Super God Simulation: My Sixteen Goddesses and Dream Girls!

The legendary critic who inspired me to criticize 100 novels is here again. Today is the fifth article. Plot: 6 points (I respect the original plot very much and there are almost no changes. As for why I gave it five points, it is a second creation. If nothing else, I must at least dominate the entire universe first. Watching the second creation of Super God is just for fun) Cool point: 8 points (either working for a loser, or being a good protagonist) Writing style: 5 points (again, there is no writing style to speak of) Summary: The average score can be given to 6.5 Points. This book does not have many advantages, but it also does not have many poisonous points. You can read it.

This book is currently the most popular supernatural fan novel on the Internet that I like, but it also has flaws: 1. The update is too slow. Two chapters a day is too few. It would be great if it could be updated 10 times a day. 2. Part of the plot lacks detailed descriptions. It can be seen that the author wanted to complete three simulations early in order to advance the speed, but it felt like it was a little too rushed, resulting in insufficient emotional preparation. 3. The emotional description of the protagonist and the three kings is barely passable, but Kazuhiko's emotional shaping is too little, not to mention Angel Leng, who has fewer scenes. I hope that the third simulation can improve. Come on!

The early stage is a routine of simulating reincarnation, but there are only three reincarnations in total. At present, it is regarded as a preparation for the follow-up, and the length is not too long. My suggestion is that if you really don't like watching reincarnation simulations, you should read the first few chapters of each reincarnation to avoid being confused about a lot of information after it officially starts. Overall, there is no problem with the fluency of the sentences, the plot is innovative, the protagonist is not a nanny, she has her own ideas, and there is not too much compassion. If it were limited to the subject of super gods, I would give it a score of 8.6. If put on a broader platform, I can only give it 7.9-8.2. [Thinking][Note]

Contains spoilers,,. . ,. , The first simulation didn't work well, it was too bland. The protagonist had foresight, unparalleled talent, and a good background. However, the final result was the same as the original work. Hua Ye and Su Mary were both alive and well. In the middle, they were talking about looking for opportunities to kill this and that. In the end, they were killed, as if they were transformed into a camera, and they were lonely. Chapter 101 officially enters the plot. The first three paragraphs can be said to be the previous life of the protagonist. At present, it should be an invincible novel. Before the plot begins, there are three generations of physiques, including the pro version of Galaxy Power and Nox War God, an emperor-level void engine, and the ability to be almost immortal. Qilin has just become a police officer, and is looking forward to the follow-up development. I hope to get them all.

The biggest highlight of this book is that the author listened to the advice. When the third simulation was done, the readers said it was not good, but the author really changed it and the content was very good. There were only three simulations in total, and after that, it became the super text. Unlike other simulation articles that keep simulating and don't want to read it after reading it, the gold content of this book lies in the fact that the author really listens to advice.

I have watched three simulations so far, and I can only say one thing: the protagonist is a pure, defeated king. Abuse does not mean that he is defeated. I hope the text is better. If you don't like to see defeated people, you can skip the simulation directly. After reading part of the latter part, I found that there is too little content for a multi-girl dark room. The plot is mediocre and the protagonist's personality is getting a bit weird. I feel like he has become a boss. I can't stand it anymore. I'll come back and read it quickly after it's finished.

The author has a good idea. There is no big problem with the plot. It should be that the writing is not strong enough. The emotions he wants to express are a bit dry. The separation of life and death is a bit too hasty. I want to write it vigorously, but it is a bit dull and cumbersome. Here are some suggestions: Don't use too gorgeous adjectives for death, don't describe too cumbersome details, don't use too much other people's grief and anger for death and sadness, and don't use foul language when angry. The above is a personal opinion, and overall it is very good.

I think this fanfic is really great. Many of its contents portray the protagonist vividly. Maybe some of the plots in the book are cliche, but there is no doubt that this book has lived up to my expectations. I think this five-star rating is completely enough. The author has a gift to add to the update. I won't tell you too much, but I will give it to you three times a day.

It's a good book. It has some plots that I never thought of. It turns out that The Sims can be written like this. At least I haven't seen it in Super God. It uses a way of writing that spans time to deal with emotional abruptness. There is not much change in the character creation. I don't understand why the rating is low. I think this book should have a score of 8.5 Or more among Super God fandoms.

This narrative mode feels very novel. Each simulated life does not interfere with the memory of the previous life. It is very good. I support it. In addition, please update more. The number of chapters is still too few and not enough to read.