The Seventh Book with Linzi

I feel that the character creation is quite good. There is no OOC or anything like that, but some plot settings are a bit uncomfortable. Why did the employee make a mistake? It is said to be a rich family. There must have been many experiments. And how could the employee find the fault and still want to handle it by himself? Not to mention the exit method has been forgotten. I'd like to inform you that this is outrageous. There are only a few shortcomings that stand out, but other places are still very good. The character creation in the article is particularly good. The dissatisfaction at the beginning was offset by the good impression brought by the character creation. The idea is also very good. Except for the treatment at the beginning, I really like this book. It's good that I'm not invincible

It's okay, just a little green. If Chen Junnan and the others were given a CP, it would be five stars. Okay, pretty good-looking, but not too crazy

It's super good-looking. The main character is a girl. I feel a little bit different from Chen Junnan. But I don't know if there is any CP at the moment. The update is okay. It's exciting and funny.

It's really good-looking, and the storyline is very interesting. This novel is not like other fan fiction, the protagonist is very invincible, but it is real and realistic, and it even explains the reasons for time travel. It can be said that it is already ranked among the top three among Toka fan fiction. I hope the author will continue to work hard. The only shortcoming is: the previous writing is not very good, the first two rounds are too simple [blowing kiss]

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This novel is the best one I have read among the Tokaru fanfics. The characters are distinct and the plots are closely connected. It feels very much like Bugs Squad. However, it ends a bit too quickly. I can't get enough of it. I can't get enough of it. Please give me a sequel!

It's good. The main author is very diligent. All he needs is a small gift and the cute author will give back a fresh chapter [love] [blowing kiss]

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Good looking, recommended, but a bit too bland? The process of laying down some foreshadowing and then opening it up is a bit dull, but it's still very interesting. The protagonist's early words give people a feeling that he is a bit smart, but still not smart enough. But I feel that the protagonist's later words should be very strong. There are a lot of foreshadowings. It feels a bit like hiding something, as if he is hiding something. It should be the truth about time travel. It's nice to watch.

Hmm, what should I say? In the early stage, I might have been a little disgusted with the heroine's character, but later on, after the author filled in all the pitfalls, it felt like it just went with the flow and there was no big conflict. It's okay, not many shortcomings