I, an Ordinary Person, Am Actually in a Tragic Shura Field!

Eighty thousand words, the first five-star review is given to myself as an encouragement! I hope everyone will like this book. Please correct me if it is not in place and accept all kinds of criticism [Salute][Salute]

Nice article, uh... Let me comment! The article is generally good. Now I have read the second article. During the whole process, I read other books for a while, and then read this book for a while. I see that the only thing I look forward to so far is the male protagonist's relationship chain, but because it is a daily novel, it is the only point that promotes the main plot. The progress feels really slow, and the content seems quite satisfactory. It's like a game of chess. You know you'll make a magical move in the end, but in the process, it's like a small piece eating the chess pieces. It can even be said that it's not inconsistent at all if you remove the feeling. Personally, I feel that the author does not need to pursue such hidden content. Daily writing should be more relaxed, rather than mixed with some thought-provoking topics, which will create a sense of violation. In terms of writing, it is suitable for the daily life of the public and meets the needs of the article. The content is quite average, and because of the identities of some of the male protagonists, there will be some small climaxes in the content, which is average to average. (Final summary: There is no single point that stands out, but rather the depth of the topic of relaxed daily life, and the male protagonist's reaction is a bit neither salty nor bland...) (There are also too many people, not only because there are too many names, but also because there are too many supporting roles) (I feel that the author wants to play a more grand game) (There are also some issues about the order of appearance of some characters and some aspects of characterization, which I will think about carefully) Of course, when reading the article, you still need to taste it in line with the relaxed and happy mood of the homepage. These are also the results I got through careful thinking. Generally speaking, if you don't think carefully, you can't find any bad points. It's just that the author feels that the chess game is too big, and the retention volume may be relatively small. Personal opinion, I hope the author writes better and better! Come on!

It seems good so far, but is the heroine except Tang currently under control? Anyway, their personalities are weird, as if they were set by others, so what will happen if they lose control later? I don't feel like I necessarily love the male protagonist, right? So this could be a single heroine or dual heroines (not sure)

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The writing is super nice, and it has laughs but is not just like stock trading. The plot is also well-founded and not just a matryoshka doll. The whole main line is gradually advanced. It is the best book I have read recently. Great support for the author!

I just started reading, the first book I read, I thought it was okay

It's well written, in the style of a light novel, and the heroines are each cute in their own way [Adoration] The feeling of watching harem anime [Like][Like]

Very nice! The style of a light novel is not like a brainless novel, but unfortunately not many people read it [crying]

So far, it seems there are no big poisonous points. The Shura Field is really good. The female protagonists all have very distinct personalities. The male protagonist may have hidden some big secrets in his past. Five-star praise. Come on, author!

Hope everything ends well

Does the male protagonist have some kind of disease? He's very good-looking. Come on, author.

I thought it was just an ordinary Shura field, but there is a plot and even pitfalls. It's a bit surprising. I just don't know why the author stopped updating.

It's so good. I love watching it every day. I just like this kind of Shura Field!

I just want to be nice to the protagonist

Love to watch. . . . . Come on💪

Please give me another chapter. When I finish reading the newer chapter, I feel like there are ants crawling around again [eating melon] [eating melon]

In the style of a light novel, the Shura field of the female protagonists is very beautiful. The female protagonists also have IQs and are not completely brainless. At present, it seems that the male protagonist still has past events. I look forward to the subsequent plot~(¯▽¯~)

Dear author, is the protagonist Bai Yueguang about to appear? Come on, author, when I get paid, I will definitely give you a reward. The plot of the last book that imitated Cupid's Chocolate disappeared, which made me go online for a long time. It took me more than a year to find a book like yours. You must come on, really, I am most optimistic about you.

The plot is compact and the content is interesting

Just stop being a eunuch [face covering]

Just stop being a eunuch [face covering]

Hurry up and pass the review, hurry up

It's okay if you can watch it. The disadvantage is that it's too deserted. I haven't seen any comments after reading it for a long time.

Don't look at the ratings, look at how many people are watching [face covering]

The plot is interesting and the plot is smooth. What happened to the protagonist when he was a child is worth thinking about. By the way, I am not a pornographic soldier (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

Personally I think it is very well written and I really like reading it. Good luck to the author. I hope it won't stop updating.

Just put together five words

Okay, pretty good-looking

Oke Oke hahaha

How many heroines are there in total? How many are there?