Immersive Quick Travel: Bai Yueguang Rescues the Loyal Dog Male Partner

It was so beautifully written that I was moved to tears by the end of the first small world. The plot is not cliché at all, each character has clear love and hate, and has his own three-dimensional thoughts. Not a stereotypical character. The bad is reasonable, the hate is real. Every character is very good. Even Shi Meizi, who wants to be an equal wife in the first world (blame me for not remembering her full name when reading the book), is ambitious and calculating. She can assess the situation and see her position clearly. Although she is vicious, she is not stupid. I really like this approach to a villain. Although she is a villain, who says women can't be calculating and ruthless? And the emotional line is particularly reasonable and smooth. It's not superficial at all, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very reasonable, and some emotional changes are handled very naturally. They both love each other deeply. Just like the first world, they are brother and sister on the surface. But when they discover the true identity of the hero. The heroine's first thought was that the hero was being plotted and wronged. The male protagonist's first thought is that the female protagonist has been wronged and plotted against, and he only wants to hold on to the power so that his Yaoyao will no longer be randomly accused of marriage, and can no longer be easily plotted by others! In the first world, although the male protagonist's love is restrained, it is not awkward. He loves the female protagonist. When he knows that the female protagonist is more ambitious than him, he will immediately accept it with trembling. The love of the heroine is also difficult to acquire. Remember all his preferences, tell him seriously that he can be himself in front of her, and plan everything for him, otherwise he will get hurt. Their two dads are also very cute. Everything is written very well. Super detailed, super realistic and I love it. Every character takes the trouble to write out their little temperaments. The author is really great!

I only read the first story, it's a super sweet 1v1 story! The process is relatively fast, the male protagonist is in love, but it is very delicious! The heroine has a long mouth and is not a virgin. Unfortunately, it has just been published and is still being serialized. I plan to read it again after two months. Big cheers for the author!

Dear author, Da Da, this is what I read from your first book. Well, although I haven't read it for a long time, Da Da Da's writing ideas are very clear, and the chapter content and storyline are complete, and the emotional development of the male and female protagonists is very delicate. I really look forward to you continuing to write, please don't stop updating😱 Also, I would like to ask, is the author still writing his first book? Come on, it's super good-looking, highly recommended @ Kiss [][]

After reading a story, it was very interesting! The writing style is very good, the ancient prose is not modern vernacular, it is natural and not awkward to speak, and the plot is well laid out in a reasonable manner, especially the characters are well portrayed, the characters are all flesh and blood images that immediately stand in the mind, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very vivid and sweet. As someone who loves reading novels such as "Quick Travel", the themes, plots, and characters are all very good. I recommend it!

It's not bad, but... The two worlds are over, so short [face covering]

Both stories are well written. The male protagonist is purely in love, while the female protagonist falls in love step by step. The second world feels a bit open-ended in terms of personality, but the possibility of fusion is still higher, and I prefer the fusion one.

Although there are very few, it is really fine chaff. Feed it and raise it.

The female protagonist had a relationship with the male protagonist before passing through the book. The purpose of passing through the book was to collect soul fragments. The plot was changed to have a HE with the second male protagonist who loves her deeply. The writing is good. The supporting characters are also portrayed in a very three-dimensional way. The female doctor who wants to be in the position is not blindly jealous, the mistress is a professional who has strong work ability but is wary of anyone coming her way, the hero's friend who has been secretly in love with the heroine for more than ten years and even drugged the heroine to destroy him, the carefree good sister grows into a general, and the sister-controlling brother strictly guards against the hero. The only fly in the ointment is that there are only two worlds. There are too few and it is not enough to watch. The plot outside of the quick time travel has not been explained [almost crying] The relationship between the two develops step by step. The male protagonist has a deep affection for the female protagonist and has made a lot of efforts. According to the original plot setting, he likes the female protagonist and there is no other female supporting character intervening in it. The characters in the second world are interesting, and it would be more appropriate to write a long article separately. Childhood sweethearts and rivals, fighting against the road CP, the female protagonist in the previous life was raped by the crazy male protagonist after she fell into despair; after her rebirth, she discovered that the male protagonist had a dual personality, and the two personalities were competing for each other. In the first world, the heroine's best friend, General Su, confiscated both male partners. It was well received. The military heart was unclean and the emperor's reputation was unclean. He did not force the female partner to balance [Blow kiss]

Although there are only two worlds, it is really well-written [shy] Speaking of the author, I would like to ask if the heroine running with the ball in the introduction is pregnant. I have read many female papers in which the male protagonist can be pregnant, so I can avoid it in advance [shy]

Invincible. The writing is also good. The emotional lines are also written naturally. Pulls well too. He loves the male protagonist very much. The author's guarantee also reassured me because I am the female protagonist. Cool, cool, cool. It's so sweet that I feel reassured.

It's beautiful [admiration] [sending heart], but now there are too few [almost crying] [almost crying] not enough [almost crying] [sending heart] not enough [almost crying] [sending heart]

The author's writing style is very good, and the writing is very beautiful. The male protagonist is really love-minded. Although the plot of the previous life is a bit bloody, it is covered in one stroke. The author's ancient words are so touching. Five-star praise. The two planes are not enough [crying] Please make a full-length novel.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Super beautiful, absolutely stunning

The first story is very interesting. I really like this kind of cookie. It makes my aunt smile all over her face.

There is female competition, and there are some routines, so-so

Although it's only the first one, it's really interesting. Keep it up.

It's beautiful, thank you to the author! !

It's good-looking and worth checking out!

Good-looking [Admiration] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] Chinese people do not lie to Chinese people

It's great~ I've only watched the first world now, I'll come back when the second world is finished~

Looks good, I like this immersive quick travel

Came early, only the first plane, nice 1v1 sweet article

I'm going to read the other one that's finished first. This one will be raised first. The writing is really good. I've never seen a style of writing that I've never seen before. It's beautiful. I love reading it. I'll write more [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses]

It looks good, but it's a pity that the second plane setting is a rival setting that I have no interest in or even dislike. Please update it quickly or I won't be able to watch it anymore.

The author loves you so much, you write so well! Come on, baby!

The plots are intertwined and quite exciting. The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are very sweet. The writing style of the whole novel is pretty good and antique.

So pretty! ! ! The author writes well! ! ! Love to look good

Very beautiful, highly recommended

I really like the characters and plot of the male and female protagonists