My Little Pony: This Isn't How It Happened in the Story I Read

The subject matter is novel, at least in my opinion, it is unique. As for the character of the human/horse, it should be a kind, brave, responsible, Never give up, and some bad taste (there are too few updates, only 20 chapters at the moment) but it is not a virgin. At the same time, it has its own ideas about things and its own unique insights. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into character creation, but this is not enough. Character creation is the soul of the novel. A good novel must have a character with outstanding characteristics. I think it needs to be strengthened in shaping the character. Of course, I think the good thing about this novel is that it has its own main line. So far, it has all followed its own path. This is much better than some novels that follow the plot! But it seems that the update is not very good, but if you can understand it, it can be regarded as one step at a time. Also, this novel transcends the beauty of Xiao Mawen, at least it is not utopian, and it can be regarded as letting people see a trace of life in the novel. I sincerely hope this book survives to have an ending that is, if not too perfect. This is just like being a human being, it has a beginning and an end. I want to tell the author greatly: " The original intention is easy to get, but always hard to keep. Remember, no one can succeed overnight" I have a little suggestion, just to beautify the title of this book or make the theme more prominent (although the theme is quite prominent now, I always feel that the title alone is not interesting to read). In fact, I started to pay attention to this book when it was serialized to 76,000 words, but the title made me very hesitant. As we all know, people in the horse circle have worn corpses since ancient times, some have worn the eldest princess, and some have worn the second princess. I have even seen people wearing Twilight. But this is the first time I have seen people wearing rhythm. So this is our advantage, and this is the difference between other small horse stories. If we can use this point to improve the title of the book, it can be concise, it can be more generous, it can also be straight to the point, or it can be deeper to shine in the introduction. I believe that before reading any book, you must first read the title, then the introduction, and finally the content. If you pay attention to the first two points, you can create a hit, at least much better than now. Of course, the final decision rests with the author. If nothing goes wrong, this should be an improvisational work or the author's "debut". However, I think it is best to first feel satisfied and happy with the first novel. I feel like I'm a bit talkative, and I write so long every time 🤦, but encountering a good book is like the last big question on a math paper. Although I know it's difficult, I always want to try to improve my math scores even a little bit. It also feels like a green bud in the desert that makes people unable to help but stop and look at it, wanting to pay more for it and keep it alive.

Very novel content. Although the author is a little slow in updating, it is very interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard. According to his progress, 500,000 words should be enough.

This is not bad, the photosensitivity is like this, but what the hell is it to recognize your mother in person?

It's very comfortable to watch. It has a sense of wandering and holiness like the lonely trees in the city. It's quite comfortable to watch. The pace could be a little faster.

It's a very good book, the writing is very delicate, and the combat descriptions are wonderful. It's a pity that I don't have a good rapport with it.

The good news was that I found a good book, the bad news was that I had a difficult delivery. Come on, the quality is high.

It's rare to find something so well written. It deserves five stars, and it should be updated soon. The novel is very well written, but I don't know why the author didn't update it.

I think this book is very well written, thank you to the author!!!!

Writing about phonology as the main character Although the author stopped updating, I speculate that it may be due to the plot. Then I will boldly tell you my plot. First, this world must be very bad, so from my point of view, the Crystal Empire should be the home ground, and I can understand the world of sin and despair step by step. First of all, the two princesses of this world are most likely born. Moreover, when the two princesses discover that Yin Yun is still alive, they may kill Yin Yun, so that we can write how Yin Yun died, and then fight against the two princesses step by step, and may end in failure, which is the knife, and there is an open ending at the end. The above are all my guesses. Since I haven't reviewed the plot for a long time, I forgot to set some places.

A very interesting novel, the characters are well drawn, and the plot is very suspenseful.