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It is a very good simulation article. Although the overall context is relatively routine, the setting is novel and not greasy. This may be due to the novice author. In the early stage, there were some problems with inaccurate wording and some incorrect sentences that did not affect the overall reading experience. I believe that as the author grows, it will get better and better, and the future is promising. As long as you keep improving your writing skills, keep the plot from falling apart, and keep updating for a short period of time, this book can be given an overall score of 8.5 Or above. I don't know why the score I saw is only about seven points. I don't read many new books. I don't know if Tomato's new books start from a low score. If not, I suggest that the author check whether he has been maliciously given bad reviews. Finally, I wish the author's new book will get better and better and never get stuck. I also wish the author and all readers who also like online articles a Happy New Year in 2025!

To be honest, the content is quite rich and gives people a very good impression. It is very beautiful, but the poor little ginseng is still too short. I found it at about two o'clock yesterday afternoon and finished it at about four o'clock. But today is the Laba Festival, so I will give it five stars. Happy Laba Festival with the little ginseng [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty good, but the subject of multiple female protagonists is not easy to grasp. This type of simulation type with multiple female protagonists is generally difficult to write about emotions, because in the simulation world, the male protagonist is usually single-minded, but in the real world, multiple female protagonists will make the protagonist look like a scumbag. This kind of plot is so uncomfortable. Generally, in articles about a harem, the male protagonist is a passionate person, so the harem is understandable. I've read a lot of movies with this theme, but the first two or three stories were good, but there were too many female protagonists in the end, which caused the ratings to drop. I'm curious how the author will deal with this contradiction. Don't write a simulation with a single female protagonist, but a reality with multiple female protagonists. This kind of book will not attract those who like to read single female protagonists, nor will it attract those who like to read harems. It will only attract those who like to read Shura Field, but I really feel that there are not many such people. [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] Let me give you some suggestions. 1. During the simulation, you can downplay some of the relationships. I think the second female protagonist is okay. In the simulated world, there is more of a teacher-student relationship. If the male protagonist chooses the first female protagonist, she will only bless her. 2. Except for the first heroine, other heroines should not be too strong in character. The harem needs to be suppressed by the main palace. I think Lin Ran is good😌. The strength of the subsequent heroines should not exceed Lin Ran. Come on finally👏

Interesting dialogue, deep plot, concise short story, it is an excellent work. You can see the author's careful polishing, and the comment area is also very harmonious. It also witnessed the author's change from deputy to full-time writer. Don't be too anxious and follow your own path. It is excellent. I highly recommend book friends to read this excellent work~

Very good simulator article, looking forward to Shura Field😋👍🏻 Will Wei's sister be killed in the end? Then the sister disappeared, Wei turned into a cyber madman and then killed the protagonist? 🤔 That kind of thing is awesome😭

Support it, the plot is reasonable so far and it doesn't look like it will be a drama. The emotional line is also written very well. If it continues to be at this level in the future, it will definitely be above 9 points, and the subject matter is not a traditional fantasy cultivation simulation, it is still worth reading.

It's pretty good to watch. One of the better points is pure love. There isn't a woman in every simulation, bringing him unnecessary emotional trouble. Bonus points. The description is okay. Anyway, it doesn't look laggy.

The plot setting of this novel is very good, and the simulation process is not too much, so one plot will not be too overwhelming. The first world was too hot and there were some jokes in it, so it wasn't boring. The second world is almost boring, but it's also very good, without wasting too much writing. The plot and plot settings of the third world are very good, and the plot is quite large. It can even be read as a stand-alone book. The author believes that this book has great potential, so don't give up. Yours is the only simulation I've ever read. Other simulations are too boring. Just keep at it, you can slowly improve it, but don't give up or speed up the process regardless of quality. As long as it continues steadily, there is still great potential.

Great article. I have been looking for a multi-planet story novel like Yinhu. This novel uses a simulator and uses the protagonist as a link to connect various planets and civilizations. Although the daily life after the simulator does not describe much about the characteristics of the planet, it is still an experience in the simulated life. The shortcoming is that it is too short, not enough to read, and I found that the author also has thoughts about eunuchs. The simulation can also use universes and timelines to connect the world. The heroines of each simulation are very plump. Except for the lack of daily life after the simulation, everything else is perfect.

Yes, the author of this novel is more willing to listen to advice, and it is obvious that the writing is getting better and better in the future. The choices and worlds of each simulation are also quite interesting. You can take a look. If you like this type of novel, you will not be disappointed.

In the first simulation, I looked like I was watching a movie, the image was very strong. Beautiful, love watching.

1. **Plot Attraction**: The storyline is compact and full of imagination. From the social animals of the interstellar company to the accidental activation of the life simulator, to the adventures in different world lines, these settings are very attractive. In particular, the completely different backgrounds and challenges in the two simulations make the whole story full of unknowns and expectations. 2. **Character creation**: The character Zhang Zi has shown different aspects of his personality through two simulated experiences. From a genetic hacker to a prosthetic doctor, his growth and changes have attracted attention. At the same time, the teenage characters who accompany him are also unique, and the development of their relationship adds emotional depth to the story. 3. **Writing and Expression**: The writing is smooth and the expression is clear, and can well guide readers into the story situation. At the same time, the author also skillfully uses suspense and reversal to make the story more fascinating. 4. **Improvement Suggestions**: Although the overall plot is attractive, some details can be more refined. For example, Zhang Zi's psychological changes in different simulations and the emotional entanglement between him and his partner can be further depicted, which can make the story more full and three-dimensional. As a reader, what I now consider to be a work of imaginative and deep science fiction successfully held my attention and provoked my thinking on multiple levels. I hope the author can continue to improve this story and make it even more exciting. I hope not to follow the old path of most books in this part of the book [face covering]

A good book is a good book, but the language is a bit too concise. If it were written like this, it would probably end in a million words. The author could use more psychological descriptions, environmental descriptions, etc. And the emotions are deep, but it is not enough. It is best to simulate the tears that make people cry, give a good ending to reality, and finally look to the future. Finally, my heart is on fire! ! ! !

The content of the second part of the author is obviously less powerful than the first one. The first part probably took the longest time to conceive. The death ending of the second part is quite good, but I personally feel that the emotional line with the second female lead during the simulation process is a bit redundant. There is no father at the beginning. In fact, I think the second female lead can also die directly to highlight the growth of the male protagonist, so that the second mark will not be remembered. Abrupt, second is the third part of this article. At the beginning, the character of the third female enemy is not so reflected. In fact, I feel that the third female character is directly the enemy of Long Aotian, but Tsundere has a crush on it, and then the ending kills the male protagonist for the justice of the human race. It feels better. The set enemy finally becomes the younger brother, which feels almost meaningless. The author writes very well, it is just my personal opinion. If you like it, please continue to update!

There are 4 stories, each with a female protagonist. The attributes and positioning of the female protagonist are not repeated, and she has a distinct personality. The latest one is still being updated, it's the knight and the kitty girl As the male protagonist of a simulator redemption story, the necessary sacrificial attribute is also the most important knife in each section, but if you eat too much, you are not afraid of the knife [face covering] The third story that I personally feel the best is about being a machine but possessing human emotions. The ruthless time wears away the memory, and even a machine cannot escape it. The story covers the love between comrades-in-arms and family, and the ending of the story is unexpected. Of course, what I look forward to the most is the fun of finding a husband and having the harem on fire after each simulation [laughs evilly]

I took a look and found that it is of the same type as the book about the Female Sword Fairy. Although the writing is not as good as the female Sword Fairy, it can still be read. I can't watch anymore. The protagonist's simulation has no subjective initiative at all. It's no different from watching a movie. On the contrary, the protagonist can also enjoy various benefits brought by the ending of the movie. In fact, they are two completely different people [laughs awkwardly]. The rating is too high

After reading the first twenty chapters, I really feel like it. For me, it is really a good masterpiece. I really recommend it. The plot is unique and not cliche. Although there is a heroine, there is no overly cumbersome emotional line. The characters are flesh and blood [crying] It's really good [crying]

Simulation: After turning into flames, Qingmei regrets her whole life Nine-turn large ginseng Simulation plus heaven-like The narrative is smooth, the plot is rich, and the writing is very detailed. The subject matter is not new, but the writing has a fresh feeling. The characters are three-dimensional, and the main characters all have their own charms, which is pretty good. The new book Seedlings, please give it a five-star rating.

Advantages - The plot setting is novel: using the life simulator as the starting point, various simulated lives can be unfolded through different entry selections, integrating science fiction elements with emotional stories, such as genetic technology planet, natural disasters and other plots, which are full of imagination and can attract readers' curiosity. - Delicate emotional description: The emotional portrayal between the protagonist and his childhood sweetheart is relatively in-depth, from childhood companionship to complex emotions after experiencing various experiences, such as misunderstandings, regrets, etc., Allowing readers to feel the emotional changes of the characters and create emotional resonance. - Distinctive character image: The protagonist Zhang Ji has shown bravery, persistence and other character traits in different simulated lives. The image of childhood sweetheart has gradually become more fleshed out as the plot develops, and the character image is three-dimensional, making the story more appealing. Insufficient - Some plots are too fast-paced: In some Sims plots, the development is too rapid, such as from crashing the plane to activating the simulator, and then quickly entering various complex experiences, which may make readers feel a little rushed and lack sufficient foreshadowing. - Improper explanation of science fiction settings: For science fiction background settings such as the genetic technology planet, some content is not explained clearly enough, which makes it difficult for some readers to understand related technological concepts and planet rules.

It's quite interesting🤌. I've seen Chapter 59 so far. The third-person narrative simulation style seems very comfortable. The sense of substitution between the protagonist and the simulator and the communication and propriety of the real world are well written. Some modern Xi'er memes are used properly. It seems that there are no flaws so far. It is a fairy tale. You must try it.

After reading some, I feel that the best written one is the first life, which contains a lot, whether it is the deep relationship between Lin Ran and Lin Ran, or the protagonist's sense of mission as a leader, the ending feels sublimated. However, in comparison, the ending of the second life seems very sloppy and has been laid out for a long time. As a result, the ending is not powerful at all. The ending comes too fast, and I feel that I could write more. Also, although the highlight of this book is mainly in each small story, I still hope that the author will pay more attention to the connection between the story and the main line [Sending Hearts]

It's okay after reading dozens of chapters. It's just that the heroine's reality came a little too quickly, but it's not harmful. There are some minor points but it doesn't affect the viewing experience. Overall, I'd say it's about 9 points. No, bro, you can give me strength within a few chapters after finishing the review. I mentioned earlier that we recognized each other too quickly, but I can still accept it. After all, I don't want to see those protracted passes, but why directly reveal the identity of the protagonist to the second leader of the alliance? First of all, from the foreshadowing of the previous article, it can be seen that the alliance is composed of various civilized planets that Rongguo encountered and saved and recovered along the way after entering the star sea. So if the alliance is still an alliance composed of Rongguo's locals, I think there is no problem in making it public, but it is just a holy show in front of people. But the problem is that it is now an alliance and not the original Rongguo, so why are you making it public? The other member states of the alliance inexplicably have a big daddy on their head. Then without understanding the ins and outs of the matter, a second leader suddenly appears and says he is the savior of the country with the first seat in the alliance? Even if you brainwash others, they will still find it baffling, brother. The author is so excited about writing that he wants to show off to others to give the protagonist a high status? So when I saw this, I still felt that although it was a little bit poisonous, it didn't matter. But then came the operations that made me want to change my review. The classic protagonist and Lin Ran disguised themselves to go shopping, the classic unknown villain hired a murderer to kill, and the classic choice of the protagonist because of an unexpected target was wrong. So what does your previous operation of revealing your identity mean? Disclose your identity to a high position but conceal your identity to understand the public sentiment? Bro thinks that his operation of fighting between the left and right brains is very logical. But these are all trivial matters. What makes things even more confusing is that the Hitman classic simulates the heroine Venia for the second time. They are not buddies. If you can't figure out how they met each other, you can just arrange for Venia to go there when the protagonist wants to revisit that planet. Say that you suddenly want to go back and have a look and bump into each other by coincidence. But what do you mean by using such a ridiculous plot to get them to recognize each other? According to Lin Ran's slightly yandere nature, killing Weniya with one shot would be regarded as a sign of mercy from Lin Ran. Although this is a regrettable incident that would not occur under the arrangement of the novel's author, this kind of classic bloody scene has really been appreciated enough. In summary, this is the first poisonous point in this article that affects people's perception.

It is one of the better books of its kind. The setting of the world view is very complete, the story is also very good, and the characters all have their own characteristics. The only bad thing is the character design of the protagonist. The protagonist will have a different personality in each simulated world, but occasionally one or two clips will give me a sense of déjà vu as a wholesale male protagonist in online novels. The male protagonist in the main world has a very strange design, and has become a wholesale male protagonist, and the emotional line has not been dealt with clearly. Overall, it's a very good book. The above are all my personal opinions. I really like the author's story about the sub-world. Great support for the author.

Not bad, not bad. I have almost finished the second simulation. The writing so far is very good. Whether it is the burning point, the logic, or the unexpected ending, I recognized this work. Come on, author

The whole game is pretty good. The first simulation is really good, but the second simulation is almost boring after the death of the father (you can skip it without any impact). The third one is pretty good so far. I hope it won't suck in the future.

It's really good. The only unpleasant thing is that the author really likes to show off his girlfriend. You know what it feels like to listen to books and listen to him and say that his girlfriend is very smooth [smile]

🍅🍅🍅🍅I think the above is the most innovative book in recent times. Every simulation is very awesome, even if it is written in the real world, it may be a foreshadowing. Anyway, I have been following it until now, and I still want to continue reading! Big cheers for the author!

It's very well written, I hope the author will continue to write well [send heart][angry]

It's really good. I read almost 400 chapters in two or three days. Every story is very good. The only one that I couldn't read was the dream chapter (probably because I've read too many online game novels, so I couldn't get into it when I read the copy, so I just glanced at some parts of it in the early and mid-term). So far, the best chapter is Lin Ran's. I personally I think that after all, the heroine in this chapter was written according to what her girlfriend wrote, and she could easily be domestically abused (only my personal opinion). I think the second best chapter is Yunxiao's chapter. The third is the kitten and the little quail. If I have to divide it, the kitten is 2.5 [Laughing] (my favorite in the kitten chapter is the aunt, and I hope I can collect it). The fourth is the little loli's chapter.

A very interesting work, more whimsical than previous simulators, with seven different worlds and seven close friends who have formed a bond. Each period is a complete life. At present, the latest mecha world has reached a new level. Unlike other simulations that only focus on one goal, the protagonist has experienced an entire era. The destruction of the old federation, the threat of omnic rebellion, and the constant partings and encounters create a unique sense of time. The slight disadvantage is that the protagonist is outside the simulator, and the emotional control of the multiple heroines is not stable. The protagonist's experience in the simulator did not receive good feedback, and he is still a complainer. I hope the author can improve it more.