HP: Obscure and Everlasting

I personally like it very much. The character of the heroine is pure Slytherin, proud, powerful and elegant. The little bat is also redeemed in it, and the storyline is very novel, with a series of twists and turns. The author's writing style is also very good. The heroine is not a pure good person, arrogant, but also strong and super smart. She is not a brainless heroine. The little snake knows how to seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, but in the end she is still in the camp of good people. Anyway, this book should solve many regrets in the original work. [Blowing kiss]

Very beautiful! Just like my childhood sweetheart! Great, it's finally no longer a teacher-student relationship [face covering]

The angle is novel, Nia and Sif both have families and concerns, I love it! The heroine is both lucky and unfortunate. She has teachers like Dumbledore, Grindelwald, and Flamel, a godfather like the Dark Lord, and the love of her parents. Love is the greatest magic! I want to see more stories about Nia and Sif, please don't cheat me, please he, come on, come on!

I recommend the books I wrote~ Good-looking, good-looking [blowing kiss]

How could I just see this book! ! It's so beautiful, the logic is meticulous, the writing is beautiful, some of the metaphors in the description are also very interesting, the emotional lines are also beautiful, a stubborn person and a person who doesn't understand love slowly get closer to each other, the clumsy lover ah ah ah ah, the friendship line is also! ! Little Harry grew up in love. The chapter about watching TV with Dudley at the house of his aunt who made delicious biscuits made my heart warm! I have read too many HP books. Every Harry's childhood is basically unhappy. He is like a chess piece in his destined destiny. He bears the responsibility of the so-called savior. I feel sorry for him. The boss has arranged so well for Harry. I like it! Every character in the book is so three-dimensional. How did I just see such good details! ! Boss, please update quickly. Don't be tired but don't be idle either! !

I think it's pretty good. Nia and Sif were childhood sweethearts, first family and then lovers. Lily's pure lily is one of my favorite images in the fanfics I've read. Suddenly, it's easy to understand why Sitong fell in love with her. Penny is great too.

The heroine, Sif, and Lily are all growing up. The growth and love of young people are beautiful. Even if there are quarrels, they go both ways. The heroine slowly learns love, family affection, friendship, and romance. Needless to say, the author's foreshadowing is also very good, and the writing style is also very good. This is the first time I have written such a long one. This is the best-looking one I have seen so far, and it is also a happy ending that satisfies the characters I love. Everyone, I hope they have a happy ending in the author's writing. The plot is light and happy. I hope you like it [Love] [Love] [Love]

I'm speechless. This novel is so good. The heroine's black magic is very powerful, I like this kind of strong female characters... Okay, double strength [Thoughts] This author is too active and replies to every comment (it would be nice to be more active in updates [crying]) Everyone! ! ! The author's writing style is excellent! ! ! ! (No kidding) If you can lend me this writing style...[Shy][shy][shy]

It's not even yet, so I'll give it a five-star rating to support the author. I find it difficult to write Sri Lankan fan fiction. Some books are written from childhood sweethearts, but they have always made me feel like a fanatic reading the book to save the character. Although this book was written from a young age, there is no God's perspective, the heroine is very strong (key point!), There is no so-called giving love to influence the character and then fighting Voldemort with Snape. Instead, I have been thinking about studying black magic to become stronger. I always think that although Snape longs for love, due to family reasons, he must be longing for power and longing to become stronger. Before he has experienced a series of things, he does not even understand the power of love. At this time, strength or becoming stronger is what he will always pursue. This is the feeling this book gives me so far. Although Si Jiao has had a better growth environment, his own pursuit has not changed. Although the heroine is original, it does not unfold from Snape's perspective, and it is an emotional duo. I watched the growth entirely from the perspective of the heroine, which is a rare growth line in fan fiction. The Death Eater heroine is so enjoyable to watch! I hope the author will update it soon. The plot of Lao Fu whose IQ is still online is really exciting! [Note][Note] After chasing it... Still five stars. There's nothing wrong with it, I just hope the author will update it soon [I'm about to cry]

Very nice article, I will always wait for updates. I hope the author will not be affected by the bleak traffic. I got all the sweets you sent haha. Just write according to your own ideas. A very successful idea - to our versatile authors

The plot logic is clear and the foreshadowing is also good. It's not OOC and can definitely be a book with a score of 9.5 Or above. The book has just been opened, so please don't be affected by the ratings. The author is also very nice, and he will patiently answer everyone's questions [Send heartfelt thanks]

It's been a long time since I've seen a story about the heroine being a Death Eater. I'm looking forward to a big update from the author [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

I really like it so much that I have used it three times on another account. Each character has a full personality, and the heroine's complex feelings for Voldemort are also well reflected. I really like the pull between the Sect and the heroine. It's so sweet! Finally, I hope you can update it soon and don't give up.

It's so beautiful, the author and the protagonist are very thoughtful throughout the whole process! ! ! And he is also very active! I don't have such good literary talent and I don't know what to say. Anyway, let me read it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Blowing kiss]

The writing is really nice. The reason for the low rating is because there are not many people. I can't bear to read such a good article. The rating is low, so I commented first. It's quite high quality. Among the many HPs I've read, it's one of the best.

Woo hoo hoo, celestial product! What a fairy! It's really beautiful! It's very novel. The author depicts the characters very vividly. I look forward to the author's next writing＾0＾~

Good looking, all logical thinking is online

Good, good, good, I can't say more. The book is really great.

Come on! This story is really true [shy]

The writing is very clear, and there are no dark characters in the original work. It is a very good article, but the rating is low.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The characters are full-bodied, good

Come on, it's really beautiful.

It's so beautiful. The author knows how to write well.

Super pretty, come on!

Super super super pretty.

CP Si teaches, super good-looking

Super handsome kid

Very delicate writing

Great! The author's writing is very good! ! !