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The overall look and feel is good now, there are no IQ points that are off the line, and there are no areas that are too shocking. The plot development is also quite good. I hope the author will not stop and develop it with a good plot. (At the same time, I feel that the Yang boy is pretty good and can be the male protagonist)

The plot of this book is very exciting, and the author's writing style is also relatively delicate. This book should be the author's first book. The plot and emotional lines are still somewhat unsatisfactory. I hope the author will continue to work hard and support you!

Not bad, not bad, very active hehe

I'm here to see your new work. The storyline is great. I'll update it soon. I'm looking forward to it [laughing] I like Teacher Yue's works very much. I hope Teacher Yue can work harder. The update is a bit slow, but I can see that the author has put a lot of effort into it. Come on [laughter]

The words you write are like stars, shining with the light of wisdom. Reading your works makes people mesmerized.

It looks pretty good so far [got it]

If only the writing were clearer, this would be the best novel I have ever read.

I want to see the yandere protagonist [smile] (bushi)