[The domineering black-bellied sister attacks VS the tough-tongued straight male brother suffers]
(Double Clean + Female Attack + No Counterattack)
Chen Ke had not found a job for several months after graduating from university. For this reason, he could only go to the job market to find a job and found a part-time job as a waiter in a hotel. However, he did not expect that his boss would treat him as a tool when he was almost exhausted. , He made an excuse and was about to leave this place of right and wrong. By accident, he bumped into Yu Wanyan at the end of the hotel corridor. From that moment on, Yu Wanyan fell in love with Chen Che at first sight. After Yu Wanyan saw the person who bumped into him clearly, he had bad thoughts towards him.
Later, she wanted to monopolize him. She designed to press forward step by step and break through his defenses. By the time he reacted, it was already too late. He couldn't run away even if he wanted to. He could only be carried in her hands and let her slaughter him.
Later, Yu Wanyan lovingly held Chen Ke in her arms and kissed her fiercely, "My dear brother, you really took half of my sister's life~"
Chen Ke later begged for mercy in the middle of the night: "I was wrong... Sister... Sister... Let me go!"
Yu Wanyan: "Brother, you were the one who sent me to my door yourself at the beginning~"
When Chen Ke resisted and struggled in Yu Wanyan's arms, Yu Wanyan smiled evilly and said: "Good boy, you are mine~" and then intertwined fingers with Chen Ke...
(Jian Shao is helpless, please enter the text)
Reader comments
How should I put it? I have only read 5 chapters of this book. To be precise, I have only listened to 5 chapters. When I was listening, I liked working and cleaning, but when I listened, it felt strange. There were many sentences that appeared again and I had to write them twice. I don't know if the author made a mistake when coding, and there are some things that can be changed. Let's just say that the male protagonist blushes, Chen Ke. The phrase "face flushed" appears several times in this chapter. I feel like I could write like this: "Originally, Chen Ke's face was flushed because he was teased and teased by Yu Wanyan, and now he feels like he is about to bleed." And there are a lot of repeated words like this. If the author opens a new book because he can take my opinion, I don't know whether other readers will listen or read, but I prefer to listen. Such repeated words are really not good to listen to. I hope the author can improve it. I feel that the general content of this book is very good, just because these repeated words and the same sentence appearing many times give the listener a bad feeling. I have only followed 5 chapters, but I will work hard to follow it. If the author sees my comments, he can take a test often. Really
It feels pretty good-looking and pokes me [admiration]
After watching it too much, I found that there are a lot of flaws. There are too many things that have nothing to do with the male and female protagonists. Characters also appear inexplicably, which is a bit weird. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also a bit weird.
Very good, very good, okay, okay, very good, very good, okay, okay
How should I put it? I have only read 5 chapters of this book. To be precise, I have only listened to 5 chapters. When I was listening, I liked working and cleaning, but when I listened, it felt strange. There were many sentences that appeared again and I had to write them twice. I don't know if the author made a mistake when coding, and there are some things that can be changed. Let's just say that the male protagonist blushes, Chen Ke. The phrase "face flushed" appears several times in this chapter. I feel like I could write like this: "Originally, Chen Ke's face was flushed because he was teased and teased by Yu Wanyan, and now he feels like he is about to bleed." And there are a lot of repeated words like this. If the author opens a new book because he can take my opinion, I don't know whether other readers will listen or read, but I prefer to listen. Such repeated words are really not good to listen to. I hope the author can improve it. I feel that the general content of this book is very good, just because these repeated words and the same sentence appearing many times give the listener a bad feeling. I have only followed 5 chapters, but I will work hard to follow it. If the author sees my comments, he can take a test often. Really
It feels pretty good-looking and pokes me [admiration] After watching it too much, I found that there are a lot of flaws. There are too many things that have nothing to do with the male and female protagonists. Characters also appear inexplicably, which is a bit weird. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also a bit weird.
Very good, very good, okay, okay, very good, very good, okay, okay
It's pretty, but a little short.