[Domineering, cunning older-woman seme VS stubborn, straight-laced younger-man uke]
(Both virgins + female-led romance + no role reversal)
Chen Ke has been unable to find a job for months after graduating from college. With no other choice, he goes to a job fair and finds a part-time position as a hotel server. He never expects his boss to treat him like a tool. When he's been plied with so much alcohol that he can barely stand, he makes an excuse to leave the place. By pure chance, he runs into Yu Wanyan at the far end of the hotel corridor. From that moment on, Yu Wanyan falls in love with Chen Ke at first sight. Once she sees who bumped into her, she starts plotting something wicked.
Later, she decides she wants him all to herself. She schemes and corners him at every turn, breaking through one defense after another. By the time Chen Ke realizes what's happening, it's too late. He can't escape and can only fall into her hands, at her mercy.
Later, Yu Wanyan holds Chen Ke in her arms and kisses him fiercely, doting on him. “My sweet little brother~ You nearly killed your big sister~”
In the middle of the night, Chen Ke begs for mercy: “I was wrong... Sis... Big sis... Please let me go!”
Yu Wanyan: “Little brother~ You were the one who came to me in the first place~”
When Chen Ke struggles in Yu Wanyan's arms, she gives him a wicked smile. “Good boy~ You're mine~” Then she interlaces her fingers with his...
(The blurb isn't doing the story justice. Please read the novel.)
How should I put it? I have only read 5 chapters of this book. To be precise, I have only listened to 5 chapters. When I was listening, I liked working and cleaning, but when I listened, it felt strange. There were many sentences that appeared again and I had to write them twice. I don't know if the author made a mistake when coding, and there are some things that can be changed. Let's just say that the male protagonist blushes, Chen Ke. The phrase "face flushed" appears several times in this chapter. I feel like I could write like this: "Originally, Chen Ke's face was flushed because he was teased and teased by Yu Wanyan, and now he feels like he is about to bleed." And there are a lot of repeated words like this. If the author opens a new book because he can take my opinion, I don't know whether other readers will listen or read, but I prefer to listen. Such repeated words are really not good to listen to. I hope the author can improve it. I feel that the general content of this book is very good, just because these repeated words and the same sentence appearing many times give the listener a bad feeling. I have only followed 5 chapters, but I will work hard to follow it. If the author sees my comments, he can take a test often. Really
It feels pretty good-looking and pokes me [admiration] After watching it too much, I found that there are a lot of flaws. There are too many things that have nothing to do with the male and female protagonists. Characters also appear inexplicably, which is a bit weird. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also a bit weird.
It's pretty, but a little short.
Very good, very good, okay, okay, very good, very good, okay, okay