Beastmastering: Bonds and Legends

Come on first, come on! Come on! Come on! Comment again. Overall, there is no big problem with the writing. There are some minor disadvantages: ① It cannot escape the problem of ordinary articles, which are small and old (although the author has tried to avoid it), but this is human nature, but it is difficult to stand out among many articles written in this way. (If it's a brainless cool article, just think I didn't say, "brainless") ②As of Chapter 75, I'm not sure who the main heroine is. She stays with one for a while and then leaves. What's wrong? The history of love growth? The protagonist said: No, buddy, my memories of two lifetimes were written like this? If you want to write a story with multiple female protagonists, it is recommended that you write it as a happy ending, with the protagonist group constantly expanding and strengthening, and not setting the backyard on fire, otherwise it will easily collapse. (The role of the eldest heroine is to lead the harem and try to unite everyone) (The abbreviation is not cool enough) ③ Regarding the title of the book, the author's article mainly writes about beast control and love. What the hell is bond? It's too general. Go search the Internet for what bond means. The protagonist's male companion really doesn't play much of a role. You can directly name the sub-theme of love. These are the three points for the time being. The author may reply if he has time. I used to look down on articles with less than 500,000 words, but after reading this book, I now understand that millions of words also impose restrictions on articles and embarrass the author. 4 Stars control points. Finally, Lai Jia: The comments expressed only represent my personal views... (All the Lai Jia you can think of are there...). The author is lucky, I just finished reading what you wrote. The next book I read, I found a negative example. Traveling as a substitute, I collect a group of imperial concubines. "Brainless" cool article, but thunderous. I've read Chapter 168. The author doesn't have much free time so he can just read Chapter 168. If he has time, he can read it from the beginning. I just want to ask, what is the significance of writing this chapter 168 for the harem? And the reason why it is said to be "brainless" is that there are many details that cannot withstand scrutiny, so most of the content can be skipped and directly read the interesting parts. But to be honest, I really didn't feel much after reading this. You can say that I can skip Chapter 168 and not read it, but I am different. I just like to read slowly. Otherwise, how can I read good articles? Daily speech stacking: My remarks only represent my personal views... (Everything you can think of is stacked...).

Can the third one be a rhinoceros? I've never seen a beast-control novel about a rhinoceros. Is the rhinoceros finally out? I'm so looking forward to it. Come on, author!

Come on, keep updating

Is there a single heroine? I hope she will be single.

The author writes well, keep up the good work

Big cheers for the author

A very good article about animal control.

It's a pity. The system at the beginning probably discouraged many people. Anyway, I really enjoyed watching it.

Very good, why is the rating so low?

🤫, The author started to let himself go later [laughing]

It's so well written, it's so refreshing. I don't usually read animal-controlling stories, but this one should have been read by me, the Yellow Emperor [laughing evilly]

Looking forward to it more and more

It's pretty good, the plot is just that kind of plot [eating melon]

I think it's still pretty good-looking

Very interesting novel

Good, good, good, good

Not bad! Very good

Come on, good, good [thinking]

Not bad, very pretty

I think it looks pretty good. Why is the rating so low? Let me give it a thumbs up.

The content is good, it must be at least 7 points. Is it because of the characteristics of a scumbag?

So why did Song write it? Didn't appear later

The content is good, but the protagonist is still too benevolent and kind-hearted. It would be better if the protagonist was darker, but now he is a bit poisonous. The protagonist is purely a good person [laughs awkwardly]. He will reveal whatever he has learned through research. He doesn't know whether to say some or leave some. Now that there are many female protagonists, don't you know how to leave some knowledge for your own women and juniors to be better than others? Pure poison! Besides

Write faster. I want to read it.