Harry Potter: How Not to Become Cannon Fodder

I have read too many HP fanfics, and this is one of the few that makes me willing to give a five-star review. The characters are real and there is no OOC, and few fan authors can achieve this alone. The emotional descriptions are also smooth and real. I like the setting of the heroine very much. The heroine is undoubtedly sober and understands that the characters in the novel are not equal to reality. So at first, she did not think that she would fall in love with a character after time travel because she likes him. However, she unconsciously fell in love with her during the interactions. This is great isn't it? Professor Snape, who I also like very much, finally has a love that truly belongs to him, and is not just based on fantasy and self-motivation, and fans' unreasonable thoughts about idols. I implore the author to continue writing, for the sake of Sri Lanka, whom we all like, and the heroine, who is calm and self-possessed and does not fall in love. [Love][Send Heart][Like]

This is one of the few HP books that I have read on Tomato that has a smooth plot and not broken characters. There is also some British cold humor between the lines. I couldn't help but laugh while reading. Some of the small plot settings reveal the author's ingenuity and care. The writing style has some of the original style and combined with personal characteristics. Although it only has a few hundred thousand words now, it is really good. I hope the author will continue to persevere. More and more people will read this novel and like the [love] [love] [love] taught by Sri Lanka.

I read the latest chapter in one go. It's very interesting. Su Li is very smart, has clear goals, works hard and is talented. I feel inexplicably reassured when I see her studying hard. Hahaha. Suri described the feeling of the professor's little deer running around very well, especially the scene where she ran back near the curfew and the professor followed her. It was very graphic. In many cases, the relationship between Suri and the professor was not a romantic plot, it was just daily life, but she could still feel a sense of romance. I am also deeply attracted every time I describe the professor's eyes. It is not a particularly exaggerated praise from Jack Su, but I feel that his eyes have a special charm. In fact, when I read many fans' descriptions of the professor's appearance and voice, they felt they were too exaggerated, but I don't feel that way in this book so far. Madam, you write really well! It's really delicious rice. . .

Absolutely amazing! I haven't seen such a good Snape fanfic in a long time! It was okay at first, but then the writing became more and more vivid. The professor's little mouth is as if it's been quenched with poison, it's so perfect. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! If you don't chase me, heroine, I will snatch her away! ! ! ! ! Professor! ! ! ! ! ! !

One of the happiest things about staying up late at night to read novels is that the articles I read are satisfying, but I am still a little unsatisfied because there are too few articles, which is not enough, but fortunately it leaves me some time to sleep. Fanfiction is my generation's fantasy carnival. I didn't have high expectations because I have read a lot of Snape fanfics. But after reading Qianfan, I found that this kind of literature that expresses emotions in a subtle and confusing way, is logical, and does not deviate from the character's own personality, is amazing. The words written in large letters are too delicate. A rough person like me feels so excited after chewing the fine chaff. Many scenes and characters are portrayed with superb writing skills that make them very dreamlike (I don't know how to describe them). Just imagining those scenes makes me blush, my heart beats, and my nose bleeds (seriously). I love it so much. I hope fans all over the world can read it. DaDa must finish it. How can I write a book with such good writing? I'm so disappointed. All in all, I can read this beautiful article all over the world! ! !

Very interesting article! The heroine is in the same class as Percy Wood, and is very strong. She can also spell spells as a senior in her first or second year, and can also create her own spells. She likes to use Dumbledore, a great wizard, as a reference. She always feels that she is weak, but she knows that she is very strong at the same age. In terms of love, although the heroine traveled through time, she did not have a special filter for SS at the beginning. She either liked love or the characters in the book. However, with SS guiding her, she gradually fell in love with her, and then began to have a crush on her. However, the heroine knew that SS had someone he liked, so she never exceeded the rules. However, at this time, SS also indulged the heroine, and even allowed her to clean his office without permission and stay in the office often. The author secretly teased her, haha! But! Tie Ping didn't even write about the content of the recycling copy, and Harry Potter hadn't even entered school yet! Such a short pit, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

It's pretty good. What's rare is that the heroine is emotionally stable, independent and strong but not in the limelight. Snape's character is not broken either. He doesn't like the fussy or coquettish heroine, and he can't stand the Snape who falls in love whenever he sees the heroine.

Oioioioioi! ! ! ! ! Nice! It's well written. I read fifty chapters in one go. It's so good that I'll read and write more. Thank you [Adoration] [Admiration]

The author's writing style is very good. Reading the whole article is as smooth and comfortable as a famous prose poem, and the emotions contained are as smooth, sweet and mellow as chocolate. Fortunately, I no longer judge the article with low scores, alas! Who is giving low marks to HP fan's good writing? What a sin!

Mature but cute enough Suri. Cpss I am confused and have enough self-restraint. I haven't seen any deeper emotional development yet, but I can still feel that this is definitely an article worth reading and collecting.