[No system + ability + group portrait + plot flow]
The fall of the gods is nothing but a hoax;
The gift of divine grace turns out to be a curse!
"Li Qingxuan... Do you know the consequences of doing this?!"
"The consequences? When you whipped my soul and cut off my soul, did you ever think about today?"
Li Qingxuan stood in the air with a giant ax in his hand, blood soaking every inch of his skin, as if Shura had descended.
"Haha... It seems that we can't escape this fate after all."
"Come on, defeat me, and you will be the new generation of God Lord. I hope you can lead everyone out of the cage."
"Don't worry, I, Li Qingxuan, swear by your blood. From today on, I, China, will shine in the sky, and no god can offend me!"
"That's it... Let's fight!"
Reader comments
To be honest, this is the first time I have seen "pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger" written in such a non-greasy way! The author did not let Li Qingxuan cheat and crush him all the way. Instead, he interspersed his emotions of being afraid of pain and wanting to survive. This kind of down-to-earth protagonist is really lovable! Moreover, the writing style is very relaxed. Even if it is a tense fighting scene, if you insert a few lines of Li Qingxuan's inner complaints, it will no longer feel depressing in an instant. I have a small request: can there be less heart-wrenching plots in the back? I'm really upset about Wang Yifan's part. Can he be resurrected in the follow-up of QAQ?
Song Gangchuan was so anxious that he couldn't speak. I laughed so much during that part that I cried. I was tricked by Li Qingxuan into beating up his own follower, and I had to take the blame for "protecting friends." This villain was too miserable. I suggested changing his name to Song Gangchuan's Unlucky Everyday Life!
Ouch! The author wrote the famous scene of cheating in such a great way! The part where Li Qingxuan deceived Song Gangchuan's father, from "bursting in tears" to "biting back", the whole process was "serious nonsense", I laughed so much that I rolled on the sofa ~ The writing style is also very decompressive. Whether he is being bullied or in danger, Li Qingxuan's inner complaints can always hit the point of laughter accurately, without any "Gao Wuwen's sense of depression"! Please update! Can Wei Tian "pamper" Li Qingxuan more next time? Watching the scene where he was saved by Wei Tian, I got the idea of "uncle-nephew love", please have more interactions!
Author, you know the rhythm of cool writing, right? ! When Li Qingxuan was buried in the beginning, I thought it was "Hell difficulty starts, it is recommended to restart", but the next second the Chaos God opened his eyes and directly counterattacked. The scene where he beat the bully made me slap the table and shout "Good job! You should be rewarded!" ~ The writing style is very down-to-earth, without any confusing and obscure settings, even a person like me who is "afraid of brain-burning stars" can easily get into the play! My only request: Can Li Qingxuan be given more time to work next time? Watching the part where he was fooling Song Gangchuan's father, I laughed so much that I cried. This "Social Oxygen Syndrome" attribute really shocked me!
Novels written in this style are rare. This is the first time I have read a novel in which the male protagonist has a brain. It relies on small foreshadowings to make people want to follow it - the black energy on Xiao Lan's body, the ax mark on Li Qingxuan's chest. Every time there is a clue, new suspense is thrown up. This kind of "leave a secret" writing method is amazing! Moreover, the language is very straightforward, without any fancy rhetoric, and reading it is like listening to someone tell a fun story.
Help! The author is so awesome at writing famous scenes of cheating! The part where Li Qingxuan deceived Song Gangchuan's father, from "hugging his thigh in tears" to "biting Ji Kun back in the mouth", the whole process was serious and nonsense, I was rolling on the sofa with laughter! Moreover, the writing style is very down-to-earth. Li Qingxuan complained, "I refuse to accept this time-travel script" and "Energy supplements are like knocking on Jin Jiaru". It is completely like chatting with friends, without Gao Wuwen's sense of depression at all. But I have a small suggestion. Can Young Master Li Qingxuan be beaten a little later? I felt sorry for Xiao Lan when he was beaten and vomited blood. At least, let's give the protagonist some "defense"! Also, please give me more information on the training routine in the martial arts studio. Watching him slowly become stronger from being "squishy" is really exciting!
Although it looks awkward in some places, it's quite warm once you get used to it. Author, come on, come on
Just looking at the front, there is no doubt that it is a good book. I hope that the author can fill in the pitfalls in the front [Cool] [Cool]
Unlike most interesting articles on Tomato, this novel is simply a breath of fresh air. It combines the cruelty of the world of martial arts with the small warmth of life very well - one second it is about monsters eating people, and the next second it is about Li Qingxuan and his sister grabbing snacks. This contrast makes the story both emotional and warm. Moreover, the language is very straightforward, without any complicated metaphors, making it very easy to read. Please update please! Can Li Qingxuan get the demonic beast essence blood earlier next time? I want to see him become stronger by practicing martial arts!
The author doesn't look like a novice at first glance. He didn't write the protagonist as a perfect hero. Li Qingxuan is afraid of danger, can be clever, and even "bears a grudge." This kind of flawed protagonist is more realistic; even the supporting characters are not tool-like, such as the somewhat arrogant Xia Mulan, who will be remembered within a few sentences of his appearance. The writing style is also very comfortable, neither slow nor watery, and each chapter has small highlights that can be remembered. Please update! I hope to write more about the daily life of martial arts training in the future. It is really exciting to watch Li Qingxuan's process of becoming a strong person from a weakling!
Although the number of words is still short, the logic of the entire narrative is really good. It is so interesting to watch the interaction between Li Qingxuan and Wei Tian. One wants to make a living, and the other wants to recruit him into the Eagle Guard. The two battle wits and courage, and they have to fight monsters together. I can read a hundred chapters of this series. Will they become masters and apprentices in the future?
Overall, the rhythm control is very good. It is not brainless and logical. I hope that the combat power will not jump in the later stage.
This book is good, especially the change in Li Qingxuan's character. His behavior in Jinshaling is very consistent with that of a normal person. I hope that we can slowly see the transformation of the protagonist in the future. Good luck, author.
To be honest, I like the character of the protagonist. He is so charming. He doesn't have the brains of a holy mother. He will be stubborn when he needs to be stubborn and kill when he should be killed. It's so cool.
I saw someone recommending it in Shuhuang and thought it was quite cliche. Unexpectedly, it was unexpectedly exciting. It was compact and not protracted. The plot was full of ups and downs. The logic was rigorous and there were no flaws. It was really good!
Stunning, a five-star masterpiece [Eating Melon]
Damn it, what a great book, comparable to a 9.5 Or above masterpiece, so enjoyable!
Super good article, I can't stop reading it, I can't stop reading it [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]
Oops, that's good. It's quite a twist. The author is really good at it.
The plot arrangement is reasonable and not unreasonable. The protagonist's IQ is online. The key is that all the supporting characters are also very interesting and have high IQs, which is quite good!
It's not enough to read. Can you update it 10 times a day? Don't sleep, please update it quickly! ! !
When the Chaos God's eyes saw through the black aura on Xiao Lan's body, I got goosebumps! It turns out that the teacher has been a demon for a long time, and there is another hidden reason for Wang Yifan's death. This foreshadowing is too deep, and the author's imagination is too big!
Although it is not too long, it contains a huge amount of information. This book has great potential and I am very optimistic about it!
The evaluation of twenty years of professional bookworms is as follows: Excellent!
The logic is online, and the characters in it are very real, with advantages and disadvantages.
So handsome, love it, love it, hmm! [Love][love][love]
I really like every character in it, they are all vivid and full-bodied, and I am really good at shaping the characters.
It's quite good-looking, the writing and plot are very good, and it's a high-quality masterpiece.
It completely exceeded my expectations. It was very interesting and exciting. You are so good at writing!
To be honest, this is the first time I have seen "pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger" written in such a non-greasy way! The author did not let Li Qingxuan cheat and crush him all the way. Instead, he interspersed his emotions of being afraid of pain and wanting to survive. This kind of down-to-earth protagonist is really lovable! Moreover, the writing style is very relaxed. Even if it is a tense fighting scene, if you insert a few lines of Li Qingxuan's inner complaints, it will no longer feel depressing in an instant. I have a small request: can there be less heart-wrenching plots in the back? I'm really upset about Wang Yifan's part. Can he be resurrected in the follow-up of QAQ?
Song Gangchuan was so anxious that he couldn't speak. I laughed so much during that part that I cried. I was tricked by Li Qingxuan into beating up his own follower, and I had to take the blame for "protecting friends." This villain was too miserable. I suggested changing his name to Song Gangchuan's Unlucky Everyday Life!
Ouch! The author wrote the famous scene of cheating in such a great way! The part where Li Qingxuan deceived Song Gangchuan's father, from "bursting in tears" to "biting back", the whole process was "serious nonsense", I laughed so much that I rolled on the sofa ~ The writing style is also very decompressive. Whether he is being bullied or in danger, Li Qingxuan's inner complaints can always hit the point of laughter accurately, without any "Gao Wuwen's sense of depression"! Please update! Can Wei Tian "pamper" Li Qingxuan more next time? Watching the scene where he was saved by Wei Tian, I got the idea of "uncle-nephew love", please have more interactions!
Author, you know the rhythm of cool writing, right? ! When Li Qingxuan was buried in the beginning, I thought it was "Hell difficulty starts, it is recommended to restart", but the next second the Chaos God opened his eyes and directly counterattacked. The scene where he beat the bully made me slap the table and shout "Good job! You should be rewarded!" ~ The writing style is very down-to-earth, without any confusing and obscure settings, even a person like me who is "afraid of brain-burning stars" can easily get into the play! My only request: Can Li Qingxuan be given more time to work next time? Watching the part where he was fooling Song Gangchuan's father, I laughed so much that I cried. This "Social Oxygen Syndrome" attribute really shocked me!
Novels written in this style are rare. This is the first time I have read a novel in which the male protagonist has a brain. It relies on small foreshadowings to make people want to follow it - the black energy on Xiao Lan's body, the ax mark on Li Qingxuan's chest. Every time there is a clue, new suspense is thrown up. This kind of "leave a secret" writing method is amazing! Moreover, the language is very straightforward, without any fancy rhetoric, and reading it is like listening to someone tell a fun story.
Help! The author is so awesome at writing famous scenes of cheating! The part where Li Qingxuan deceived Song Gangchuan's father, from "hugging his thigh in tears" to "biting Ji Kun back in the mouth", the whole process was serious and nonsense, I was rolling on the sofa with laughter! Moreover, the writing style is very down-to-earth. Li Qingxuan complained, "I refuse to accept this time-travel script" and "Energy supplements are like knocking on Jin Jiaru". It is completely like chatting with friends, without Gao Wuwen's sense of depression at all. But I have a small suggestion. Can Young Master Li Qingxuan be beaten a little later? I felt sorry for Xiao Lan when he was beaten and vomited blood. At least, let's give the protagonist some "defense"! Also, please give me more information on the training routine in the martial arts studio. Watching him slowly become stronger from being "squishy" is really exciting!
Although it looks awkward in some places, it's quite warm once you get used to it. Author, come on, come on
Just looking at the front, there is no doubt that it is a good book. I hope that the author can fill in the pitfalls in the front [Cool] [Cool]
Unlike most interesting articles on Tomato, this novel is simply a breath of fresh air. It combines the cruelty of the world of martial arts with the small warmth of life very well - one second it is about monsters eating people, and the next second it is about Li Qingxuan and his sister grabbing snacks. This contrast makes the story both emotional and warm. Moreover, the language is very straightforward, without any complicated metaphors, making it very easy to read. Please update please! Can Li Qingxuan get the demonic beast essence blood earlier next time? I want to see him become stronger by practicing martial arts!
The author doesn't look like a novice at first glance. He didn't write the protagonist as a perfect hero. Li Qingxuan is afraid of danger, can be clever, and even "bears a grudge." This kind of flawed protagonist is more realistic; even the supporting characters are not tool-like, such as the somewhat arrogant Xia Mulan, who will be remembered within a few sentences of his appearance. The writing style is also very comfortable, neither slow nor watery, and each chapter has small highlights that can be remembered. Please update! I hope to write more about the daily life of martial arts training in the future. It is really exciting to watch Li Qingxuan's process of becoming a strong person from a weakling!
Although the number of words is still short, the logic of the entire narrative is really good. It is so interesting to watch the interaction between Li Qingxuan and Wei Tian. One wants to make a living, and the other wants to recruit him into the Eagle Guard. The two battle wits and courage, and they have to fight monsters together. I can read a hundred chapters of this series. Will they become masters and apprentices in the future?
Overall, the rhythm control is very good. It is not brainless and logical. I hope that the combat power will not jump in the later stage.
This book is good, especially the change in Li Qingxuan's character. His behavior in Jinshaling is very consistent with that of a normal person. I hope that we can slowly see the transformation of the protagonist in the future. Good luck, author.
To be honest, I like the character of the protagonist. He is so charming. He doesn't have the brains of a holy mother. He will be stubborn when he needs to be stubborn and kill when he should be killed. It's so cool.
I saw someone recommending it in Shuhuang and thought it was quite cliche. Unexpectedly, it was unexpectedly exciting. It was compact and not protracted. The plot was full of ups and downs. The logic was rigorous and there were no flaws. It was really good!
Stunning, a five-star masterpiece [Eating Melon]
Damn it, what a great book, comparable to a 9.5 Or above masterpiece, so enjoyable!
Super good article, I can't stop reading it, I can't stop reading it [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]
Oops, that's good. It's quite a twist. The author is really good at it.
The plot arrangement is reasonable and not unreasonable. The protagonist's IQ is online. The key is that all the supporting characters are also very interesting and have high IQs, which is quite good!
It's not enough to read. Can you update it 10 times a day? Don't sleep, please update it quickly! ! !
When the Chaos God's eyes saw through the black aura on Xiao Lan's body, I got goosebumps! It turns out that the teacher has been a demon for a long time, and there is another hidden reason for Wang Yifan's death. This foreshadowing is too deep, and the author's imagination is too big!
Although it is not too long, it contains a huge amount of information. This book has great potential and I am very optimistic about it!
The evaluation of twenty years of professional bookworms is as follows: Excellent!
The logic is online, and the characters in it are very real, with advantages and disadvantages.
So handsome, love it, love it, hmm! [Love][love][love]
I really like every character in it, they are all vivid and full-bodied, and I am really good at shaping the characters.
It's quite good-looking, the writing and plot are very good, and it's a high-quality masterpiece.
It completely exceeded my expectations. It was very interesting and exciting. You are so good at writing!