One Piece: Fusion Morax Template Adds Straw Hat

It's pretty good. As long as you keep watching, it's just an ordinary person named Zhongli who stirs up troubles as the King of Rock in the world of One Piece, and may even have something to do with Luffy's domination of the world.

Until the Alabasta chapter, I felt that the whole book was just a novel with a water plot, a water time, and a water word count. After the Alabasta chapter, it changed a bit and added some original plots. Especially the changes in the plot after the Sky Island chapter made me look forward to the follow-up development. The pace of the whole book is relatively fast, unlike some slow-paced adventures with dozens of chapters. It is straightforward and comfortable to read, but it lacks some details that readers originally expected and the small stories are omitted, which is a pity. If the pace of the whole book is still acceptable, I estimate that it will be completed in about four to five hundred chapters at most. However, I am blindly guessing that there may be changes because of the top chapter. I hope the author can grasp it well. I really don't want to see a bad ending. If it follows the original plot, I would rather have a separate original story. I look forward to it. There's also the emotional line. It's quite comfortable to watch now. Personally, I feel like it just needs to progress a little bit along with the plot timeline. Adventure stories are still mainly about adventure, right? [Read carefully] Finally, I hope that the protagonist panel can be unlocked a little faster. In fact, I still want to see the person behind the scenes solve some obstacles (like Lord Shadow) [shy] The author's writing is pretty good, and it's worth reading if it's not too bad [I learned it] [I learned it]

As a time traveler, I feel that it is only reasonable to be a little more cautious in the early stage. How can I compete with the top powerhouses in the later stage? Zhongli's template? Stability is a very distinctive feature. The author can learn from it.

Single heroine or harem? It's a pity, I quite enjoyed watching it

It seems really comfortable so far, and the main character's abilities are neither cheating nor obtrusive, unlike some other Pirates fics I've read, where the main character's abilities are extremely abrupt, and he writes weird things from time to time, which is weird as hell.

Well, the writing is pretty good and the early progress is progressing. Which specific article do you plan to write? The rest of the emotional scenes are pretty good. Although there aren't some emotional scenes where you get along alone, the daily life will add a little more emotion. In other aspects, I think the only shortcoming is that it's too easy to tell the plot. It's not about telling the story, but it's too familiar with the plot. The protagonist answers all the questions asked by the group, and the reasons are very lame, so I suggest reducing them.

The character design is okay, the original character design is also very good, but the author is short [note]

It's good to read. Please support the new book.

Evil little pirate, I will kill you with my own hands right now

I'm new to writing. I can barely read it if I'm in a book shortage.

Not bad, worth recommending, but not enough to watch [Learned]

A different Saitama

Well written, not bad

It's pretty good. It's my cup of tea.

Please continue writing

Still pretty

Good, good, good, good

The writing is good, but a little short.

Not bad, good-looking, I finished reading it in one day