Stealing Pens: Those Years of Growing up with Zhang Qiling

It can be seen that he is a real senior rice, and the timeline and important characters and events are carefully grasped. It can also be seen that the author really feels sorry for the little brother. On the premise of ensuring the original plot, he did not add his own plot randomly, but respected the original plot and retained the original taste. The author transforms into a heroine, advancing and retreating with the little brother, sharing adversity and even walking in front of the little brother step by step to help him overcome obstacles. There were a few moments where I burst into tears. First, the author chose to travel back in time to childhood to protect the little brother who grew up together. They were trained together in the Zhang family, worked as blood slaves, worked as coolies, and endured all the dirty and tiring work together. They worked hard to slowly spread warmth into the heart of the young brother like a trickle. The second is that the author is not completely in love, but chooses to take the lead. Taking advantage of having read the original work and the time when my brother entered the Bronze Gate, I pre-purchased real estate in all the places where my brother would live in the future. He also built a reputation as a tomb robber and built up a rich family fortune. Because everyone in Daomi knows that my brother is very poor, so poor that he works as meat bait, and he is so poor that he works for Chen Pi Asi. But now I see that the emotional line of the entire chapter is a long and smooth process, from the heroine's first show of kindness as a child to the heroine's lingering care and concern for her little brother, from food, clothing, housing and transportation to psychological changes. Slowly let the little brother get used to the companionship and presence of the heroine. Finally, he used Baima as an opportunity to completely materialize his feelings for the heroine. Step by step, it feels like that's how it should be. Even if the heroine and the little brother start to take care of their old age directly and skip the worldly world, they will be very happy. Third, the author is really rare and chose to respect the original work. Many endings, stories. The author didn't change it, so there is no golden finger. It's not like other time travel stories, the invincible kind. But even if you know everything, there is still unspeakable and unchangeable suffering. After reading the whole article, I not only saw the growth of the little brother, but also understood the psychology of the heroine and the author. Yes, I just wish him safety and success, so the novel is named after Ling'an, and the heroine's name is also Zhang Ling'an. I want to say, please, the author, please don't use the knife. I have cried countless times after seeing this. I really understand that kind of wish, as long as the resurrection is safe and smooth, even if you don't have a smile, it's okay.

After reading Chapter 46, I declared that this is the best fanfic I have ever read. The heroine is also very strong. She prepares carefully before each departure, and the plot is automatically corrected. Sometimes she feels powerless, but things depend on human factors, and she will still make efforts, even if there is only a slight possibility of change. After God's Endowment, the little brother keeps searching for memories. This plot is actually not uncommon in fan fiction. It's still very sad every time I read it. Fortunately, the little brother has never forgotten the heroine. The heroine will record everything the two have experienced in detail, which is something other books don't have. The heroine has bought a house wherever her brother may appear. It is a home that belongs to the two of them alone. Even if the world changes on the road, there will always be a stable place to stay. I really, really, really like the description of the two people's free time, I find it very warm. The little brother shouldn't be burdened with too much. He can also sit in the rocking chair with his loved ones and have sweet dreams in the warm sun. After sunset, the two of them enjoy a peaceful dinner together. When the chestnut trees in the yard are in harvest season, they stew a pot of chestnut roast chicken. You know, the little brother loves chicken~

It feels very good. The Iron Triangle should be like this in the ordinary world, and the younger brother should be such a flesh-and-blood person. I don't understand why some people say that the heroine is dispensable. I feel very healed. The heroine can be seen that she is indeed a loyal rice. Although she knows the plot, she also tries to improve herself to keep up with the younger brother. And the younger brother's heartbeat is really complete. I was originally coughing up the bottle evil, but after watching it, it didn't make me feel bad. On the contrary, it made me realize that the brotherhood in the original book is a life-and-death friendship (many people may not agree with this sentence), which is really beautiful.

Zhang Qiling, who has a lover, is actually not so in line with Daomi's idea of ​​a human god. But isn't this kind of ordinary what they want? The heroine is a companion and guide lover. She has put aside a lot of the loneliness and confusion of the younger brother. She is tough and gentle. She can be said to be my favorite type of protagonist. There is no golden finger, only her love and devotion to Zhang Qiling, and the mutual support along the way truly express her dedication to her little brother. I don't think the brother is so alienated and cold, and I don't think it's OOC. There will be certain changes in the offline version due to different circumstances. The brother is Zhang Qiling, but he is not the same Zhang Qiling. If you have to say something different, then there is no real Zhang Qiling in fan creations. Only Zhang Qiling can be Zhang Qiling in the works written by Uncle Keng. But I feel that a person is not destined to endure that kind of suffering. The greatest benefit of doujin is that it gives everyone who wants his happiness a utopia, an utopia... Everyday life in Yucun is so warm, and everyone gets the best ending. The author's timeline is very strict, at least from my perspective, there is nothing wrong with it, but there are actually some holes that have not been filled in, but they are not important. After all, I guess I haven't even decided what the final things are about~ I originally planned to write a little bit, but I didn't expect that when I was still writing the outline, I came across this fanfic that had just been completed. The setting and ending in it are actually somewhat similar to my ideas. What a blessing! No more cutting off your legs! At least I don't have to write frantically in a hurry! PS: I originally wrote a large part, but when I spat out mouthwash, I rubbed my palm against my phone and deleted them all/I cried so hard [crying]

I personally think it looks great. Unlike other fanfics where the heartbeat starts shortly after the game starts and the heartbeat process is not detailed, this one is very interesting and the heartbeat process is very detailed.

Ahhhhh, the transition is supernatural, there is no sign of being close to each other, the heroine and the little brother share the joys and sorrows, and the hardships that the little brother has experienced she almost lost. I was very emotional when I saw the end [Admiration] [Crying]

I don't know why this novel has such a low rating, but the content is really good. There are both the original plot and the author's plot changes. Some of the author's changes are not abrupt, but make the plot of the whole novel develop more smoothly, and the little brother finally has someone to accompany him, not just to redeem him (little brother) (but to fight side by side with him in the responsibilities that the little brother must bear), and has been accompanying him from the beginning to now, he ( After all, the little brother) did not say "I am a person without a past. If I disappear from this world, no one will remember" (in the ultimate notes, Wu Xie answered "I will remember"). However, in the little brother's past life, he was lonely, so Zhang Lingan is a more important existence than Wu Xie in this novel, and is unique and irreplaceable! I hope more readers can discover this treasure novel! ! !

Wow, it's really good-looking. I don't think the characters are OOC. They are just like my little brother's personality and feelings. The heroine is also very good. The key is that the author's writing style is not exaggerated, it's a pity. The plot is not procrastinating, the writing style is fresh and natural, and the chapter about the wedding of the young brother and the heroine is simply heartwarming. Big cheers for the author!

This is the best novel of this type that I have read so far! I don't know why the evaluation is so low. The heroine has no golden fingers. She relies on herself and is always by her side. Some people say that the character of the little brother here has collapsed. But if the character of the little brother has not collapsed, what is the meaning of the author writing this book? Isn't it to make the little brother feel loved and loved? Moreover, in the early stage of this book, the boy behaved very coldly towards the heroine. After many chapters, the boy slowly showed his concern for the heroine. Anyway, this novel is very interesting👍🏻

It is the best-written book I have ever read so far. It is very interesting and has a very happy ending. It is worth reading for friends who like Tomb Raider Notes to realize their dreams! Very emotional, everything has a good ending. I just want to say whether the author did it on purpose. In the last three chapters, after Ning'an traveled back through time (dream), I met not the brother I grew up with, but the brother who has experienced a lot. I suddenly wanted to see it written from this aspect. It is another story, which should be quite interesting. I really want to read it, Chun Chun was seduced! I hope Dada will write another book about tomb robbing notes. It doesn't matter if I don't write it. I'm still looking forward to the author's next book [Blowing Kisses]

The author's writing is really good. The heroine grew up with her little brother, and the two have a long-lasting relationship from partners to lovers to husband and wife. The retirement life in the back is also very warm. The world is so big and there is always a light to illuminate the way home. (I wanted to give it a five-star rating, but I heard that if the rating is too high, it will be blocked [crying], but in my heart, this book deserves five stars)

The author is really hardworking! Two chapters are updated every day, and both have 3,000 words. I also want to read more about Brother and Ling'an's sweets! !

It's really super good-looking. I don't think it's OOC. Zhang Lingan is like a beam of light that shines into my life. Because of Zhang Lingan's appearance, I'm not as lonely as in the original text. Although I still don't talk sometimes, I also have a bit of humanity. Moreover, Zhang Lingan and my brother's CP is also very good. Both of them are doing their best to protect each other.

It's a good-looking story, with two plain love stories, and the heroine's character is also good. It's not that the male and female protagonists in some people's novels don't have to endure hardships. It's a bit regretful that whether it's a younger brother or an extra helper, Wu Xie's bodyguard remains the same. It's hard to find a bodyguard story that is not a pure bodyguard story. You can't do the opposite without being Wu Xie's bodyguard. Seeing that there are no changes in the plot later, I still live in seclusion with Wu Xie and the others. Why can't I write that I have nothing to do with Wu Xie after reading a lot of the novels? It's another story that hasn't changed much. The plot is the same as in the first half of the story, where the boy and the heroine get to know each other. But in the end, the plot is still the same old routine.

It's really a very nice stolen fanfic. Zhang Qiling has been accompanied by Ling'an, and they have grown up together, and they have made up for many regrets. It's really very nice, and the two of them have a sweet daily relationship. It's very well written, you can come and read it [Sending Hearts]

I like this book very much. The heroine has no golden finger, only the memory of knowing the plot. She has gone through a lot of hardships to become a partner who can stand by the little brother, and has always protected the little brother. She has given the little brother a childhood that is difficult but accompanied by someone. When he grows up, the heroine will accompany him every step of the way and every key plot. Even if he loses his memory, he can be brought back by the heroine. The rest of the retirement life is dull and happy, which is the best ending I can think of for everyone. Thanks to the author for his warm writing style, I can get a glimpse of everyone's happy ending. It's really great! I hope that my little brother, Ling'an, and everyone in the parallel world can continue to live happily [Love]

It's okay, the heroine really cares for the little brother. But the story is dull, there is very little tomb robbing content in the front, some of it is just passing by, and it is not deep enough to reflect those emotions. The second half of the book is about daily life. CP was specially arranged for the Iron Triangle.

This book is very nice, and the author's writing style is also good. In this book, you can see little brothers with different personalities (the author just dotes on the little brother to heaven) [Learned][Learned][Learned]

So sweet! ! ! This is the third best-looking fanfic I've read [Love][Love][Love][Love]

It can really be seen that the author is a senior rice [blowing kiss]. Zhang Lingan stayed with Xiaoguan and allowed him to slowly enter the world. He had true feelings, was very warm, and fulfilled my obsession.

Good-looking, childhood sweethearts, childhood sweethearts, group portrait, everyone has a good ending

I like this book very much. Ling'an gave Zhang Qiling a home and made up for the childhood regrets of many brothers. It made him lively. I like this book very much. Many people also have good endings. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

She's pretty, sweet, the heroine is super powerful, she fights alongside the younger brother, and she's also the richest in the family [laughing]

Like, my brother also has someone who makes him feel happy, so that his life is no longer lonely, and he also has a motivation that can keep him alive.

Super beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Highly recommended [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] It can be seen that the author was very serious when reading the original work [Blowing a kiss] [Flowing a kiss] [Blowing a kiss], and the writing style was very delicate when writing about life in Yucun

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhingingingofing! ! ! The early stage is very exciting, but the later stage is super warm and super happy when the dust has settled! ! ! The author is so awesome, I love it so much [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

Yes, compared to many fanfics with Zhang Qiling as the CP, this one is pretty good. The logic is smooth and the emotional line is reasonable. I would like to give you a good review and encourage the author. Come on💪

The story of "Slow Water" is completely developed according to the original story. The characters of the little brother and everyone are very consistent with the characters. A reserved but affectionate little brother in my heart. The anecdotal story also has some emotional context. Everything seems to be just right. I like it [laughing][laughing]

Personally, I think it's very interesting, and it's my favorite type. The plot is overly reasonable, and the couple of CPs in the article are what I wish for. It makes up for a lot of regrets in the notes, and the ending reflects the beauty and contentment of life.

After reading it, overall it followed the original work and it was quite good. The heroine has done a lot in the dark, the pattern is there, and the ending is not bad👍 The most important thing is that the straight men in the original work have found partners, which is good.