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It's pretty good, but I feel that the combat power system is a bit strange. For example, one second there were ordinary fireballs, winds, swords, etc., And the next second a mini-boss suddenly appeared to rewind time (the price of one eye can rewind time, is it really like playing house)? The combat power system is not very good. At least there should be a level distinction. Otherwise, the combat in this book will look like playing house. Also, the character of the male protagonist is probably the gentle, irresponsible and unactive type in early harem comics. I guess many people can't stand this kind of character. After all, it's already 5202 years old and it's not a very lovable character. I hope that the male protagonist can grow up in the later period. There is still a lot of room for improvement in character. The charm of the male protagonist is actually about the same as the charm of the female protagonist. No matter how good your heroine is, a male protagonist with some problems will eliminate many readers.

It's really nice. This is my second time spending money on Tomato. The main plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the foreshadowing is reasonable and vivid. The relationships developed with several female protagonists are even more natural. Moreover, the writing style is very excellent, and the language is concise without losing the expressive meaning. It is the type that I like very much.

There's nothing wrong with the plot, but there are a lot of details that are a little too clever. The male protagonist did not exchange any information with his companions. Even though he was familiar with the plot, the same crisis as in the original work still occurred. Bai Mao knew about the Dragon Clan but did not communicate with the male protagonist, and the male protagonist himself was a bit too good. You can also polish the plot a little more

Strengthen the male protagonist, he is either dead or on the way to death.

Everything will be operated and watched by gods. So what is the difference between this and playing VR games?

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It's okay to write, please support me.

Very good content. Now the Shura field is a bit small. I look forward to the big Shura field in the future. I hope the author will not be too short.

Nice ! Come on, author

You can take a look at Shu Huang

Yes, non-toxic, worth a look

This five-star is for the Legendary Green King [laughs]

Very interesting article, non-toxic and non-depressing

Good looking!

Looks good, come on.

Good book with potential

Very pretty. Very pretty.

Supporting characters survive in the slums

It's very interesting. Can the author update more frequently? [Face covering]

Judging from the lightness of the day, it is still worth giving 5⭐ It's just that if there are too many pits, I can't fill them all.

If you are used to reading system texts, you can try this kind of

It's very well written. Good luck to the author.

Really, this book is worth reading. The plot is not procrastinating and the characters are very distinctive. The most important thing is that you have to eat about 90 pieces. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Very interesting, come on author

It's still okay to write

Good, good, good

Good book, very comfortable to read

It feels good! Come on, author!

A pretty good different world

Shura Field? Interesting [laughing evilly]