Genshin Impact: Starting from Being Picked up by Beidou

Well, the story is very good and heartwarming, But I feel that you, the author, should think more carefully about the later timeline. The main thing I want to think about is whether Ningguang became the Tianquan star when Hutao was born, or whether Ningguang became the Tianquan star when Grandpa Hutao or his father died. Liyue only has a few important nodes. When the travelers came to Liyue, Hutao and the others were more than 10 years old. I think Ningguang is at least almost 30 years old, and it is impossible for Ningguang to be more than 20 years old. In this way, the timeline feels too rushed.

This book is already one of the best among Genshin Impact fanfics. It is plain and heartwarming. There is no pretentious plot about slapping the Dragon King in the face. I didn't want to read it because I read it for a while, but after reading it for a while, I found that it is quite interesting, so I will give it a five-star rating. The author should hurry up and update it and add a bookshelf. If you don't update the book for a long time, no one will read it [sneaky laugh]

The writing is very good. Although I am a child now, it is written according to the thoughts and stability of an adult. It has been a long time since I have seen such a non-stop and heart-warming original text. Keep up the good work, don't stop, and just take some time to update. The rest is okay, but it's a pity that it's just a double, and I chose one of the many female protagonists, so I don't have much expectations, it's already dead.

When I read it, it hasn't been updated much. I continued to read it. I think the writing is great. If you agree with my point of view, give me a book review. There is no way. Books below 9.0 Are basically not good. I feel really different.

Delicate emotions and rich details [laughter] Very very sweet (huang) Except for the slightly delayed plot at the beginning, it's simply super awesome and fun to watch. (The author writes quickly, I want to see Ningguang and Beidou's children, Mouya)

The writing is good, the plot is okay, and it's rare for Genshin Impact to have Beidou as the heroine. I was raised by Beidou (referring to the early stage where Beidou was the main character, I'm a Beidou cook, I like Beidou very much), so I think this novel is good.

Not bad, good, come on, come on

Come on, don't be a eunuch [angry] [angry]

It's pretty good, but I don't know what happens next.

It's good to watch. My two favorite heroines in Genshin Impact. Please give me a little more sweet love. I'm a local dog and I love watching it.

At present, it seems to be to my liking, and the score will not be low in the future.

I'm afraid the two heroines can't stop fighting each other.

It's ok, quite everyday Chinese.

Beautiful, no need to say more

Come on, author, it's not enough [crying]

I feel like the cover could be changed. Even if it shows Zhang Liyue Gang, it would be nice. When I first saw the name, I thought the protagonist had traveled through time and become an adult. The plot had already begun.

666 Saw the Imperial Letter on Tomato

The plot of the novel is complete, and overall it feels very good. The rhythm is very good, the plot is restored to the point, and it is very readable. (My own little suggestion: the author does not need to overly pursue the contrast of the title, otherwise you will be very tired.) Don't worry too much about the cover (the cover does not match the content, but it doesn't affect the beauty.)

Very interesting, thank you to the author!

Very warm and well-written

The brothers are particularly good.

Pretty good, come on

Just everyday writing, no ups and downs

The author writes well

Very beautiful, recommended

Not bad, worth a look.

It's okay. One star is deducted because the update is too slow. The new book only has one chapter a day.

Just for this title, five stars is not excessive.

The plot is good. It's more of a daily style, and currently there are two female protagonists.

Not bad, it does have a warm feeling.