's research on the original work. It is very rigorous, has deep research, and also has thoughts on the magical world. Unlike some books, it is invincible and purely mindless. It will not make you happy after reading too much. What is left is only profound boredom. If the author can change the name and cover and insist on writing, I believe this book will definitely become popular.

It is a very thorough and detailed HP fan novel. The expansion of the world view also makes people feel real and convincing. It feels more like the era before HP than the zzzq-oriented Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them. The reason why the score is so low I think has a lot to do with the unprecipitated plot of the protagonist after Sirius was arrested. I feel that the plot has a particularly strong sense of fragmentation.

This is probably the most surprising HP fanfic I've seen on Tomato. To be honest, when I first saw this title, I thought it was a cool article, but in fact it is a story about the all-round growth of a protagonist who is a bit special among HP fans. I like the author's understanding of magic very much. The author also perfects many magics in the HP world and the original plots around the point that "magic is the power of the heart". Voldemort is just an obstacle in Sia's growth. Continuously moving forward on the road of magic is Sia's path to becoming a god. What I like very much about Sia is that she is not a perfect person. She has two obvious shortcomings, and the author even writes them straightforwardly in the introduction. Overall, this is a great fanfic that expands the HP world in depth. I hope you won't be dissuaded by the depressing beginning!

(Ps: a little spoiler) [eating melon] It can be said that it is a rare HP novel that does not follow a unified routine, and the heroine is not born from a unified template. You can see in the author's writing a heroine who is very eager for magic and the unknown (please, she is the perfect Ravenclaw!), And she can still be such a great heroine after a series of changes. All I can say is that you will succeed in whatever you do [blowing kiss]! ! And when something unexpected happened, I thought of Sirius's series of confusing behaviors later. I actually thought about the reason why the heroine turned dark later (thank you, it really made me angry). My first impression at the time was that they were really irresponsible parents. Of course, after I later found out why my mother was like this, I still felt that the heroine was miserable. But it's this kind of heroine that makes me feel that she will succeed in whatever she does! ! !

The part about Ireland was a bit confusing. I felt that the characters were very separated. But thinking about the closed and strange environment, it seemed to explain the past. Anyway, I didn't pay attention to this part. Everything else is great, the characterization is also very good and distinct, and the behavioral motivations don't feel too abrupt. The relationship with some characters really makes Hart soft (but there are times when he gets angry in the early stage... But after accepting the character settings, it's okay) I hope the author can continue to present stories according to his own ideas, and I'm looking forward to it.

First of all, I need to praise the author for his really thoughtful ideas. Whether it is the heroine's life experience, all the events she encountered, and the actions of many NPCs, the design is novel and unique. It can be seen that it is definitely the work of the author. Then there is the description of magic and alchemy. The author likes to write settings and is able to justify them, which is also very powerful. Finally... It's also the only thing I don't like very much. The author also likes to judge the social nature of the magical world and comment on the actions of various NPCs in dealing with people. To be honest, the writing is very good, but it makes me not interested in reading it () People who like it may think it's wow, but there are also people who don't like it. Seeing that the author has carefully built a magical world with a sense of social reality, even if I don't like it, I am still willing to give a five-star review.

The writing is good, but the beginning is a little slow, but if you get past the beginning and read on, you will find that the flaws are not hidden, and the plot is reasonable. In the middle part, a large number of descriptions of the inner changes of various characters made me sure that the author has a very deep understanding of the original characters. I believe that the author will not make the characters OOC now, nor will he in the future. Recommended viewing for readers who like the original characters and have not been brainwashed by a large number of second-generation creations. The protagonist is quite likable and fits the development of the plot, but the author still made a small mistake. He asked the protagonist to do more attempts to change the plot, but it was better to fail because of lack of power, otherwise the beginning of the plot would be really dragging.

It's really good. It has a lot of imagination and is much better than the bad fandom. The original part of the second volume is quite exciting. In fact, the game of seizing and counter-seizing the body within the consciousness is very well written and the psychological activities of the three parties are described very well. However, I personally feel that the original plot of the second volume is written too quickly and is a bit stream-of-consciousness. Generally speaking, I don't understand it very well when reading online articles. I personally feel that more words should be spent on the protagonist's foreshadowing of the battle of wits and Ivor's plan, or a part of the review content should be used as a transitional chapter to the beginning of the volume in advance, so that it would not be so abrupt to start the duel three years later [face covering]

There are not many authors who have the brains to perfect the worldview. It is a miracle that this book can be seen on a fast-food online writing platform like Tomato. As an old Harry fan, it is very comfortable to read. The author has studied the original works of various characters in the book, and has also carefully understood the magic in the Harry Potter worldview. In this regard, we are ahead of many fan works that we don't know what to call. After reading this book, I can't stand most of Harry's fanfics.

The author's book is one of the best HP fanfics I have ever read. It can be seen that he spent a lot of time researching a lot of information, and the plot and writing are very good. Except for the scene where the heroine was caught by the old witch, which felt a bit abrupt and hard to understand, everything else was good. There are still too few at the moment, and they haven't enrolled yet, so. Author, how can you sleep at this age? Get up and update |ω)

The book is okay, but the plot connection is a bit fast in some places in the middle. Or maybe I read too quickly and didn't pay attention, so some parts felt inexplicable. The book is generally very good. In fact, this book is probably rated 8.7 Or above.

It is worthy of being called a fairy by so many people in book reviews. It is a high-end product. The best thing is that there is no main line development around Harry's trio. (I really like the name Almess, Apollo's sister, the moon god, it feels more fragrant) and the interesting alchemy setting. In short, it is like Al's own protagonist's life in the background of HP saviors and others. If you like to see the development of your career, please feel free to watch it. Thank you teacher for the rice. It's so delicious that I cried. [Sending Hearts]

The writing is very good, especially the alchemy part, which can be compared with the suspenseful twists and turns in more top-notch novels. It can also be seen that the author has indeed delved into relevant knowledge. Not brainless or invincible, very comfortable to watch.

This book is very good. The logic is self-consistent. The author's writing is very good, but the author is a bit like a female channel. He is too eager to have correct form and always dances in the circle. Maybe it's because I am a person who always reads cool articles. I find it a bit difficult to accept.

Advantages: It is logical, has a lot of information, and some of my own ideas. Disadvantages: If you mainly read HP themes, you will feel that you are always going off topic and feel a bit different. If you remove HP and innovate by yourself, you may be able to go further. Anyway, I think this author has great potential.

It's really good. The writing and logic are all good, but it's too detailed. I've been adding settings so much that it's almost a setting book. The paragraphs are not very obvious and it seems a bit lengthy, which is a bit uncomfortable for people like me who read online articles at a glance. The plot is too slow and not suitable for the audience of Tomato, but overall it is still a good book.

A very good work [Thinking] is indeed a serious story, not the kind of cool story that uses no brain at all. Some people may not like this approach, but I think it is very good. The author must have studied in the UK, and the article will contain some "witchcraft" or occult content from other cultures, which is very interesting. The author did a good job of integrating the heroine's plot into the original story. It seems that the writing direction is to tell a new story without seriously changing the original story line. We have now reached the beginning of the Philosopher's Stone, waiting for Harry to enter school...

Book related: The most rigorous world view, the richest and most sincere feelings, the most natural ambition, the most meticulous author (there may be other books but this one shows it), the most thoughtful novel (most Tomato novels cannot be read with the brain in mind, if you don't agree, please recommend a book to me) After reading this book, I feel like I have been reading abstract books in the past few years. Plot related: What I don't like: The love scene between James and Lily (I'm a Spy guy, I feel like James is not good enough for Lily) What I like: Everything else Others: Update soon! Not enough! ! ! @ Siren's Wings

What an amazing author. I really like this kind of work that makes my brain move after reading it... I can see that the author takes his creation very seriously... Thank you for your seriousness and hard work. I like the world you write very much [Love]