After Being Reborn, I Just Want to Run Away

It is a very traditional book about cultivating immortals. The pace is very slow. Basically, if you read it carefully, it will be uncomfortable (most people like fast-paced books). If you are not in a hurry and are short of books, I highly recommend reading this book. The writing style is quite satisfactory and there are almost no poisonous points. It is not a refreshing book (but it is thoughtful) Some parts of the plot felt draggy and unnecessary.) I personally watched it half-intelligently and half-unconsciously, and I felt like I was left with a sense of unfulfilled interest. Overall, it was pretty good. For me, I could rate it a little over 8, but with Tomato's current fast-food model, there's a high probability that it can only be a 6-7. At about 5 minutes, the protagonist is not a virgin. She will help others but will not do anything that is dangerous to her own life. However, the emotional description is a bit worrying. The main heroine of this book (the heroine in the introduction) does not appear until around the 110th chapter. The plot is quite rich, but it is not basically one glance or ten lines. It's hard for anyone to have the patience to read on. I only saw a few parts carefully, and most of them were just a glance. All in all, this book is highly recommended for people who are short of readers. It's already very good for new authors. I hope the author can stick to it and don't end it. Finally, good luck to the author!

The first volume is a traditional fantasy with not many emotional lines. The second volume is the official beginning of the story, and the emotional scenes are well written. But you, the author, came to the realization a bit late. The heroine didn't appear until about a hundred chapters in. Very few people can make it to the end of your first volume. In my opinion, this book basically broke away from the shackles of traditional immortality after the first volume, and began to use relatively independent but interconnected long stories to complete the world view, telling the protagonist's growth and the love-hate entanglements with many confidants. It's like a combination of traditional immortality and light novels, but the core is the protagonist's growth, redemption and escape. But the protagonist is by no means the Virgin. Sometimes she is very decisive and has her own judgment on many things. The story is very exciting, but unfortunately it is a bit delayed in many places, which is not suitable for the fast pace of Tomato. However, if you can read it, this book is undoubtedly a superior book. And the protagonist finally managed to run away after the end of the second volume, and he hit the topic perfectly, which is gratifying! 💐💐💐💐💐 In addition, none of the women in the author's works are good-natured. They are all as beautiful as flowers but cruel and ruthless. I wonder if the author has been emotionally hurt in any way before he writes such desperate words. As for the real heroine, I don't think the author even thought about it! Now it seems that except for Li Xiaoyi, others seem to have little chance. Although Shang Xueyi was the protagonist Bai Yueguang in his previous life, he was more afraid and wary of her. The sisters Bai Lu and Guan Bi seemed almost interested. Li Linghui relies on external objects again, I don't think she will enter the finals Qiqi, Qingyun, Ye Zhi and the like are pure losers. Others are even more curbside. In short, just don't end up with a single female protagonist. Finally, I hope the author can persevere! Using love to generate electricity can lead to a million words written, and the author really loves it. The following is an excerpt from the author's original words at the end of Volume 2, which I think are quite appropriate: (To be honest, I never thought I would write a novel with more than a million words, even when the plot of the novel was just in the middle. But I didn't expect this volume to be so long, with more than 400 chapters. This is because the author has no experience in writing long novels, and always wants to fill in many details, and sometimes wants to mention the number of words. In fact, many places can be mentioned in one stroke. And at the beginning, the author didn't think about what kind of story he wanted to write. He originally wanted to write a traditional story about cultivating immortals, upgrading, fighting monsters, and traversing the world. Because he grew up reading such stories, he longed to write one himself. But later I found that I didn't seem to be very good at it, and because everyone came here just for the introduction, I changed my style midway. In fact, you can find that after entering the Sifang Sword Alliance, I rarely write about the protagonist's battles. I pay more attention to the strategy of the story and the interaction and emotional entanglement between the protagonist and the many confidants around him. But since the title and introduction have already set the tone of the story, the protagonist must run away, but he also wants to help the people around him survive the disaster, and it is impossible for me to change it from the beginning. Therefore, sometimes it seems that the protagonist is very hypocritical and upright at the same time. But it's all over for now. Anyway, Gao Shen got the freedom he had been waiting for for a long time today. But there is no real freedom in the world. No matter how deep he hides, his confidante will find him one by one and have entanglements with him again. (Otherwise what would I write) And our prisoner will also find a second goal that he must accomplish at all costs in his new life and adventure. I will also try to speed up the pace and not write so protractedly. )

The traditional and decent development flow is quite good, there are no disgusting operations, it is just a bit slow to warm up. The more I wrote, the more nervous I became, so I gave up.

There is not much to say. This is a slow-burning novel. However, it also has a fatal flaw. Few people can read it patiently. It is best to name the characters to make it more impressive.

It's very traditional, but it's not very popular in this fast food era. I hope it can be updated all the time 😘

It's a good video, but the transition is too long

Not many people read traditional fantasy novels these days. I hope you stick to it.

A rare masterpiece, whether it is the direction of the plot or the shaping of the characters, the author's writing style is very delicate 👍 Haokang, after writing for so long, the characters of the plot have not collapsed, and the writing style is still delicate, turning and turning again and again 👍 [Blow kiss]

There's nothing wrong with it. Judging from the tomatoes, it's still a fairly edible novel.

As long as you write for as long as you want, I will accompany you to read it to the end.