Yong Ye******************

The human limit is about 60~70 per minute. Since we are the author, we will calculate it as 69. One hour is 4140 words, and then we subtract the time for sleeping, eating, washing, and thinking. That means there are 23 hours and 59 minutes left, so in the remaining time, he can probably complete 99,291 words, and each chapter is calculated as 2,000 words. So he can probably complete nearly 50 chapters in one day. Look, two chapters are updated every day. What happened to the rest of the time? I used it for recreation. Update quickly.

I feel that overall it's okay, but I feel like the emotional line is a bit lacking. I don't know if the author wants to write a harem story or a single female lead story.

There is a huge gap in combat power between Zhan Shen and Yong Ye. Normally, the protagonist can kill randomly when he comes to Sichuan Mirror.

The author's writing is quite good. Since this is a single world novel, I suggest that the interaction between Ling Miaomiao and the male protagonist be polished more, as well as some interactions between other characters, so that the length can be longer.

I think it's quite interesting, but I personally think it's better not to write emotional scenes, just like ordinary friends.

It's okay, it looks good, but the main character's CP won't be Ling Miaomiao [Thinking]

It's quite good, but the author is not very suitable for writing about emotions. There's nothing wrong with anything else. And overall, you can read this book even if you haven't read the original version. Anyway, I don't have any bad points here [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

There don't need to be too many female leads, Miao Miao, Jing Yao, and Mu Yao are all good!

It's so good-looking, the original male protagonist is a little bit funny. The original character is quite restored and natural. I'm really looking forward to discovering the extraordinary fertility in the future (not drawn yet) [smile][smile][smile]

Super good-looking. Although the male protagonist feels a bit chaotic, he blends in very well. Different interpretations. The important thing is that the male protagonist feels cute. Both men and women can form a CP. I am really looking forward to the subsequent plot [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The plot is good and worth watching

This book is good to read, but there are few updates. The author, Dada, has not updated it properly, so please update more and let me see how powerful the author is.

I don't know about the others, just don't have two male protagonists

How many heroines? Hahaha I like to start a harem group [laughing] Judging from the current characters, how many more heroines can support the three heroines?

It looks pretty good so far

Not bad, good looking

Very nice, good luck to the author!

Very good, I read it in one sitting

As long as you keep writing, I will keep chasing you Author, you can't do it, it's too short

It's okay, I just feel that the hospital and the god in Jiazhan Shen are a bit weird.

Come on, author, please don't pigeonhole me. A fellow fan from the love apartment next door pigeonholed me, which makes me very uncomfortable. Your two novels are my two favorites now. If he pigeonholes you, please don't pigeonhole me.

Come on author, look forward to the follow-up plot [Like][Like][Like]

How do you sleep at such a young age? Get up quickly and update, there are not ten chapters every day, don't sleep

It's okay. I'm already looking forward to the scene where the goddess Nyx arrives and everyone is frightened when the protagonist calls her mother. I really like the scene where the saint appears in front of people [laughing]

A good book

Whenever there is a crisis, a figure in white clothes comes from a distance, and all the problems are solved for the established reason in the realm of mortal world.

Keep it up, creative ideas are great.

It's good to read books so far

Quite pretty! Come on

Keep up the good work and support you