Tokyo Ghoul: Touka Takes Me Back to Antiques at the Beginning

The writing is quite good, but don't keep emphasizing on being thin. He is handsome, has a thin body, and his shoulders are not wide. He is just a little girl, a sissy. He is written as if he has strength. A man should at least have a normal shoulder width to give people a sense of security. You can wear clothes that don't show off your flesh, but you can't really have no flesh.

Dear author, can you add a sister Quan as the heroine? [Sinister smile]

I don't read many ghoul fanfics, but this one is quite to my liking. This book is probably more of an emotional one. The various female protagonists are well portrayed. The protagonist is also decisive and will act when necessary. The author is also very good at writing and can make people smile knowingly (if you understand it, you will face the wall consciously). In addition to the emotional drama, this book is also good in other aspects. The battles are crushing. Although the protagonist is invincible, the writing does not make people feel boring. Overall, this book is very suitable for readers who want to "attack female characters" and can be read without any difficulty even if they have not read the original work.

I'll deduct points for helping others evolve. It's enough to be able to eat everyone's food. There's no need for a protagonist to push for evolution.

It's been a long time since I've read such an interesting ghoul novel. The author's writing is really good [crying] [crying] It's a pity that not many people read it. I hope the author can stick to it ✊ [crying] [crying] Please! I will give the author some gifts during the Chinese New Year. It may not be much, but it is a little bit of my thoughts [crying] [sending heart] [sending heart] Come on, author! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Like]

It's okay so far. It would be great if there was a single heroine. Of course, I'm just thinking about it.

Well, it's a really invincible novel. I feel like the protagonist can have whatever abilities he wants, just by rubbing them with his hands. Although it's very unscientific, this is how the second dimension works [laughter] So what, does the author want to open up the heavens? It's a pity that the protagonist's ability cannot be used by Zhu Tianlang, it's so outrageous (abstract)

The cover of this novel... Is simple and simple, with profound meaning. It is a masterpiece... Well, it made me laugh and get rich.

The previous plot is very good, and the overall plot logic is also very smooth. Then maybe the only shortcoming is that I think other power systems should be brought out in advance, or multiple types should be put together, but it may be difficult to describe it like this, so the author chose to release it at a later stage, which also made me feel a bit slow. Then I felt a little jumpy when I watched it later, so the plot was a bit short, but overall it was okay.

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled in the World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I followed the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" Divine Body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am old, and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update!

See the latest 129 chapters. The harem story hasn't started studding yet, so I'm a bit more of a royal uncle, so I hope there will be more descriptions of mooching in the future.

It's not bad. It's one of the few books that can be read as a ghoul fanfic. It contains basically all of it, and there are also rough emotional scenes. The latter part is better than the previous one. However, there are also shortcomings, that is, the combat power at the beginning is too low, and the pace in the early stage is too slow, causing some impatient readers to start scolding. Adjusting the beginning will reduce the negative reviews.

What I like most is the author's work. Although the writing style of this book is a bit immature, both the plot and the characters attract me the most. So when can we update as soon as possible? Is it possible to update 10,000 words a day only by locking you, the author, in a small dark room and being fed and deprived of sleep? [Sneaky laugh]

There are many women, there are many daily routines and they are very sweet, and the overall rhythm is relatively relaxed. In the middle, I felt that because I wanted to write out each woman's role clearly, some parts were delayed, and I felt a little anxious while watching it. It might be better to listen to the book. The cheating is indeed a bit big, but since there are multiple girls, I must have the strength [laughs evilly], overall it's not bad, it's a relaxing fanfic

I feel that compared to other Tokyo Gourmet fanfics, this one is better. I only read a few of the other ones and lost interest. I think this one is good and I love to read it, but it's just not enough. How can the author sleep without updating 20 chapters in a day [please update] But one thing I'm not satisfied with is that the protagonist and Dong Xiang haven't revealed each other's identities yet. I hope it will be soon.

The most inked fanfic I have ever seen, in every aspect. But if you like long-winded and slow-paced music, you can take a look.

Why doesn't the author even have a decent cover [laughing]

It looks good. Except for the fact that Dong Xiang's favorability increased a little quickly at the beginning~(￣▽￣~)~, I also suggested that the author design a good-looking cover. Although I came in after reading the introduction, I feel that the cover is still very important to increase the first impression. Come on! Faster [laughs evilly]

It's good to watch. The author is good at writing emotional dramas. It's rare to see such delicate emotional dramas. The portrayal of the heroine is very good. I read it as a novelist at first. The emotional dramas really amazed me. The heroines are so cool.

I just finished reading it and typed a lot of words and then deleted them. Only two words, perfect A beautiful world, many girls, cool writing, Invincible does not suffer from lax writing, the heroines are not forced to live in harmony, each has their own personality

Author, your cover is not very attractive to readers. The content is very high-quality, but this cover really loses points. Come on, author.

All that caught my eye was the interaction with the female counterpart. I couldn't tell for a moment whether this was a male or female channel.

It looks pretty good now, mainly because I collected a lot [laughing]

The food for thought is that the author is too short, so he criticizes it and hopes to correct it [laughter]

To write such a good book with an abstract cover, of course there are some scenes that are too boring, but they are still good. I'm definitely not saying this because of sex.

Although the protagonist is a bit of a fun-loving person, there is nothing wrong with being a fun-loving person in the miserable world of Tokyo foodies. At least the protagonist changes the fate of the people and foodies around him. When you have the ability and strength, what if you open a Crystal Palace? I personally like this book very much. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Not bad, except after opening. Palace. Another point is that the plug-in is in use but not obvious.

The content of the novel is actually quite novel. It introduces two power systems from other anime worlds, Devil Fruit and Zanpakutō. However, the description is too little. It is basically just a brushstroke. If there can be a more in-depth description and a better portrayal of everyone after gaining power, then this novel will be better.

The writing is super beautiful. The author is suitable for writing sweet articles. The author who wants to die [anger] [anger] [anger] will update me.

It's good to watch, the plot is smooth and has no irritating points. At least the part I've seen so far is very good. Good luck to the author.