Just Want to Kick the Bucket but Like to Nominate a Detective?

(Serious book review) Hmm... How should I put it... The content is quite novel, but the writing style needs to be improved. I hope my wife can write better and better in the future. I got into this trap because my friend said that my wife's nickname is very similar to mine. I'll give it four stars first, and then change it to five stars if the plot and characters are basically the same later. (Indecent book review) Author: My love for mud is like peeing my pants. The clear flow in the cool and humid environment is so warm that only I know (๑°3°๑) Haha... Just a joke, don't take it seriously. —— (I want to like it!)

Looks good! [Adoration] When I watched it, the corner of my mouth was harder to press than the AK [laughing] It's just that the author is very slow to update. Not many people are reading it, and there are no ratings. But if there is a rating, it should be above 9.5 Points. (PS: The author will update soon!!! [Please update])

What can I say, this book is pretty good. However, there are still some shortcomings. For example, it looks a bit messy, and many places are not explained clearly. Character dialogues are occasionally messed up, and I don't know who is speaking to whom. It may be due to unclear expressions. There are also scene changes. The connection is quite good, but it is recommended to add a dividing line to make it clearer. The setting is still very good, the white horse detective and the heroine are also very compatible, the plot is also good, the writing style needs to be improved, there are a lot of vernacular words, but it doesn't matter. The prospects are still very good.

Super good-looking, the tame dyed Thai pants are hot, the characterization is also very good, White Horse Detective is really rarely written about, I finally found it, I like it, I like it

Nice! ! ! This must be the most beautiful Conan CP article I have ever seen. I really like Hakuba Detective and Tsukijo Nao! 99999999 I want to write a CP article about these two, but I don't know if it's possible [crying], but I haven't updated it yet. I'm really hungry—is there any food for me to eat [crying] [crying] [crying]

The interaction between the protagonist and White Horse Detective is very sweet and sweet. I feel like I can add the tag #sweet. The setting is also very novel. The heroine gives me the feeling of being rational (although the rationality is not so obvious in the later stage) but not losing vitality. The detective is also very good. He has written out the arrogant and gentle feeling. Now I want to mention some points that disappoint me. First of all, isn't there a setting in the early stage called "Prophet"? So the author arranged a notebook for him, but it seems that he has never written again after a few chapters written in the notebook. I like to pay more attention to it [crying], and the heroine's character changes with the plot. This is very well written [loving], but it seems that the rationality is drowned a bit? [Shocked] (Of course, I don't mean to say bad) You can describe Yukijo Nao's demeanor, language, and actions, for example, "Nao holds Xiao Tan's hand..." In fact, you can also add some small habits to the heroine in the later stage, such as "When the heroine is nervous, she touches her hands unconsciously." To the pocket watch on the chest. "Of course, it can also be combined with some noodles. For example, "The guests all cheered and shouted, but she remained silent, and there seemed to be an inextricable sadness on her face." In the end, it all depends on personal subjective opinion, because I am the kind of person who loves details, so I think it may be a bit over the top [Blowing a kiss]

Damn, I would like to ask if Yue Cheng's ability is high and if his force value is high. I don't really want to read the kind of article that relies on others, but this is not a malicious comment. Five-star praise has been sent [blowing kiss]

This article is very well written [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]. The writing style and plot content are also very appropriate. The character of the heroine is really great. She has a cute baby girl and Dada who often responds to messages. This article is really good, and the plot of the White Horse Detective is in Mingke. There are very few, so there is no infringement of the original work. There are many OOCs, but the author's OOC will not make people feel very annoying. On the contrary, it is a strong and colorful stroke, so be sure not to cut it off and update it all the time [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

I quite like this plot, but I prefer the emotional line with White Horse Detective. I hope the author can focus more on Xiao Tan. I feel that Xiao Tan will have a low sense of presence in the first half [Love] [Sending Hearts] Good luck to the author, I will keep following it. This book is really super beautiful, I love it so much, please update it soon [Love] [Blowing Kisses]

It's rare to see a novel with the CP being White Horse Detective. The content and plot are quite interesting.

It's good to read, but I still feel very complicated now. I don't want to think about it, but when I saw the end of the novel by Ming Ke, the only one I was still chasing before, I clicked on it. I should be happy now, damn 73 (⑉꒦ິ^꒦ິ⑉)

It's so good-looking [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The author should not stop updating

The setting is very unique, and the male protagonist is Tan Tan (according to the current plot trend, yes)

Nice! ! ! ! ! Author, please don't abandon your article! ! ! Super pretty! ! ! [Flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][love][love][love][love][love]

When did you write that Hakuba went to Ekoda Middle School🤔️

It's very good. I just wish I had more interactions with White Horse Detective.

This is really beautiful, it feels like the original work, I can even imagine the scene when watching it

Like [admiration] very much

Dear author, please tell me in advance if you abandon the book! I haven't read this book for such a long time, I thought it should be updated, but when I clicked on the book, I found that... I could listen to the latest chapter😅😇

It's rare to have a CP Baima Tan

Finally someone wrote that CP is from Baima Tan [Like][Like][Like]

It's beautiful. I like it very much. It's rare to see a cp with a white horse. I hope the author can send more sweets.

It's the first time I've seen Hakuma Tan, which deserves encouragement👍. If it weren't for the fact that they are too young, the relationship between the male and female protagonists would be very sweet☺️

It's super good-looking, the interaction between the protagonist and White Horse Detective is super sweet, and the protagonist's strength is also very high. The first time I saw the cp was White Horse Detective's Mingke fanfic. It felt very novel and captured my heart deeply [Adoration]

Looks great, recommended! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good! The characters are well-matched, the plot is fascinating, and the author is really great! Just a quick question, I saw chapter 80, will there be meaty ones in the back [shy][shy]

It's super pretty. I'll be sad every time the baby doesn't watch it, okay? It's really super pretty. The young couple just wants to be sweet.

The storyline is very interesting and the language is vivid and vivid

Good looking, but not enough

Where has my hero gone?