Reality Games: Creating Myths from Kafka

4 And a half for the book (the quality of tomatoes shall prevail) and half for the author's sentiments (Come on Sister Nan) Book review: Advantages: The story is complete, not fragmented, the characters are clear, there is brain, the story is deep, full of emotions, a lot of foreshadowing, a great world view, each character has a distinct thought, the characterization is complete, the spirit conveyed in the article is clear (feels like it is a bit attached to the Chinese spirit?), And the description is delicate Disadvantages: The foreshadowing in the early stage, the introduction of the characters, and the plot advancement are too slow. It is very tiring to watch in the era when cool writing is popular. In the later stage, it keeps recycling foreshadowing, reversal, and explosion. Many details are a bit vague, and it feels a bit rushed. There is no buffer point for emotions, or if the plot is forced, there can be no buffer point. The middle is constantly added to complete the character stories, which makes the narrative a bit chaotic and the rhythm is too fast. To the author: Sister Nan's books have always been recognized. Outside of the starting point, it is rare to see fan fiction that is descriptive, in-depth, thoughtful, creative, and close to the original characters without being OOC. However, I feel that Sister Nan (the two books currently written by Tomato) are more sad in writing. The protagonist always has to be depressed and then grow up. The pace is slow in the early stage, and suddenly explosive in the middle and late stages, and the emotions are too tight. Secondly, in the middle and later stages, the protagonist grows up, and other characters have to complete it, and the foreshadowing needs to be recycled and reversed... The whole text feels like a tower. It is not an easy task to control the full text. How to lengthen the sense of narrative without making certain paragraphs bloated or empty, and how to arrange and complete the character creation, I hope you will think carefully.

Why is there no one reading such a beautiful book? Especially to my taste. [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

It's so pretty. I didn't expect tomatoes to have such fine bran.

Come on, come on, I like it very much

It's rare to see such a good integration of game characters and its own world view. The characters are not OOC, and the main plot is a bit too over-the-top, but it is classic and passionate enough and worth watching. The last time I saw a similar Miyou fusion worldview was "Heterogeneous World Rhapsody", which was also well written, but it's a pity that the author is a eunuch. Hope this can end well.

Of all the books I've read, this one is pretty good. I guarantee it will get an 8 out of 10. If I'm lucky, it will get up to 9 out of 10, but it's just not popular yet.

The writing is relatively good, but the protagonist's role is really a bit small, his ability awakening is a bit late, and his mastery level is a bit low. Will there be only one role in the future or will there be more roles?

It's very interesting. Please keep reading. This book will be rated 9 points. From the perspective of characterization, it really feels like the character Beng Tie has come into reality. At least Kafka's character is well portrayed.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! !

As soon as I read it, I knew that your book was extraordinary, and it made me angry [anger] [admiration]

It was a bit difficult at the beginning but got better later.

He's very good with knives, and the plot is quite well written.

It looks good and doesn't feel awkward at all. I feel like it's very well written. It feels like it has become a lifetime work. This book feels like it has just begun, and even the most basic world view has not been completely set.

This high-quality masterpiece really captures Kafka's feelings as a traveler on his final journey. Highly recommended.

The writing is pretty good so far.

If you like it, come and see more.

No, no, I must let others know about such a beautiful book! ! ! So pretty~

It's really good to read. I hope the author can keep writing and read from the first chapter to the end.

It feels like the further back you look, the better it looks [exploration]

It's quite an interesting idea, but I was initially discouraged by the title of the book a few times, because most similar summoning genres are so mediocre that they make you want to vomit. Come on, author, take good care of you~

I finished reading Chapter 66 in one breath. It's so good. It's so good.

It feels like a very well-integrated book with its own worldview, which is very good.

Very good, not a masterpiece

Wow, this is really nice.

Very beautiful, concise and concise

Super good looking author, cheers

Surprisingly not bad

The plot is very good, please go to the author

Very well written, cheers author

It looks good. I'd love to see more.