Saibo Zhengdao: If It's Not Turned Off, It's Turned On?

It is an absolute masterpiece, but there are at least 5 places to screen readers in the early stage. It becomes more exciting in the later stages. There are desperate situations and difficult processes, and the plot is coherent and the story is coherent. The author has high attainments in sociology and psychology, and has a deep description of human psychology. At the same time, the protagonist The mentality control is excellent and non-toxic. It is neither blindly killing nor blindly indifferent. It describes the advantages and disadvantages of various social forms such as social alliances, sects, and others. It also satirizes the class differentiation of modern society. The Tianmeng symbolizes the unbridgeable gap. The protagonist's moral level is high but his cultivation level is much lower. Many people ridicule that losing humanity is the only criterion for survival in a mysterious world without saints and stagnant water. However, the protagonist is not contaminated. The author has a deep understanding of Buddhist culture. At the same time, the character of the protagonist can be called "Vade traveled to the world of immortality", but he is not completely rational, but for the cultivation of immortality The fantasy of the perfect integration of science and technology is a masterpiece, and therefore the protagonist survives every desperate situation. It can be said that this book cannot be a novel. It can be regarded as a work about human nature and future technology to cultivate immortality. However, the author also has shortcomings: for example, a mask can prevent others from knowing who you are. At this time, some people say divine consciousness? The author adds the setting in the next few chapters in a very reasonable way that does not affect the continuity. The book is non-toxic and has no pitfalls. It is full of passion but still survives. As long as you have the patience to read carefully to the end, you will definitely gain something.

Dear readers, don't worry, this is not a hacker. I'll summarize the little details at the beginning of this book, and you can read it later. Let's talk about the advantages first. The novel theme, the wonderful fusion of cyber technology and ascension to immortality changes the common impression of two-sided cultivation of immortality. It is very good and can be regarded as a 5-star movie. As for the small plot design, it adopts anti-routine and has little sense of classics. It is refined, novel and interesting. Let's talk about shortcomings First of all, in the early stage of traveling to another world and starting to develop, the character design collapsed, and I pooped in front of my face💩. I almost didn't want to read it. If I hadn't been a shit connoisseur and couldn't bear to read it and analyze it, I might not have this comment. Secondly, although the subject of cybernetic cultivation is good, it is difficult to write well. Regarding the comparison of science and technology, because of the scope of personal experience and knowledge, it is destined that there will be no detailed analysis of technology in this book. It can only be generalized and hurriedly flipped through. For example, cyberlingen, such things can only be based on one's own opinions. The sense of identity is low and there is no sense of substitution. The last thing is to grasp the details of the plot. I always deviate a little from the theme as I write, which makes the drama. The look and feel is very strange. This book is reasonable with an 8-point rating.

Tomato can be regarded as a good article. In the early stage, the theme was relatively immature and not prominent. However, from the second time I entered the world of ancient immortality, I clearly felt that the author already knew what he wanted to write. Various settings, conflicts and ideas were presented one after another. The significant difference in ideology between cybernetic immortality and traditional immortality was well reflected; the description of battle scenes has also improved significantly. There are scenes, focus and emotions, which is much better than the equipment and dish names reported in the previous period. It seems to have great potential so far, and I hope the author can continue to maintain this momentum.

I just saw the update, and I browsed the comment area for a while. I think there are probably thousands of people with different opinions. I think this book is already very good. In my opinion, this book is an out-and-out science fiction novel, and I can understand the poisonous points everyone has said, but I think the author wants to discuss various humanistic issues created by society under different ideologies. To be honest, I think the stiffness of the characters is okay. I have a strong ability to empathize, so I think the character descriptions are okay, and there are no big problems. The only problem I think is that the combat power has collapsed a bit, but fortunately it's not a complete collapse. Actually, I didn't expect that the comment section would be full of bad comments. I wanted to come in excitedly to see what everyone praised. I think this book may have a certain threshold, requiring readers to have read a certain amount of science fiction literature and have a certain understanding of immortality literature. I thought it would be really uncomfortable to read the fairy tale. I came to read the science fiction novel, and I think it is very good. To be honest, the fusion of science fiction and immortality is already very impressive while ensuring that the logic is self-consistent.

The description is very delicate. Tomato is one of the few with good writing skills. Highly recommended. Every step is not in vain. When it seems like a waste of time, the real purpose is to inquire into the heart and truly cultivate the Taoist mind. Full marks.

This book may seem boring at first. It even makes people feel a bit like a virgin, but in fact this is the growth of an ordinary person who has been frozen for thousands of years, and those indecisiveness seen in the early stage are only in the protagonist's heart. In fact, his actions are also decisive and decisive, and he is relatively old. For example, he pretends to give in and even apologizes to others, and then there is a five-finger heart sword. The enemy is triumphant one second, and his head falls to the ground the next second. It's the kind of template that makes people feel that there is creativity, but the creativity is not beyond the norm. But in the middle and late stages. The creative part of the book was written. His training system is quite creative. Makes me feel more reasonable. His system of cultivating immortals is not like the crispy immortal cultivators in some novels. The immortal cultivators in Hedaojing would even belch when they were beheaded. It's not like another one that writes so much about Qi refining and foundation building. For example, it is during the Qi refining period that one begins to take possession of one's body and be reborn. Afterwards, the protagonist went through a foundation-building period in order to break through. There he fought tooth and nail with others for a foundation-building pill. It seems that there is no foundation-building pill, and the protagonist can't break through with cheats. This book was originally written to make up for the shortcomings of the cultivators. There is a martial arts that can be practiced at the same time. The protagonist's development speed is also relatively fast. It's not like the kind of person who has received all kinds of benefits and the only treasures of heaven and earth in the world. You tell me, you are just invincible in the same mirror or can barely resist a cultivator who is a level higher than yourself. Then there are all kinds of things. Only by using various evil methods that harm your life can you escape. After the protagonist of this book obtained the first treasure of heaven and earth, his fighting power immediately increased. It is no longer difficult to basically leap forward and kill the enemy. To the back. After the golden elixir period. Crossing two great realms. And the one who was killed was the Demonic Prodigy. Anyway, it started to light up later. So please readers. When looking, try to look down a little. There are not many poisonous places. And the author also filled the hole later. And some of the things that make you feel toxic are actually foreshadowing. A very nice book. Please give the author more updates. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] The author is very sorry. I am a student party. There is not much money for reading books. The data in your book looks pretty good. I want to keep some books that I like to read, but the statistics are relatively bleak. I can only send you a blade to encourage me. [Turn one's lips][Turn one's lips][Turn one's lips][Make a face]

The writing is mediocre at the beginning, but as you read later, this guy's writing gets better and better! Ho, is he a growth-type substitute messenger? With the continuous addition of settings and the improvement of the world view, a colorful world is revealed. The protagonist's personality is also gradually improved through the exploration of the world. The best part is the author's imagination! God, he is so talented, what kind of brain does it take to come up with such a setting. (Ahem, I used too much force. Anyway, it looks good.) What's more valuable is that the updates are very stable and the quantity is good. If anything happens, we will report it in advance. (The author shook when he picked it up, and dropped the inventory)

It's a really good explosion, the logic is very clear, and there is potential for growth. It's not a completely cool article, but it's not poisonous. In short, it's awesome. You'll know after reading it. This book is very rich in content. According to my understanding, first of all, the protagonist has grown up a lot. His initial identity was that of a man who had an incurable disease many years ago and chose to become a frozen man. When he was unblocked, he was captured by the Black Heart Mine and worked as a miner. , At this time, his thoughts were still relatively one-sided and narrow. Later, he had a big overall view, but he also often had his own thoughts and actions. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good, with care and attention, and the self-thinking of the characters that is thought-provoking. In short, it is very good, and the more you read, the better it becomes.

This is definitely a good book that starts low and moves high. Some small problems in the early stage can't hide the flaws. At first, I thought it was an ordinary book about two worlds. But as I got to the later stage, I found that the author has his own small ideas. The thinking about human ideology is very similar to the cool points in the article. Power, especially the content about killing three corpses in the parallel universe, really makes me excited. However, here are some suggestions for the author. The introduction can be changed to be more advanced [note] (Also, can there be three updates a day, two updates are simply not enough)

Shuanghua read more than 500 chapters in 4 days. My evaluation is that the writing is good and the plot is very coherent. Especially the various plots in the legend of the two worlds are well connected. And I personally like this type of protagonist very much. He is full of humanity, whether it is for his own independence in the early stage. Whether he is a hypocrite or a true and kind person, I like this type of protagonist very much, and the author has written out the humanity of each character, which is not like the NPC in other novels. Made me feel that everyone is a real person There is a saying that goes well, nobility is the passport of the noble, despicability is the epitaph of the despicable. From the early stage of the protagonist's life, he is selfish and just wants to live alone. He slowly feels that the world is unfair. When he has the strength, he wants to change everything. He does not want to destroy the world like other protagonists. On the contrary, the protagonist is kind. Are people born good or born evil? No one can say for sure, but what I have observed since I was a child is that most people are biased towards evil, and even most novels are biased towards evil. On the contrary, it is not easy to find a book on such a mixed platform, and it is true that it is not easy to find a clear flow in novels, as the saying goes. I prefer noble and kind characters to evil and despicable people. This book is very interesting to me.

It's so beautiful that this masterpiece is not popular. The system setting of cyber cultivating immortality is very novel. It is not a terminology explanation that changes the soup without changing the medicine, but a scientific and technological cultivation of immortality that is meaningful and self-explanatory. Tiandao AI is so amazing. The worldview design is grand and substantial, and the shuttle between the two worlds is not an empty design simply for the sake of achieving resource swindlers. The traditional cultivation background of the spiritual world and the modern earth background setting are even more interesting. The descriptions of several major forces embodied in ideologies are full of the author's desire for seaweed and egg drop soup. The character design of the protagonist is also very good. He is ordinary and heroic at the same time. He plays more of a participant in major events in the world view rather than a decision-maker. This is great. You don't have to practice to become an immortal to control the entire universe. Finally, there is the ideological core. Many of the plots have a high artistic content. They made me happy, so just don't go into the dark room.

The combat power is not broken, the idea of ​​the fighting scenes is very novel, and I personally feel that the description of human nature is better than that of ordinary people. I even think this thing can be applied to the real world (referring to his values). If you are interested after reading the above, you should keep it for a while, otherwise you will go crazy. Author, why don't I implement these technologies sometime? It's too detailed, so you must have done it, right [smile]

Ice! I stayed up late and watched it all at once. The protagonist is a normal person, and I feel that his mental journey is quite good. The things the protagonist does are quite consistent with the character. The villains are all quite smart.

I have a hunch that this will be another masterpiece. The writing is deep, not the kind of oral narrative. It is rebellious and real and thoughtful. In terms of writing ability, it is not just that it is better than Zhetian. The reason why Zhetian is a masterpiece is not because of its writing ability, but because it has created various weird and fantasy worldviews and various groundbreaking all-round systems.

(This is just a personal review of my reading experience, and has nothing to do with personal interests. Please don't criticize me) I originally thought it looked good, and the theme and setting were indeed novel. Really, I felt that the protagonist's emotional line and the advancement of psychological changes were too rigid, so rigid that it seriously affected my personal reading experience. I also read other book reviews, and other brothers' opinions on the author's writing are polarized. Indeed, the setting is really beautiful, but the plot advancement is too random, especially the plot that only knocks out but not kills. It may be due to different concepts, but such a plot with the author's subjective ideas does seriously affect my personal reading experience. I know that the author wants to establish a positive image of the characters and express some positive ideas. The characters are portrayed with flesh and blood, but you really need to consider the continuity and rationality of the article. The novel is derived from life, but it cannot be completely divorced from reality. I can feel that the author wants to inject the soul of human literature and art - humanity, and show artistry while depicting flesh-and-blood characters, but you really need to consider the reader experience. Summary: A very good novel. The current score of 8.9 Is not a reflection of the strengths of the novel, but an explanation that overshadows its strengths. I can feel the author's boundless and unconstrained imagination. I think the author can write a book that scores 9.9 In Tomato. Being able to have the determination to write is already a pioneering thing. Being able to write a good work, no matter what genre it is, will be the light of civilization when it comes out! I hope the author can continue to create more excellent works. I hope you will give the author some support!

It looks good. The overall world view is that human nature is inherently evil. The writing is also good. The plot is not sluggish. It is different from many utopian ideals and is closer to reality. Who said that the big cannot bully the young and the old?

The low rating was a bit toxic in the early stages, but the author quickly came around and the protagonist's golden elixir stage began to take off, and the subsequent plot was at least 9.6. The growth of the protagonist is obvious, from childishness to maturity, truly describing the process of seeing mountains as mountains, seeing mountains as not mountains, seeing mountains as mountains, seeing different things, and looking at problems differently. Moreover, the author's imagination is really strong, and he completely combines science and fantasy. The collision of multiple ideologies and the pursuit of common progress of mankind are also very awesome. The protagonist is called Xia Li. As the so-called person who witnesses history, the protagonist is a witness, a participant, and even a promoter. And the speed is very fast, which is quite cool. Although it seems that only 50,000 to 60,000 people have read it, the steady 3,000 updates per day shows that this book is very sticky. It is really a pity that the first 61 chapters were poisoned, and it came back after a few chapters. It's a pity that I was frightened by the childishness of the protagonist. Later, the grown-up Lao Xia is really handsome.

The writing is very good. In the ancient traditional world of immortality, it depicts the feeling of aspiring young people who want to change the world with passion. However, I think it is better for the protagonist to understand more about the social conditions of these two worlds, and to describe more details and understand some social conditions. Many things have been done and discovered by being Forbidden, not allowed. It is okay to advance the plot through this kind of hindsight in the early stage, but in the middle and late stages, the protagonist seems to be relatively ignorant. I hope the author can refer to my suggestions. Your book is very innovative and has its own thoughts and ideas. It has many advantages. I hope the writing will get better and better, and there will be more inspiration.

I can feel the author's design in this book. The protagonist is not a decisive and novelistic character. He is sentimental and has flaws. The writing is okay, and the setting is at least fresh to me. The most important thing is that the author has a lot of thoughts about society, rules, and ideals (even if it may not be to everyone's taste, or it may be immature and limited). This is worth learning from other authors of cool novels. Only novels with a soul can better mobilize the emotions of readers. All in all, there may be slight flaws in the specific plot, but it is still a good book. (First book review)

In my opinion, this book is indeed a magical book. The setting and everything are very good. The only thing that makes people uncomfortable is the character of the protagonist. I see a lot of viewers criticizing the character of this protagonist, but I am just the opposite. What I like is this kind of self-contradiction, growing from a flawed person to a strong person, not a perfect person. This is what I want to see, the kind of protagonist who is flawless from the beginning, with a stable Taoist heart, without a trace of hesitation, and without any hesitation. What is there to see? But I still hope that the protagonist can grow and not always be what he is now.

It's beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it? This is a book that explores the problems and nature of human society now and in the future. Philosophy and growth are the main themes of the book. It also has a unique science fiction setting, with fighting and thinking reflecting the protagonist's character. The Battle of No Kill, the Battle of Xiaomo, the Battle of Hedao, three missions, retracing the journey, multiple dealings with relationships and emotions, and changes in class positions and the nature of struggle, together create a full character image that reflects the real life in the real world, and also gives readers the opportunity to immerse themselves in the story and let go of the pressure in life while reading. The author's writing style and narrative ability are worthy of recognition, and the huge social background and details constructed have no flaws, but you must control the scale well, otherwise you will be banned and wait for the blade to be sheathed. Also, it's too short! ! ! ! The donkeys in the production team didn't dare to rest like this, so Fenfenjiang quickly got up to code.

It's very exciting. The combination of cyberspace and immortality, fantasy and science fiction is very good. Although there are some flaws in the character creation of the protagonist, the flaws are not concealed. It is obvious that it was written with a lot of thought when shaping the world view. It's a pity that it was posted on Tomato.

Haoting, Haoting, author, come on, I hope the update will be faster, so that I can read more coherently. Well, it's really good. I've been listening to it now. I feel like listening to this book is no longer a desire, but a duty.

The essence is in the middle and late stages. The previous ones are actually some foreshadowing routines. There are no major poisonous points. The logic is self-consistent. The world view develops along with the growth of the protagonist, coherent and not repetitive. Personally, I like this book on social and personal psychology. In particular, the protagonist goes from the bottom to being promoted to the top in the main world, and the top faces the bottom again. This kind of plot, which everyone thinks is vulgar and joking, is innovative and points out a new perspective of mutual suspicion, which leads to low self-esteem and failure to communicate, and resentment and anger from the top. It is indeed something I have never thought about. It is really not easy to think of this level after reading too many conspiracy theories. He also has unique insights into the analysis of the forms of different civilizations (strictly speaking, the main world is now considered a fusion of two civilizations, and six civilizations have emerged), as well as the writing context of the dual development of the main world and the mysterious civilization. Shen Nong tasted a hundred herbs and finally had a good meal. Some of the protagonist's unreasonable behaviors are actually in line with the character's logic, and selfish people can understand even if they can't stand it. To put it bluntly: This is the only time in my life that I have become a master of sci-fi and fantasy settings.

It starts low and goes high. The protagonist's initial thoughts and ideas are gradually transformed and sublimated. The overall view of the world is constantly changing and reshaping. It is difficult to find fault with both the character creation and the direction of the plot. The occasional humorous plot also makes the characters feel more alive. My review is not objective enough because I feel the author's thoughts from the bottom of my heart, but these are still my feelings after reading the book. If you can read the 100th chapter, I believe you will not be able to stop reading with enthusiasm hhhhh

This book is really well written. I am very curious about what kind of person the author is? It is really necessary to allow people with different cultural and cognitive levels to feel what the author wants to convey! When I was in school, some people knew how to write some questions but couldn't teach others how to write them, but the author did! The author's writing skills are very good. The setting of this book is very exciting, but it is not a mindless novel. It contains humanistic thoughts and philosophical thinking... This is a work with heart, this is a good work! A good work deserves more exposure! I will always support your work! I hope my support can give you motivation! I am very grateful to the author for letting me see such a book on a platform like Tomato! Because Tomato is the platform I use the most, and I might not be able to see it on other platforms. I like reading books like this! If you have similar books, please post them in the reply and I will read them, thank you!

High score boost. It's good-looking, logically logical, and has a complete worldview. The highlight is watching the protagonist combine cybernetic cultivation with ancient resources and techniques to resist two terrible worlds. There is no green world, there are two cannibalistic worlds. I hope the author can write more ideas about cyber cultivating immortality.

One of my favorite novels I read on Tomato. It's a bit similar to the two-time travel theme like The Naming Technique of the Night, but the difference is that the protagonist travels alone. This book is the plot that I have read so far that is most in line with my idea of ​​technological immortality. It is the first time I have tied it and I have been chasing it. Some of the thoughts expressed by the protagonist in the book. The protagonist thinks that he is not a good person. He cannot bear to see the injustice in the world again and again. I particularly like the feeling of becoming an ember and lighting up the flame. The Wrath of Asura episode was also particularly enjoyable to watch. And because the protagonist can travel between two worlds, even if the protagonist is often chased by the boss after having fun, there is a bug that allows him to travel back to the world, which does not give people a sense of urgency. He can simply pretend to be cool and run away, and the fun is over.

In some books, when the protagonist becomes a god or immortal in the end, I would think it is just the author's choice. But when Xia Li becomes a god or immortal, I would feel that his merits are finally complete. There has never been such a protagonist that I admire from the bottom of my heart. Many authors try their best to create a great and upright protagonist, but are limited by their own abilities and turn the protagonist into a clown with a Virgin heart. This has also led to many authors now choosing dark protagonists, because there is no other choice but to write about you. However, this does not mean that the protagonist is unattractive. Facts have proved that people will still unconsciously tend to justice and bright things. The author has obviously thought deeply in the character creation process, and the growth of Xia Li at each stage is visible to the naked eye. From a stupid young man who just came out of the mine to the president of the Human Heavenly Council, his thoughts have changed significantly and he has become more mature and lofty. This healthy character growth gives Xia Li a rich character arc. But what best reflects his personality charm is his unchanging original intention of being a human being. Be strong but not bully the weak, be weak but not afraid of the strong. No matter how his thoughts change, we can feel that his principles remain the same. This is his most charming point. At the same time, the world view of cyberspace + immortality created by Fenfenjiang is also very grand and interesting, complete and self-consistent, and can be regarded as an excellent soft science fiction work. This has surpassed 90% of online articles.

This is my first review on Tomato. It is really a rare good book. I have been reading novels for fifteen years. There are too few novels that can be called "books" in my heart. In today's world where novices in fast food are incompetent and Long Aotianwen is full, it is really rare to have such a novel. The novel is deep and thoughtful, so cool! Burn! But it's not just for the sake of pleasure, it's for the sake of burning. Every time I feel refreshed and burning, it is not a traditional breakthrough or a new level challenge. But it is truly profound and can only be understood and understood by people with a certain level of experience. Many people may find it strange and boring, but when you really understand it, you will experience its excitement. In addition to burning, there are many philosophical thoughts in the book. Philosophy is not right or wrong, but a kind of thinking. All in all, this is one of the top ten novels I have read in my fifteen years of reading. It is also one of the top three novels in Tomato The descriptions of powerful spells in many novels are nothing more than very abstract descriptions such as "shattering avenues" and "breaking space". They will tell you that they are very powerful, but how strong they are and how terrifying the scenes are are actually very abstract and readers cannot really understand them. The so-called "breaking the avenue, breaking the space" is actually very abstract. However, look at the Star Destroyer Stellar Cannon in this latest chapter. The term Star Destroyer has appeared in many novels, but few can truly describe its terrifying power. "Stellar level" is actually just an average level in many novels. But here, you can really feel the "stellar" horror through the author's words. It is a power that is truly invincible and destroys everything. The author's literary skills are really very good. Having reported the transformation of gods mentioned earlier, the true character of the "star gods in the sky" can be truly described, rather than the so-called "Great Luo Golden Immortal" in some novels and then using some very abstract descriptions. The author's writing really makes you feel how awesome these things are. Rather than telling you in a very abstract way, "This realm is awesome and this skill is very strong."