Tie Tie: the Cool School Beauty Can't Be so Clingy

In fact, I originally wanted to leave some suspense to make people curious about the direction of the relationship and various factors in its development, but everyone reads books in different ways, and there is no way to help it. So for those who want a clear emotional direction, or are confused, I left a comment on the first chapter, you can go and read it. I really can't stand it anymore. I really can't satisfy everyone, and it's not my obligation. Just like my signature, writing novels is my hobby because I like to write and it's sharing. I don't even live on this stuff. It's like a person telling a story on the roadside. If you don't like the story, you can leave quickly, or even spit before leaving, but at least you can't say "I don't like this story, you should do it according to my ideas!" Right? Indeed, I am just like you. When I read novels, I will also have plots that I don't like and will be dissatisfied with. But I will not ask the author why he didn't write it this way. Instead, I will start to write what I want myself. All in all, everyone comes online to be the emperor. I can only work hard to continue to improve myself. Criticism is a precious resource for me to improve. However, I hope everyone can hold back their anger when criticizing. I also have a bad temper. In the end, it is very likely that we will become angry and shout at each other. Finally, I would like to emphasize that this comment is not directed at anyone, but because I have already understood the shortcomings of this book. This is the first pure romance novel I have written. There are indeed some misjudgments about the plot and enjoyable points. In order to avoid the displeasure of people who read it in the future, I hereby remind you.

After watching it for a long time, I finally understood it. The character of the senior sister can be compared to Mei Yi, who has a human-machine flavor [face covering] [OK]

Um. As an old bookworm. Make a post-view evaluation. The overall plot is very good. The relationship between the two people can be felt to be slowly warming up. The writing is just not sophisticated enough. Sometimes with the addition of narration and others. It will make people confused for a moment who said this. I personally suggest that the dialogue between the two heroines can be left without prompts. Do other characters have dialogue or add a little narration. This is easier to understand. The author is reviewing the reading. Throw away the framework within your brain. Read it with the feeling of an ordinary reader. You should know where to change it. Um. I'll do a second review when it's finished!

It's beautiful, every character is unique! ! And every time Li Xianyu speaks, his words are shocking and dumbfounded. It looks good, but is the other protagonist the senior or Ani?

I think it would be better to replace the heroine with Xia. She has a certain amount of affection for her childhood sweetheart.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [love] [admiration] [like]

It looks good, but no one cares about it [facepalm] This makes me a little afraid that the author will stop updating [facepalm]

There is a kind of yandere beauty. I don't know why.

It's so beautiful. So far, my feelings are rising a little bit, and I feel like I'm in a sweet love relationship. I hope the author doesn't want razor blades, but sweet ones. Long live.

It's nice and sweet, but I feel like the author has a strong sense of privacy.

Japanese, it feels like a romantic drama, the heroine is very hot, the second chapter is about to come out, what kind of Japanese hot-blooded heroine is there [please taste it carefully], everyone come and watch it, it is very good [like]

It's good-looking, really good-looking [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]. I laughed unconsciously while reading the novel. I've been resting for a minute, can you continue updating? [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It really feels good to me

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

In the early stage, the two buns were in love😑, but later it was sweet🤗🤗🤗

After watching it, I still like Qingmei more [crying][crying][crying]

It would be nice to make the sense of presence of the senior sister stronger.

After experiencing Akaishi becoming an Akaashi hero many times, my evaluation of this book is this👍

It's really funny, I can't stand it anymore, I like this kind of handsome protagonist who is both male and female

It has the feeling of a pseudo-harem in a classic Japanese comic, but I personally think it's quite shameful. However, people who can't accept the pseudo-harem may be more outrageous [Chigua][OK]

The articles in Dada update are still as good as ever, I just hope Dada doesn't stop updating them anymore!

The writing is okay, just a little sloppy. I just love to look at lilies, Baibaibai [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The relationship between the two female protagonists is okay, but from the writing style, you can tell that it was written by a male author. For example, in Chapter 60, I thought the sister was seven or eight years old and cute, but I didn't expect that she was in sixth grade. The writing was inexplicably strange (I held my forehead and smiled bitterly). How could a college student meet a little girl who was separated from her family and rub her head? The sixth grade didn't look like the sixth grade, but like the second or third grade. Other than this, the two female leads are quite sweet.

The look and feel is very good, it has a sense of youthful love, just like watching a lily anime [Sending my heart] Good luck to the author

This book is really good. I have read hundreds of books with two female protagonists. This book is really good. It's really good.

Li Lingyu is a bit like Moon Song in the Red Flame Sky.

Very nice little sweet article

The emotional line is particularly good

Good-looking, sweet hehe

Is it 1V1 or multiple themes?