Does the Heroine of the Game Target Include Me, a Passerby?

A very good book, one of the best in Tomato. The description of the emotional drama is good enough, and the interaction between the characters is well written. Helia is like this, and the heroine is like this too. The turning point is not abrupt. But there are also some poisonous points. The description of the male protagonist is not clear enough. He is like a reed in the water. It changes with the direction of the story. It is not growth-oriented, but just for the sake of setting. But after looking at it, it can be considered to be top quality. Finally, if the characteristics and personality of the male protagonist no longer change with the plot, and are as vivid and vivid as the female protagonist, and are not greatly separated from the plot, this book will definitely be better Disadvantages: The image of the male protagonist is not clear. After watching the whole story, I will only feel that this character is very strange, and the daily life is not connected with the interaction between men and women. Advantages: The date with Tsundere was well written, and the emotional scenes were really great. Very good painting, makes my brain spin🧠 Great book, to the author. You must persevere. I am usually very picky about books that are very interesting. You write really well.

No one? I just finished reading it all, and it is indeed very interesting. The characters have distinct personalities, the plot is advancing, and the male protagonist has a good personality. I am also curious about how the author writes the first love line. After all, with the current progress, there is no trend for anyone to become the first couple.

That is to say, is there a possibility that his memory was tampered with when he first traveled through time? Wen Qi's face is actually the same as Helia's, and because Leir is the heroine of this game, Wen Qi's face matches Leer. The system has been watching Chengye's entangled look, but it just didn't tell Chengye because it wanted to see a joke.

The writing is very good [Blowing Kiss], maybe because it is a story that mainly focuses on plot and emotional lines. There are a few flaws in the description of fighting (the action description is rough), but it does not affect the writing. Good work, author! [Send heart][Send heart]

The subject matter is quite good٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ. At least I feel it suits my taste. I am just curious whether it will have multiple heroines or a single heroine [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] At least I have conquered half of the female protagonists so far, but I don't know if I will conquer the others.

After reading a little bit, it's not like the heroines in it are fragments of heroines in the real world, right? So I like the male protagonist and so on (just watching it reminded me of a series)

As you can probably guess, normally this is done by the "female protagonist". She wants the male protagonist to have her own life and love, but she also wants the male protagonist to fall in love with her. However, there are some doubts about the cause of death of the heroine. I hope there will be surprises.

I feel it is a novel that fits the genre I like. It is sweet to read, [top post]

It's well written. Come on, come on. [Sending my heart] I hope I can finish it. How many thousand words does the author plan to write?

It looks good and will definitely be popular [send heart]

Rael wasn't forced to be innocent by that person, was she? Lao Cheng must kill that person👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Come on, it's pretty good so far. Some minor flaws can be ignored. I hope to keep it up.

The updated stuff looks pretty good as it stands now, and I look forward to the next development of the plot.

It's very good-looking, especially the male protagonist who feels particularly handsome.

Good luck to the author, your writing is very good. Due to some reasons, I can only touch my phone once a week. I will always support you.

My favorite, baby, you must keep writing [send heart]

Looks good, please support me

Good writing, keep it up

It feels okay, go for it.

A breath of fresh air, super pretty

Good looking, makes my Binzhou spin

I think it looks pretty [laughs]

The book is a good book, but it's a pity that it's not spoken to me

Kuoyi, the writing style is a bit poor, but it is slowly getting better, you can take a look

It makes me feel uncomfortable, angry and understanding at the same time The hero's character is very complex and real The author must not be Be˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

It's so beautiful, it suits my mood very well

The characters are delicately drawn and the plot is compact. For me, it's worth 5⭐

It's beautiful, I'm looking forward to the future development, and it's four days a week

Well written, keep up the good work

It depends on the author's perseverance