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The first world was a bit sloppy in the later stages, and it felt like it was unfinished. The pace of the second world is a bit slower so far, and it should be longer. Girl, I hope you can write it longer. It's nice and I love reading it. I particularly like the setting. The logic is self-consistent, and everyone is warm. It's a warm cultivation world. The author's writing style is quite unique, the perspective changes very quickly, and everyone describes a little bit. The writing style of the second world feels like it has evolved. It is shorter and less fancy, but it is also artistic and picturesque. Do you also like some poetry? The summary is that the first world is watchable, but there is a vague vacancy, but it was quite funny in the early stage, and the second world is quite interesting so far. Just to mention it, I think the author's writing style has a faint sense of be, which is to describe heart-warming pictures, but it also has a sad feeling? (I strongly recommend girls to write a long and serious book about cultivating immortality. The perspective is very smooth, suitable for writing group portraits)

I'm looking forward to the teacher's second world. I'll catch up after the teacher finishes writing the second world. I'm almost done with the second world, and I feel like the character development of the teacher is getting better and better. Looks good. I like it, baby. Come on. Kuai Zai Kuai Zai teacher has stopped updating?

Wai Rui Gu De! The third treasure novel of winter vacation! She's a cute and silly heroine!

It's nice to watch. I like the second world. The characters in it are so cute😍

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