I,*****

Finally met a book whose protagonist can be said to be a normal person There are no unnatural characters or designs. A person has self-awareness, has independent views, has his own considerations about people and things, and will not fall ill without thinking. Not a saint, not a villain, just an ordinary person trying hard to make himself and the people around him happy. The most complex yet simple ordinary people So good

The character of the male protagonist is similar to Ichigo. His fundamental purpose in fighting is to protect rather than have any rights. This kind of person is a qualified guardian and warrior, but he is not a qualified warrior. As he himself said, he cannot rationally control the human race against the demon clan. If he is a brave man, he may not end up becoming a sword and chess piece of the human nobles, and finally dies in the internal fighting of the human race. But Linn is a complete womanizer. If the original work is followed, it will be equivalent to Ichigo being forced to be the captain of the Shinigami. This is not a matter of combat talent. Only when the male protagonist loses the shackles of the brave man chosen by the Holy Sword can he become the real savior.

It's well written. It's currently known that the heroine is probably a younger sister, a goddess, and a princess who fell in love with the protagonist at first sight. In the previous life, they were all probably female villains. Although the protagonist has no memory of them and doesn't recognize them, the only thing he understands is the goddess's "script" Overall it's pretty good

The decent protagonist has no memory of rebirth and seems to be a native. The villain has a system and is reborn. The original heroines are also reborn. Now the decent protagonist has a sister and a goddess. The original heroines are villains this time and should die.

I have finished watching the harem, but currently there is a sister who has grown up with the protagonist, a goddess, and finally a princess who fell in love at first sight. Those reborn girls in the plot originally liked the protagonist, but later their memories were misled and they became fond of the villain (similar to) What to watch: Watch the protagonist grow up and kill the demon king (personal guess, or the demon king is killed by someone else), watch the development of the protagonist and the heroines (I want to watch the mating! Cough) watch the new girl be harmed by the villain or regret and want to please the protagonist (the regret may not develop)

Excellent articles about anti-anti-anti-routine, now that they have been planted, will there be articles about anti-anti-anti-routine in the future [face covering]

By light novel standards, the writing is okay. I don't like villain novels in which the original protagonist is rendered useless, because it's hard to imagine that anyone would like the original work. However, the anti-villain novels still have their value as works that criticize the "unrestricted proliferation of the protagonist's aura". Later, the anti-villain novels were as big as themselves, which can be regarded as a reflection on how nothing can be done without the protagonist's halo. Later, when the anti-villain novels were re-skinned and written purely as a cool article, that is another matter... The work I want to see is one in which the original owner, who already has advantages, improves under the influence of the villain and can empathize with the villain; and the villain, with the help of the original owner, can gain more goodwill and regain enthusiasm and hope for the world. To put it bluntly, I hope to see the heroes and villains fighting together, so that both sides can become more mature and better. This novel, as an anti-anti-contrary formula, feels that there is still a certain problem of the protagonist having too much aura and the villain becoming stereotyped. You can even directly say that if you are good with the protagonist, you will be destined, and if you are against the protagonist, you will not be able to do anything... This is too vulgar. The reason why I hope the protagonist can be happy is because of the karma and blessings of the good things they have done, not just because he is the protagonist and he is awesome. Looking forward to better content from the author.

The point I lost is Chapter 52, which describes the cruelty of the demons and the harm they caused to the human race. I really want to laugh. This level of cruelty is not as good as what humans do to humans.

I have read a lot of novels. In the past, when I read a book like this, which seemed a bit like a gift for a girl, I felt very uncomfortable. But this book is really magical. I felt very happy when I saw those so-called heroines trying to throw themselves into the arms of the villains [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] They looked like clowns in the circus, making people laugh [laughing and crying]

The selection of materials is very innovative and full of foreshadowing. There is no suffocating plot yet. It should be noted that the heroines in the first episode may not be accepted/killed in the second episode because they cannot accept the attention.

It's pretty good to watch. The main character is determined to be the heroine. Those who accuse those who give away girls as being unfamiliar are a bit outrageous. Why do your ex-girlfriends don't love you anymore and they still insist on keeping themselves private? Or should they just lick you back like a licking dog? That's good.

It's good to watch, I love it, but it's not enough. I suggest you don't write about the emotional drama between the pseudo-heroine and the villain. The score will be higher. Just focus on describing how the pseudo-heroine regrets it. Are there any similar novels in which the villain becomes the original protagonist through time travel?

So far I have only read the rough plot at the beginning, which is quite novel, but the writing style needs to be improved. For example: adding some demeanor descriptions and action descriptions that fit the characters between the character dialogues can make it more vivid and have a sense of picture. Instead of simply character + saying, this usage of simplified musical notation is used too much in some chapters (Chapter 5). Of course, it doesn't have to be subtle... Otherwise, when I see the protagonist's grandma, except for the image description at the beginning, the rest is all based on imagination...

I've finished watching it all. I, Shen Nong, haven't been poisoned yet. I'll watch the follow-up. The protagonist is ok, and the villain Lin is also ok. She looks like a little fairy. The demons have learned from the mistakes made by that famous clan in history. Okay, I'll take a few bites to see.

It's not bad, but the first few chapters are a bit confusing. Can the author please stop talking about it? Although I know from the beginning that your writing is bad and needs time to practice, there is no need to write down everyone's thoughts when writing a game. Sometimes you write a lot about every action of the protagonist or opponent, especially the protagonist's sister. They all say that they believe in the protagonist, but they are worried to death every time. It's not that I don't want to see this kind of plot, but it's just that one plot is enough, and it's too much to write, unless it's mentioned in one sentence. Otherwise, everyone will know that you are in a plot. And the villain's character design is a bit strange, I mean it's not like other villain characters. I don't know if I missed it or if I don't know what his purpose is for traveling here? What is the goal? If not, it's best to explain otherwise it will feel weird. (One sentence: Authors should omit appropriately when writing novels! Complete the villain settings)

"Does the author have to say who said so and so after each sentence?" Dashuaib1 said.

Relaxing, stress-free, sweet, and reassuring, it is an excellent work to soothe your mood before going to bed (which is why version t0 as a villain deserves to be called version t0), and the last sentence is a lolita control ecstasy.

Not bad, but try to leave the plot to Noah

That's good, because only those who have the personality to be a brave can be called a brave.

Tomato is already considered a good novel. At least it's much better than what I had before. It's not easy. I finally found a nugget of gold.

Very good subject matter, eye-catching. However, it is not easy to control, and it lacks a main goal. This point has not been mentioned by the author yet (it is impossible to defeat Linn, so it is the main goal)

I think I can melt that holy sword

It's a very novel subject matter, and I have the urge to write a fanfic.

I feel that these women are quite pitiful. After reading the whole article, it seems that their brains have been manipulated and their own judgment has been lost. Basically, he has completely become a puppet on the strings of the mastermind behind the scenes.

After such a comparison, I suddenly found that the protagonist in the original book and the current book is really amazing. After reading Chapter 68, I was shocked. No, it's Chapter 66

Good! Compared with the content of the previous book, this book is much better overall. Although it is a bit stiff at the beginning, I enjoyed reading it later. Loli also has enough control, I hope the update will be faster

What will happen to the author, Mordra, in the end? Spending so much time writing about him probably has an effect. It is estimated that Linn had a misunderstanding about the demons and did not untie her knot until she met the demon king. Will this Mora eventually join the protagonist group?

There are a lot of typos... But it's quite sweet. I like pretty girls the most. I also need to write more about the interaction between the protagonist Noah and the goddess, sister and other female protagonists. It feels good.

A very novel way of writing, the original protagonist of the villain novel. The plot design is also good, but the real heroines are all more girly types, so I deducted one star. I personally prefer the sister type.

It's quite good, the protagonist's brain is fine, the goddess is almost the template of the blue-haired one with unlimited tiles, and the other heroines are also well set up. There are indeed a lot of typos...