Naruto: I Open a Pirate Tavern in the Shinobi World

There are more than fifty chapters, and the protagonist has sex with a bunch of women but doesn't eat meat.

It's okay, but the main character doesn't eat meat 🥺

In fact, the writing is pretty good, especially the emotional part. The questions raised by other book friends in the comments do exist objectively. It can be seen that the author wants to spread the story and does not intend to just write about Naruto. However, because of this, the early pace is very slow, so there are quite a few logical problems. Normally, the character of the protagonist is to live in Konoha for more than ten years before becoming a rebellious nin. He has a very good relationship with those female protagonists, but the ambiguous time is too long, which is terrible. Not to mention the time in the background of Konoha, it is not good for the protagonist to be 22 years old and still having an affair. This is the case with Naruto stories. Everyone knows that it doesn't matter if the plot is abstract, but the story with multiple female protagonists has to be gradually closed at the beginning. Judging from this emotional line, the rhythm of this writing is probably Starting from a million words, the Naruto story is so long that others can't read it. You have to intersperse some things in the middle to be able to read it, which is the so-called highlight. Therefore, the later data is getting worse and worse because there is no highlight. The highlight of Naruto is nothing more than fun, dream fulfillment, hanging, and the heroine. It was not reflected in the early stage. Instead, it wrote some surprises, and the impression was not good. Others did not want to follow it. However, the writing style of the relationship between men and women is very good, which is remarkable. Generally speaking, I still lack experience, but I have great potential. There are quite a lot of books like this, especially fan fiction. There are a lot of bad ones. Everyone knows the plot, but it is difficult to change the tricks.

It's okay, family members. It's been collected now and you can start watching.

It's so beautiful, why don't many people see it?

Five stars because no need to say more

So have you finished writing this book?

It looks okay, I'll give it four stars first.

The content is pretty good and the emotional description is very delicate.