Earth Has Gone Online?!

I just watched it and I feel pretty good so far. Let me tell you a joke: " A reporter asked the development company of "Earth OL": Is it true that the game's producers will use their permissions to make money in the game? The development company replied: This is false. If you don't believe it, you can ask our employees Bill Gates and Musk.

In the recent chapters about demons, I feel that the quality has declined slightly, mainly because there are more characters and the relationship with the protagonist is not handled very well. In particular, other people's preconceived malice towards the protagonist is a manifestation of deliberately lowering other people's IQ. If this continues, it is easy to fall into a vicious circle of routine pretentiousness and slaps in the face. A good novel should rely on careful characterization of characters and plots. You can think about the specific personality of the characters, and then depict them according to the corresponding plot, instead of blurring the description and using some bright jokes and bad words to cover up the emptiness of the content and the poverty of ideas (this does not mean that these contents appear in the novel). In my opinion, there is still a lot of room for improvement. A modern online novel should not be ignored just because there are few people reading it, but if it is well written, more people will support it. Come on 👍!

@ It feels like watching "Reincarnation Paradise" back then. The book is very good, and it suits my taste very well. The description and foreshadowing in the book and the handling of various plots are very good. Come on! Follow the circle of fans 😳

Sweet, this is my first feeling after reading this novel. It is a very comfortable novel that progresses slowly and is neither impatient nor impatient. I hope the author will maintain his current mentality and write steadily, and his results will definitely get better and better. There is no need to improve the protagonist's strength too quickly. If you master these three elements of exploration, development, and travel, your results will not be too bad. Just like the plot where the protagonist has five skill improvement coupons but only clicks one to revive, he has upgraded one skill. Some people think it's a pity and a waste, but I don't think so. I personally am the kind of person who likes to improve fault tolerance (when playing with a sniper rifle, even though a single sniper kills you immediately with a headshot, I still like to play a three-shot combo with a headshot, maybe it's because I'm too good at it, hahaha). In many cases, staying alive is more important than winning (it depends on the situation), so I think it's not that pity. Secondly, if the author improves the protagonist's strength so quickly, it actually shortens the life of the novel in disguise. Every point of improving the strength is worth every penny, and every penny is spent wisely. It is unnecessary and seems very deliberate and refreshing. You can do this, but it will make the novel lose a lot of fun. The choice depends on the author. In short, it is not recommended to arrange a two-year world destruction before 1 million words. Only the protagonist can save it, and then the protagonist will madly improve himself and then become a deus ex machina. According to the current rhythm, I will write slowly and spread out slowly. The more I write, the more I will write, and the better I will get.

The writing is very good, and there are no outstanding problems. I usually dislike women who are close to the protagonist, because those authors cannot write or describe it, which will only make people feel that it is a big poisonous point, but this book does not have it. The descriptions of the women who appear are also very natural, and there is nothing objectionable. The protagonist has a clear distinction between good and evil. He will not show mercy to those who are malicious to him, he will show kindness to those who are kind to him, and he will show mercy to the poor and help (within his ability). It is the same as "us" in my imagination. There is no deliberately pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot. It is well written, but the update is a bit slow.

I feel, it's hard to say. The two kids didn't feel right when they came out. Of course the book is fine, it just doesn't suit my personal taste.

The setting is very novel, I hope this book doesn't die 😂

It's pretty good. I've been addicted to it a lot recently. I didn't plan to read it when I saw that there were so few people watching it. I was attracted by the subject matter and thought about reading a few chapters. I didn't expect it to be very good.

It's weird that the demons gave it to me for free. I really don't like it, but overall it's pretty good.

It's good, it's overall complete, the logic is smooth, the cheats and abilities are interesting, and the characters have distinct characteristics. I personally can give it 9 points for Pomodoro. It's really hard to find books that can give me a sense of adventure and exploration. It's hard to find even those about adventure or otherworld systems. They're all about campus martial arts. They're pretty good so far, but the number of words is small. Please hurry up and update them 😄 [Sending my heart]