There Were so Many Customers That My Spatula Made Sparks When I Fried Instant Noodles!

The writing is very good. Different from other novels, this one is closer to life. From the male and female protagonists to some minor characters who only appear once, they are all portrayed very delicately and realistically. You can feel the full atmosphere of life through the words, which makes people read bit by bit. At the same time, more interaction between the male and female protagonists can be added. After all, this is a sweet pet story that focuses on life, and the sweetness needs to be distributed well. The character Su Yue can also be focused on characterization, which can be added to the interaction between the male and female protagonists to increase the sweetness and make the character fuller at the same time. If the follow-up does not go astray, I think it has the potential to be popular. The current rating is not worthy of this book. As a reader who has read all the chapters one by one, I can give it a score of 8.9. It is worth reading. The author will continue to update, come on!

The structure is clear and rhythmic. It progresses layer by layer and gives a sense of reading, which is very enjoyable. I don't know if other people like this work, but I particularly like the way the author writes it. Recommended for those who love food

Single people will have two emotions when reading this book. One is the aunt laughing, and the other is probably jealous and reluctant to let it go! The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists make people unable to help but continue reading. It seems that they are not reading a food article, but the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist brings a kind of warmth. It is so well written! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Like][Like]

The writing is quite good, with daily warmth. The book's score of 7.9 On Tomato is a bit low, but I got pregnant after more than 70 chapters. I feel like it was a failure. It progressed too fast. The daily plot is well written.

A very good food article. The main theme is to set up a stall by yourself. The prices are basically reasonable. There are no gimmicks during the business hours. There are different foods at different times. The character of the protagonist is relatively plain and there is no tendency to open a Douyin or online store. Even in daily life, there is a kind of fireworks in life. Of course there is pretentiousness but it is not too abrupt. Now I am starting to gradually write some stories about other small characters, and it is good to expand the influence of the protagonist. The slight flaw is that there are too many emotional scenes for me, and I usually skip them directly. Women will only affect my speed of swinging the shovel (dog head).

It's very nice. Writing a business line in the form of a stall can also intersperse friendship lines and love lines. This form of expression is very good. Moreover, setting up a stall is more down-to-earth and easier to empathize with, which is better than starting a company to dominate the world. Except for a poisonous point about jc in the early stage, there are no other big problems. Anyway, you can't ask too much for brainless and refreshing novels. This one is already an excellent batch among brainless and refreshing novels. The characters are all very well created, and there aren't any bad Internet memes throughout the story. There are also some good satires in it. The main plot is attractive enough and not boring. There are quite a few refreshing moments in the middle and later stages. It's quite enjoyable to watch.

I came in from the recommendation point. When I saw that it was a male video, I actually wanted to quit, but after seeing that it was a single female protagonist, I decided to take a look. The author is really a clear stream of male videos. There is no exaggerated sexual content about women, and there are not many swear words. I think this alone deserves a five-star review. I haven't read many, but from what I have seen so far, it is very interesting. Come on👏

Actually, the food aspect is pretty good, but the emotional aspect is a little lacking, the writing style is relatively immature, the characters are not clearly highlighted, and some details are not done well, but overall it's pretty good.

Although the content doesn't quite match the title Female President, I like the content! It's plain and heartwarming, with no slap-in-the-face plot. The two of them just manage their relationship seriously and live their own little lives. [Full]

This book is very beautiful, at least for me, it can score 9.5 Or above, but I can also understand why his score is only over 8 points. What he writes is so real. In addition to food, he has many plots, and food is an auxiliary. The truth in this is the evil of human nature, the evil of society, including many unexplainable evils, which are very real and real. It has been reflected. Although there is a good result in the end, the existence of these evils and their processes are shown in very detail, so some people may not be able to accept it, so the score is not that high, but it is okay. I can only say that it is okay. I have been testing wildly at the edge of what I can tolerate. After reading it, it is a very perfect happy The ending is not a pure Nanping novel. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very interesting. It's just that I can't understand their relationship. It's so good, but the male protagonist didn't tell the female protagonist about his systematic affairs. In other words, she has to hide this from the female protagonist for the rest of her life. I don't quite accept this. Everything else was okay, all the evil was finally resolved

It can be short but also very exciting. It is a pretty good food article. I have some humble opinions. If the Wang Min plot and the food street plot that everyone has been complaining about appear in a food article with more than a thousand chapters, I think it is OK. After all, you can't write so much about pure food. It will definitely extend into some business, politics, multiple heroines, families, and even supernatural powers or immortality. But a food article like this one, which only has a few hundred thousand words, should focus on food without a villain. The addition of those two plot points will make some readers run away.

It's not bad, the male protagonist has system bonuses, and the food tastes top-notch, but there aren't really many delicacies for appearance fees. More text and ink are highlighted in the development of the male and female protagonists' emotional lines and career lines. The male protagonist does not just set up stalls all the time, but plans his career in a clear direction. The final turn when the food street is built is not sudden, and there are traces to follow. The only bad point is probably a common problem in male videos. Although the target is a single female protagonist, there are many beauties around. Moreover, the descriptions of these women can focus on their appearance and temperament, and there can be more character descriptions, which has many advantages. But the author likes to add words and ink to the figure, giving the impression that it is very greasy and sluggish. Maybe this will please male readers...

This book is also quite nice. This is the only book I've read on Tomato on this account that doesn't have any jumps in the plot. Taught me a lot. [Sending Hearts] Live in the moment. The moment when a person reaches adulthood at the age of 18. There are two ways. Ichijo gets married and has children. Ichijo is alone, there is no point in talking.

It's quite good-looking, and it's all about daily warmth, just like the heroine goes to Manxiang Street after confinement, which is not interesting. When it comes to setting up stalls, I feel like the variety is a bit lacking, and there should be more plot.

The content is plain and beautiful, and it is eloquently told. It is not only delicious food, but also has many warm and touching places. There are many brainless articles about various systemic cerebral hemorrhages on Tomato, but the author writes this book very well. As a 15-year old bookworm, I read this book in one day. It is also the first time to review a book on Tomato. I wish the author's writing career will get better and better. Come on, come on.

It's relaxing and good-looking. If you've seen too many supernatural beast-controlling movies, you'll feel relaxed when you watch this one.

The writing is quite good, unlike other books that are too slow and boring to read. I also have a suggestion. You can set the fun point from time to time while writing. You can set the level of food. The degree of deliciousness will gradually increase, attracting people from all over the world.

Generally speaking, the writing is okay. There are some cliche descriptions but it is not overly violent, so it is acceptable. I saw the latest updates in one go, so it's suitable to read them all in one go. In terms of rating, the current score of 8.8 Is more reasonable. However, I feel that the audience for food articles is not that large. I would like to give 5 stars for encouragement.

It's been a long time since I've read such a harmonious and beautiful story. Although there are also "villains", the characters are relatively full-bodied. Without those bloody plots, it's rarely been so enjoyable to read. The rating could have been 9.2, But it's a bit lower now.

The plot is good, but the writing style needs to be improved. Some descriptions and descriptive sentences are repeated too much. At the same time, the description of the guests is a bit too exaggerated. Writing a book should be closer to real life. In real life, chatter is more vernacular than what is described in the book. Words like father and mother are definitely not used by people in reality. Writing this kind of online article must be down-to-earth, so that it can be more comfortable to read. Come on, I hope it will become better and better in the future [laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's good to read, quite good, and the various plots are also very good. Life is ordinary. I don't like the kind of city where you pretend to be all sorts of things and then slap your face. This book suits my taste. I have been a bookworm for decades. Now I can't read many books. After all, I am tired of reading this kind of slap in the face. I can guess the next plot just by looking at the plot. I really can't stand it. This book is good-looking. There is no such plot. There is no other book that imposes a slap in the face when buying a car or something. I recommend it.

Not bad. I rarely give five points. I hope the more I write in the future, the better it will be. There will be more college student scenes to keep up with the facts.

It's kind of pretty! ! This food novel is really good, please continue to update it. Author [Admiration][Adour][Adour] Remember to also add some love lines between the male and female protagonists, have a good time.

I said it was good-looking, and I gave it a thumbs up. The author will update it soon. I really like it. Why has no one commented on it? The characters are distinct. I think it's good-looking. There are delicious food and other things. I hope I can go to the heroine's shop! ! Come on author! !

It can be seen that the author pays great attention to the content, and the whole article has been polished. A few minor flaws are not harmful. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. The score is a bit low, maybe because there are too many typos, but the book is a good book.

Very nice! And it's one of the very few food articles that covers life in addition to cooking. I feel like a lot of systematic food articles will turn into a work machine. Although there will be various buffs, I am really tired watching it. I think this book is quite good at this point.

It's really good to read. I've been reading food-related articles for a few years. I personally feel that it's very good among the same genres. I hope the author will work hard!

I still like to read more pure food articles, but when there is romance, I feel that it doesn't taste right, so I give up. But the author's writing is really good. I have only read about 40 chapters which are quite good. I can accept the recommendation of food articles with romance.

It's good to watch, but the emotional drama of the heroine is added, which makes it very surprising. It would be better if the food article didn't have a heroine. The food is very well written.

It's good-looking, plain and refreshing, and doesn't have the overly exaggerated descriptions found in other stall-setting articles.