Two Boys, Unit Essay
Find a book, the system looks for a scumbag to atone for his sins, unit text. In one dimension, a college student eats other people's ducks, then he abandons them, and finally becomes a security guard himself. The second life system came to ask him to apologize.
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Really, the first world was pretty good in the beginning, but after 0 confessed everything, including all the purposes of contacting 1, the plot began to plummet😄, and I was puzzled, why would 0 separate someone who I already knew was not his biological child? This has no logic! ! ! From the perspective of outsiders, after more than ten years, how come you suddenly know that you are not your biological child? Anyway, after confessing, I frowned before reading [face covering] The second world is also a bit weird. 0 Actually confessed that he is a time traveler. Although it has no impact on the heroine, it still... Later, alas, since I found out that the protagonists of the two worlds are the same person, I had a love brain attack, and I almost chose to go to the frontier because of him not to get fame! ! Later, although I knew that the emperor was going offline, I was still disgusted by his offer of marriage [smile]. This plot is really..., I recommend Yipin [smile] [face covering]
It's okay, but the cover is a bit unattractive, the pace is fast, and there's an emotional process. Also, the problem in the first world is his mother. Just because he knew they were gay, his favorability dropped sharply, but he didn't care. Later, he said he cried secretly, and felt that he was whitewashing his mother later. He strongly disagreed at the beginning, but resisted for a while (conversation) later, and then agreed and ignored it. He said it was because he was worried about them. It was too far-fetched. The second world I feel that the story of Gu Yiyi is actually incomplete, and the image is quite full. Later, it was said that it was a time travel, but I didn't go into detail. Gu Yiyi's face and feelings were also revealed at once. It's good, but it still needs to be complete. I personally don't think it's bad. The author should work hard, I hope the writing will get better and better [Thoughts]
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