My Youth Love Story Cannot Be Shura Field

Eighty thousand words, the first five-star review is given to myself as an encouragement! I hope everyone will like this book. Please correct me if it is not in place and accept all kinds of criticism [Salute][Salute]

Save money: If it looks ugly at the front, it won't make any sense no matter how beautiful it is at the back. I didn't want to read it anymore after reaching chapter 16. I stayed up late to watch it and the more I read it, the more sleepy I became. The relationship between the heroine and the hero is not like a couple, but more like a kindergarten teacher and a naughty boy. The hero has no opinions of his own. He doesn't refuse anyone who comes and has a soft personality. Even if others do something extraordinary, he is rude. Things that are offensive, the protagonist yells at him and says he is a coward, and the protagonist's brother, my own brother has to tell me when he takes something from me. The protagonist's brother grabbed his mobile phone directly. Although the author said that many problems will be improved in the future, but it is difficult for anyone to see the latter at this level.

You actually created two violent maniacs like Hu Yifei

The plot really fits the abbreviation of Yunnan "Dian" This plot is so crazy. The two female protagonists in the early stages were really irritating. I was so angry and speechless. It was quite extreme to have no boundaries. The same goes for the male protagonist. It gave me the impression that he was not proactive, refused or responsible, and could not see the characteristics of the characters at all. It's like a pot of soup. It doesn't follow the taste, the recipe, or the type. You just add whatever comes to mind, and after it's cooked, you hold your nose and swallow it directly down your throat. You can't even taste it with your tongue. The only feeling is that you drank something, but you don't know what it tastes like. I just know that you drank something.

Generally speaking, the male protagonist is a jerk, but Luo Yuwei gives people a bad impression. First of all, the character you created is not worthy of the name. I won't say anything about what kind of passionate harem you are targeting. It's too difficult to judge. When I saw Hu Yifei, no one who has seen Love Apartment would say she looks like it. Hu Yifei took the initiative to scold Nuolan? Or should Hu Yifei beat Nuolan first when he comes up? I don't even look at what the plot line between Hu Yifei and Nuo Lan is like. The only thing shown in it is Hu Yifei's tough talk as a woman, and there is no ordinary toughness at all. Luo Yuwei is a person who makes people feel bad. She is a human and I eat it.

Nice article, uh... Let me comment! The article is generally good. Now I have read the second article. During the whole process, I read other books for a while, and then read this book for a while. I see that the only thing I look forward to so far is the male protagonist's relationship chain, but because it is a daily novel, it is the only point that promotes the main plot. The progress feels really slow, and the content seems quite satisfactory. It's like a game of chess. You know you'll make a magical move in the end, but in the process, it's like a small piece eating the chess pieces. It can even be said that it's not inconsistent at all if you remove the feeling. Personally, I feel that the author does not need to pursue such hidden content. Daily writing should be more relaxed, rather than mixed with some thought-provoking topics, which will create a sense of violation. In terms of writing, it is suitable for the daily life of the public and meets the needs of the article. The content is quite average, and because of the identities of some of the male protagonists, there will be some small climaxes in the content, which is average to average. (Final summary: There is no single point that stands out, but rather the depth of the topic of relaxed daily life, and the male protagonist's reaction is a bit neither salty nor bland...) (There are also too many people, not only because there are too many names, but also because there are too many supporting roles) (I feel that the author wants to play a more grand game) (There are also some issues about the order of appearance of some characters and some aspects of characterization, which I will think about carefully) Of course, when reading the article, you still need to taste it in line with the relaxed and happy mood of the homepage. These are also the results I got through careful thinking. Generally speaking, if you don't think carefully, you can't find any bad points. It's just that the author feels that the chess game is too big, and the retention volume may be relatively small. Personal opinion, I hope the author writes better and better! Come on!

It seems good so far, but is the heroine except Tang currently under control? Anyway, their personalities are weird, as if they were set by others, so what will happen if they lose control later? I don't feel like I necessarily love the male protagonist, right? So this could be a single heroine or dual heroines (not sure)

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The writing is super nice, and it has laughs but is not just like stock trading. The plot is also well-founded and not just a matryoshka doll. The whole main line is gradually advanced. It is the best book I have read recently. Great support for the author!

Why are the male protagonists of this type of novels cowardly?

I just started reading, the first book I read, I thought it was okay

It's well written, in the style of a light novel, and the heroines are each cute in their own way [Adoration] The feeling of watching harem anime [Like][Like]

It feels a bit frustrating to watch

It would be a lot better if I deleted the brothers. I don't understand what the yandere novel wants the brothers to do.

Is this a book about stock trading or a harem book? Now the male protagonist has lost his memory, and three of the female protagonists have been given psychological hints. One of them is a bit of a middle-aged girl, and there is another one from abroad. It is also written like stock trading.

Why does this male protagonist have no responsibility at all?

However, in the next second, he changed the subject and his tone became a little stiff: "Since neither of you are my girlfriend, why are you asking all these questions!" Author, you are great. You didn't write anything like this. It's all about weak men. The protagonist finally knows that he is the biggest one.

. . . . . This is for people who like Luo Yuwei. But it would be great if it were changed to a single female protagonist Luo, don't worry about the others.

Very nice! The style of a light novel is not like a brainless novel, but unfortunately not many people read it [crying]

So far, it seems there are no big poisonous points. The Shura Field is really good. The female protagonists all have very distinct personalities. The male protagonist may have hidden some big secrets in his past. Five-star praise. Come on, author!

Hope everything ends well

Does the male protagonist have some kind of disease? He's very good-looking. Come on, author.

I thought it was just an ordinary Shura field, but there is a plot and even pitfalls. It's a bit surprising. I just don't know why the author stopped updating.

It's so good. I love watching it every day. I just like this kind of Shura Field!

I just want to be nice to the protagonist

Love to watch. . . . . Come on💪

Please give me another chapter. When I finish reading the newer chapter, I feel like there are ants crawling around again [eating melon] [eating melon]

In the style of a light novel, the Shura field of the female protagonists is very beautiful. The female protagonists also have IQs and are not completely brainless. At present, it seems that the male protagonist still has past events. I look forward to the subsequent plot~(¯▽¯~)

Dear author, is the protagonist Bai Yueguang about to appear? Come on, author, when I get paid, I will definitely give you a reward. The plot of the last book that imitated Cupid's Chocolate disappeared, which made me go online for a long time. It took me more than a year to find a book like yours. You must come on, really, I am most optimistic about you.

The plot is compact and the content is interesting