I Became the Male Lead’s Average Joe in an Otome Game

A very good book, one of the best in Tomato. The description of the emotional drama is good enough, and the interaction between the characters is well written. Helia is like this, and the heroine is like this too. The turning point is not abrupt. But there are also some poisonous points. The description of the male protagonist is not clear enough. He is like a reed in the water. It changes with the direction of the story. It is not growth-oriented, but just for the sake of setting. But after looking at it, it can be considered to be top quality. Finally, if the characteristics and personality of the male protagonist no longer change with the plot, and are as vivid and vivid as the female protagonist, and are not greatly separated from the plot, this book will definitely be better Disadvantages: The image of the male protagonist is not clear. After watching the whole story, I will only feel that this character is very strange, and the daily life is not connected with the interaction between men and women. Advantages: The date with Tsundere was well written, and the emotional scenes were really great. Very good painting, makes my brain spin🧠 Great book, to the author. You must persevere. I am usually very picky about books that are very interesting. You write really well.

No one? I just finished reading it all, and it is indeed very interesting. The characters have distinct personalities, the plot is advancing, and the male protagonist has a good personality. I am also curious about how the author writes the first love line. After all, with the current progress, there is no trend for anyone to become the first couple.

The subject matter is quite good٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ. At least I feel it suits my taste. I am just curious whether it will have multiple heroines or a single heroine 🤔🤔🤔 At least I have conquered half of the female protagonists so far, but I don't know if I will conquer the others.

That is to say, is there a possibility that his memory was tampered with when he first traveled through time? Wen Qi's face is actually the same as Helia's, and because Leir is the heroine of this game, Wen Qi's face matches Leer. The system has been watching Chengye's entangled look, but it just didn't tell Chengye because it wanted to see a joke.

After reading a little bit, it's not like the heroines in it are fragments of heroines in the real world, right? So I like the male protagonist and so on (just watching it reminded me of a series)

The writing is very good 😘, maybe because it is a story that mainly focuses on plot and emotional lines. There are a few flaws in the description of fighting (the action description is rough), but it does not affect the writing. Good work, author! 💕💕

I feel it is a novel that fits the genre I like. It is sweet to read, [top post]

It's well written. Come on, come on. [Sending my heart] I hope I can finish it. How many thousand words does the author plan to write?

As you can probably guess, normally this is done by the "female protagonist". She wants the male protagonist to have her own life and love, but she also wants the male protagonist to fall in love with her. However, there are some doubts about the cause of death of the heroine. I hope there will be surprises.

My favorite, baby, you must keep writing 💕