Douluo Dalu: Starting as a Twelve-Segment Inchworm

The idea is very good, Douluo➕Mystery, but the structure is simple, and the progress is too fast, deliberately fast, just like adding another character to the outline of Douluo The description is average, the characterization and plot arrangement are average. The priority is unclear, and the mystery of Douluo has not been grasped. For the Douluo aspect, it is recommended to read a few more fanfics. Many poisonous points have been stepped on, and many details have not been verified. It is impossible to read with a brain. In terms of mystery, because it is in the story of Douluo, the mystery elements are concentrated on the protagonist. However, there are many omitted parts of the protagonist's journey. If you have not read the original work, many places will be very inconsistent. The author's idea is very good, I'd better encourage it and give it more thought.

Just read and cherish it, Douluo's books will disappear inexplicably.

Yes, the important thing is that the subject matter is novel, the protagonist is powerful, far beyond the protagonist group, the third soul ring is a million-year soul beast, the strongest among soul beasts, Brother Tianmeng. However, the whispering in the protagonist's ears becomes more and more serious every time he advances. The divinity and humanity are currently relatively balanced, but I feel that there will be a big problem in the future. So far, Xiao Wu, Zhu Zhuqing, and Ning Rongrong have a crush on the protagonist, but the protagonist seems to only have calculations and interests in mind, and no feelings.

The writing is very good and in line with the times, but I still have too much prejudice against Lao Tang [face covering]. I hope the author's works will get better and better. .

Hello author, I am your reader. My hometown is in a rural area and I have a donkey. This donkey is very good at grinding, and he is very talented. The noodles he grinds are loved by everyone in the village. Even wealthy people from countless big cities come here to buy the noodles it grinds. This donkey has extraordinary intelligence and works hard every day. He has been working hard and grinding countless high-quality flours. The best flour has even won a world-class "Best Flour" award. All of us love this donkey, he is our divine donkey. But now he is slacking off and no longer grinding dough. We try to coax it and give it delicious food, hoping that it will continue to grind flour. But he said nothing and was unwilling to continue working. It said, "I'm tired and want to take a rest." As a result, it was dragged to the entrance of the village by the village chief and the villagers who were angry because they could not eat high-quality flour, and killed it and made it into donkey meat and burned it. You said it is true, even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. Why do you think it... Alas, why do you think I am talking to you about this? By the way, when are you going to update?

Is it possible for Blue Silver Grass to take the pharmacist route?

Good!!!!!!!!! Like 😻 This kind of non-systematic novel will not look as abrupt as a systematic novel. It will have a solid feeling of the protagonist walking steadily step by step... I won't say anything else, it just looks good. OK!!!!

All I can say is wait and see and cherish it!! The idea is really great! A rare good article on Douluo on Tomato

As expected, you are gone 😂 Even though I asked you to change your name, you didn't change it.

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