Back to Tiger Mom! I Became the Guardian of the Endless Mountains

I've read part of it. Let's not talk about the punctuation issues. At least I know what it means. Let's talk about the other male protagonist. The score is not high. Logically speaking, whether it is a cp or a heartthrob, I found that most of them are about 9 points. It just feels like your emotional line in the early stage is a bit stiff, and it feels so awkward that it doesn't feel like a CP. The lack of it is probably a problem with the creation of the male protagonist in the early stage. It's a bit common to portray the male protagonist as confident and quite childish, but I also noticed that you said that he is a growth-oriented male protagonist, so that's fine and true, he is only 19 years old after all. From the article, we can actually see that the male protagonist is also capable, but because the male protagonist is more powerful, I feel that he is a bit unworthy. I can understand this, and love can make up for it. But this. Is the brain circuit normal? Let's not talk about whether they are together or not. Just ask him what else his position is, and just say that the male lead is his. Ah? My eyes have been opened, but for now, I can still see. Let me take a look again. I want to see what it grows into in the end. It's not easy to create, but it's easy to get started with four stars. I will change it later if I feel good about it.

The writing is okay. It should have been typed by hand or not checked after writing. There are some problems with punctuation, which affects reading a bit, but the overall problem is not big. There are two male protagonists. The attack type is growth type. According to the later stage of the plot, it should become stronger, but the force value should be stronger. After all, the introduction mentioned at the beginning that the force value of the attack is off the charts, so those who can't accept it should not just look for presence. Disgusting people [smile] There are so many books on Tomato, there is no need to hold on to a book. The author can write whatever he wants, as long as the logic is ok Generally speaking, novels have an outline. If you directly say in the comment area that you can't accept the attack, you won't listen to the author's explanation, and the screen will be blocked. Have you ever considered the workload of forcibly changing the outline, and the issue of whether it will collapse after changing the outline? The requirements for free novels are so high, why not switch to paid software? Did you give a large gift? There are so many demands and you still have to swipe the screen? Dear author, come on, it's very good now. It would be even better if you could add n chapters a day [laughing]

It's very nice to watch. I like the interaction between Xiaobai and the animals. I like Hubao very much! Feng Ye fell in love with Xiao Bai at first sight, and Xiao Bai fell in love with him while getting along, which is worth watching. Animals are little angels! ! !

Although I have been mentally prepared for a long time But after watching it for so long, Hua Bao and Xiao Bai were the ones who supported me to continue watching. When I looked through the catalog and saw "Together", I really cried to death I finally understand how it feels to be a fan in the entertainment industry Alas The two male protagonists really have no sense of CP. This meal is a bit reluctant... If you don't say anything, I'm going to smoke a cigarette (trembling) To be honest, it might be more popular if you don't take CP and take the all-round mountain climbing route... Well... Forget it Author: As long as the baby is happy (Squat) (Draw circles) Oh my god, I want to cry

Overall it's pretty good, but the author doesn't seem to be good at writing emotional dramas. It's a little weird when the two of them are together, but everything else is fine.

Does the male protagonist have to close his career? ? The anchors are all excited. I think it matches well. I hope it will be updated soon. The male lead will not change. I also hope there will be no other male supporting characters and more interactions with small animals.

Super pretty! The first time I saw it was a story about two male protagonists, oh! Love it even more! !

I just want to say a few words for Feng Ye! He is not as bad as the comment section says! Those who go around saying that he is not good enough for Xiaobai are really outrageous! Childish first! Xiaobai is 22 years old. His sister is younger than Xiaobai. He must be around 20. He is not naive at his age. Does he have to be as mature as the boss who has gone through thousands of sails? His family atmosphere is very happy. He did not have a miserable childhood, a troubled father, a cowardly mother, and a young sister. Is it a problem for a child who grew up in a happy family to be childish? We usually call this kind of sunny and cheerful little puppy! Secondly, Pu Xin! Being ordinary and confident is called Pu Xin! Feng Ye's grandfather stands so tall, how can he be called ordinary? Isn't he confident that a grandson raised by such a powerful family has low self-esteem? What is his identity? His family lives in a compound and has security guards! As long as he doesn't play e-sports, it would be difficult for ordinary people to meet him, right? He can't be confident like this? Finally narcissistic! Xiaobai is handsome and has a powerful family. He can be said to be a member of the princelings. He is neither arrogant or domineering nor bullying others. He has also achieved his own achievements in e-sports. Can't he be narcissistic under such conditions? What Feng Ye said in the live broadcast room did sound like Meng Nan, but we can't deny everything about him! The content of this book is great, but the emotional lines are not handled smoothly enough, so the interaction between the two male protagonists is a bit inconsistent. This is a slight shortcoming of this book! Xiaobai's design is perfect, I like it very much, he is cool and sassy, ​​I feel that Xiaobai is too perfect and impeccable, that's why Fengye's character design seems not so good!

Nice! ! ! If I only wrote about Baiwu alone, it would be a cool article😗😗😗

Very, very, very beautiful. The author should update soon. This book is about the life of the protagonist and various animals. He met many big guys, and then the protagonist got interested and chased our little mist. There are a series of stories to come, which I highly recommend.

The plot is particularly exciting! This article uses Yongshenghua's This Is You to unfold the clues of the book and drive the plot line of the whole book. The protagonist Shou has a very good relationship with the system. When I saw Bai Huahua use his system core to save Bai Wu, I felt very sad. Bai Huahua really has a good relationship with his host, but fortunately, Bai Huahua was resurrected at the end. Every pair of the emotional line is very good, opening up the entire world view. What is particularly impressive is the return of those protections from the British Museum. This is what we hope to see! It's very patriotic! And the main characters are particularly good to their pets! The main character's attack is pretty good too! I am here to wish them happiness every day and forever!

Come on, I've been reading this type of two-male novel before, but I couldn't find [send my heart][send my heart]

I skipped to the end to read the ending, and it reminded me of the novel I read on Tomato. It also has two male protagonists and a system. The whole novel has a sweet ending, but when it comes to the extra chapter, the timeline has reached the interstellar era, everyone is gone and only the system is gone. Only the system still remembers its little host, keeps the photo of the little host, and thinks about its host. The last extra chapter really made me cry to death [grievance]

Heal easily and get a good mood

Super good-looking author, come on, wow [adoration][adoration][adoration][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

Highly recommended. The emotional line is obvious and it is a love brain attack. Xiaobai is also very gentle. It is simply not great. The plot is also very good and I learned a lot of knowledge. It is not bad, and even the system inside is very cute. Not to mention the little animals, they are endlessly cute and they are all very sensible. In summary, it is great, great, great [shy] Yes, I suddenly remembered that when I was reading, I found a lot of typos. The author remembers to check it carefully. And there is actually the Hollow Man who I am most interested in. It's great. The emotional line is obviously obvious. But at the beginning, I don't know why, but it feels a bit weird. I hope it can be improved. [Send heart] There are about 90 chapters left before I finish reading. I found that there are a lot of typos. If the author sees it, remember to correct it.

I like [adoration][adoration][adoration] very much, so are there any similar books? [What] [What] [What] I like this kind of novel very much [shy] [shy] [shy] If you want animals, they are pure animals. Is there anything else? Please [blow a kiss] [blow a kiss] [blow a kiss]

Lu Jingyi, who was sitting next to him, had an imperceptible hint of tenderness and affection in his eyes. When he saw Gu Zhixia's concentration and devotion, he naturally took on the task of feeding. He picked up the melon seeds and peeled them skillfully. After a while, he handed the peeled melon seeds to Gu Zhixia's mouth and gently fed her a bite. At this time, Gu Zhixia was immersed in the world of the movie, so mesmerized that she didn't even notice that she was silently receiving Lu Jingyi's careful feeding. She ate with gusto, and every bite was filled with Lu Jingyi's care and love.

I don't think this novel should contain emotional scenes, but I really like Baiwu [shy] Damn Feng Ye ah ah ah ah ah! ! What a beautiful flower my baby is! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I really enjoyed reading this book. It was very fresh. I had never read this kind of novel before. When I was not interested in reading a book, I saw this novel written by the author and immediately became more interested in the novel. I love this novel so much [Sending my heart to you]

The author's writing is good, and the character design of the protagonist is also good. It is possible that at first glance, I felt that Feng Ye was not very good, so I abandoned it. In fact, the author's writing is very good, and it would be better without cp.

It's very interesting, and the ideas are very novel. Most of the ones I read are about male protagonists who don't have a romantic partner. This novel opened up my understanding of this type of novels and gave me a new outlook on life.

Come on, the author, I've just read more than a dozen chapters and I'm urging you to update. It's so good. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]. I really like this type of genre and it has two male protagonists. Come on, work hard [please update]

The portrayal of the protagonist touched my xb.

It's super good-looking, and the male protagonist is particularly handsome, especially when he saves a woman who was abducted by human traffickers. [Like]

Ah ah ah ah, it looks very good. It's my favorite dish. The author is great. Please update it quickly. Please update more. Don't force me to kneel down and beg you [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

The Invincible Universe is super good-looking. I strongly recommend it [Learned it] [Learned it]. It is recommended that friends who are in the book shortage period should read this novel [Learned it] [Learned it] It is very good-looking [Adore] [Adore] [Adore]

Sure enough, I still can't bring myself to read the novel. It's very interesting and I like it very much.

Very good. I will keep following you until the end. Please keep updating. Don't stop updating. I love you.

This is the first time I've seen a two-male story about this kind of subject. I hope you'll like it.